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Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
5th January 2006, 07:12 PM
Sabhi ahbaab ko naye saal ki nek Khahishaat pesh karta huuN. Bade dinoN baad aap se muKhatib huuN, ye Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. Aapki aara ka intezaar rahega.
---------------------------------- GHAZAL Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya Apne patte to khol kar dekho Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo Waqt bolega bol kar dekho Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho --------------------------------------------------- Praveen Saxena manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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5th January 2006, 07:37 PM
sir,ek bahut hi umda rachna jo khayalon se bharpoor thi aur aur bahut hi umda flow bhi liye hui thi.har tarah se ek umda aur paripurn rachna padh kar behad khushi hui.bas darkhwast hai ki kabhi kabhi yunhi bazm me aa jaya kijiye aap.
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5th January 2006, 10:27 PM
Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko
Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho mere dost praveen, bahut khub... kya kahu... tumhari dost meena |
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5th January 2006, 10:33 PM
Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho
Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho Khoob kaha hai Paveen ji! Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya Apne patte to khol kar dekho Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho WaaaaaH.. bahut khoob ! ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo Waqt bolega bol kar dekho First sher was just tooo good...very well said...! Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho waah..! Dear Praveen ji, Namaste.. kaise hain? ummeed hai sab acche se hi hoga... Bahut hi khoobsurati se chand lafzon me ehsaas piroye hain aapne.. har sher bahut khoobsurat laga....Meri dil se daad kubool lijiyega...Yun hi mehfil sajaate raha kijiye...! Apna khayal rakhiyega....Hope to get to meet u soon....  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th January 2006, 01:27 AM
Namaste praveen ji..
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6th January 2006, 08:15 AM
Chotti beher ki ghazlein khaas pasandida hai meri, shayad isliye ke main unhe likh nahin paata!!
Banno (Afshan) ko aaj miss karr raha huun, choti beher main likhne ki ustaaadi ho gayi thi usse.. Achha laga pad kar.. Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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6th January 2006, 09:30 AM
bahoot achha likha hai Praveen sir
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Re: Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
6th January 2006, 10:35 AM
Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho
Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo Waqt bolega bol kar dekho Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho wah Praveen bhai saheb Namashkar kya khubsurat tohfe se nawaza hai aapne apne chahnewalon ko...!!!ek behtreen gazal...aapki ek trademark gazal..!!har sher chota hai,,magar apne ander bahoot gehri baat samete hai... meri dil se nikli daad kuboool kijiye.... take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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6th January 2006, 11:55 AM
Praveen Ji.......aapki ye Choti CHoti Panktiyan Dil Ko Choo Gai ..........bahut khoob Likha Hai Daad Kabul Farmaiye.......aur yunhi likhte rahiye.....
Kho Gayi Hun Main Najaane Kisme, Kahan Par Jo Dekhun Aanine Mein Tuh TUhi Nazar Aata Hai |
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6th January 2006, 01:13 PM
Praveen Ji,
Aapke naye saal ki nek khahishaat bahut khoob hai. Khaaskar yeh Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho It's true. It requires guts to fulfill ambitions. Thanks for sharing this with us. ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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10th January 2006, 03:17 PM
Lucky sahab
Ghazal pasand farmaane ka shukria. MaiN muaaafi chaahta huuN is lambi ghair haaziri ke liye. Koshish karuuN ga ke aage aisa na ho aur aap logoN se mulaqaat hoti rahe. Preveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Shukriya -
10th January 2006, 03:20 PM
Meena
aapko kuch kehne ki zaruurat bhi nahiiN. Aap iss thread par aayee yahi daad ho gayee. Khush raho Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Re: Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
10th January 2006, 03:23 PM
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aapke kalaamo.n ke baare me ek baat kehna chaahungi ki bahut halke fulke hote hain lafzo .n ko dekha jaaye to.. lekin meaning se vo behad wazandaar aur asardaar hote hain.. ek ek alfaaz poori kahaani kehta hai.. behad pasand aayi aapki ye gazal praveen ji.. lekin humme bhi yahi shikayat hai ki aap bahut kam nazar aate hain..khayaal rakhiye apna ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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10th January 2006, 03:39 PM
Pulkit Bhai
Aapki daad ka to andaaz hi nirala hai. Sach jis tafsel se aapne daad di hai paRh kar dil Khush ho gaya. Tah-e-dil se shukria Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Shukriya -
10th January 2006, 03:41 PM
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Aapki daad ka shukria. Aise hi nigah-e-karam rakhiyega Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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10th January 2006, 03:45 PM
Bhai Varinder
Thread par aapki aamd hui dil Khush ho gaya. Phir aapki daad mili Khushi aur badh gayee. Bohat shukria Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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10th January 2006, 03:46 PM
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Taarif aur hausla afzaai ka shukria Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Re: Re: Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
10th January 2006, 03:49 PM
Manoj Bhai
Aapki daad ka bhi andaaz kuch alag hai aapki hi tarah. Dil khush ho gaya. Bohat shukria Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Shukria -
13th January 2006, 08:55 PM
Sandhya ji
Aapko ye panktiyaaN pasand aayeen jaan kar achcha laga. aage bhi aise ho hausla badhati rahiyega Shukria Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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13th January 2006, 08:57 PM
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Jawaab meiN deri ke liye muafi chahta huuN. Ghazal par daad ka bohat shukria. ummeed hai aage bhi tumse aise Khitaab hota rahega Khush raho Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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14th January 2006, 12:08 PM
parveen ji,
aaj pahli baar aapko pada .ek ek sabad se main to stunned rah gayi.sach bahut hi achha likha hai. shrdh 
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Re: Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
14th January 2006, 01:39 PM
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aapki ghazal bahaut hi khoobsurat lagi...saaf aur seedhe lafzon ka istemal karke aapne iski khoobsurti aur badha di hai...... Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho bahaut khoob kaha hai aapne...yuhin likhte rahiyega aur mehfil ko sajate rahiyega...apna khyaal rakhiye. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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14th January 2006, 04:28 PM
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wah.....bahut khoob rahi ye beher ghazal......ek saaf aur saral tarike se gi gayi thereer ne maano dil ki baat keh di ho....... daad kabool farmayein............... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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14th January 2006, 05:28 PM
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho aisa lagta hai aapne meri dil ki bata kahi hai i'm speechless it was amazing keep writing..Aap Ki Sukoon Dil jab bhi pukaare bula leejiye Ae dost hum door ziyaada nahin aap se, Bus apni palkon ko mila leejiye |
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15th January 2006, 09:00 AM
Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko
Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho khoob...! |
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1st May 2007, 10:06 PM
namaskaaR praveen jee:
aapkii teHreer ke aSh'aar dil ko chhu gaYe ..bahot hi khoob andaaz-e-bayaaN hai aapkaa..aapko paRH ke kuch seeKHne ko bhi milaa khuShii huYii ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho yeH sher bahot hi pasaNd aayaa mujHe..! dil se niklii daad ko qabool kijiYeNgaa apnaa khayaal raKheN aur khuSh raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapkaa dost dhaval |
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2nd May 2007, 07:38 PM
dear bandhu
meine itne din baad dekla ise kitni galat baat hai na  par chalo mil to gayee mujeh padne ko ...i m happy Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho wah kya baat hai sahi baat kahi tufaan se lad kar ek baar dekho phir bahare mil hi jayengi Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya Apne patte to khol kar dekho Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho such kaha ehsaas agar jinda hai to sab kuch hai ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo Waqt bolega bol kar dekho sahi baat kahi ....bas apke jakhm sil jaye yahi dua hai Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho aaj tak to mile nahi ho haan?? kahan tatol kar dekhu bahut acha likha hai apne meri daad kubul karna sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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3rd May 2007, 01:50 AM
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All I can say is "This one is probably one of the best poetries I have ever read" Wish to see u here more often. Warm Regards Susheel इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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4th May 2007, 12:26 PM
Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari
Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Bahut khuub...Praveen Sahib...Chand lafzon mein gehri soch...yeh aap samaan hi koyi shaksiyat kar sakti hai...Itne khuubsurat kalaam ko kaise miss kar diya...meri badqismeti rahi hogi...kabhi kabaar hi sahi...kuchh keh diya kijiey...taaki hum bhi kuchh seekh sakein...khayaal rakhiey apna...Namaskaar! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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8th May 2007, 04:10 PM
Dhaval Bhai
Ye kaise dhoond nikaali aapne itni puraani Ghazal? Aapki is baat ki daad dena chaahunga ke aapne ye zehmat ki, iss nacheez ke liye. Aapki daad aaur tareef ka bohat-bohat shukria. Khaaksaar Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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8th May 2007, 04:11 PM
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Thread par aane aur Ghazal ko daad se nawaazne ka shukria. Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Thread par aane aur Ghazal ko daad se nawaazne ka shukria. Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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8th May 2007, 04:18 PM
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Bad dinoN baad tumse baat hui. Aur bade dinoN baad hi sahI chalo tumne ye Ghazal paRhi. Aur us par itni tfseel se tumhari daad paRh kar baRa achcha lagA. Bohatbohat shukria iss hausla afzah daad ka. Khush raho Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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8th May 2007, 04:20 PM
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Aapki in chand linoN ne mujhe behad achcha ehsaas diya hai. Aapki daad mujhe zaroor aur behtar likhne ka hasla degi. Phir ek baar bohat-bohat shukria ke saath Praveen Quote:
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Chaliye der se hi sahi aapki nigaaheN iss Ghazal par to paR hi gayeeN. Aapki daad ka behad shukria. Ummeed hai bKhair hoN gi. Praveen Quote:
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho meri dil ki gehrai se daad hazir hai......umeed hai aage bhii aapko parne ka moka milta rahega............raj........... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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8th May 2007, 07:36 PM
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho kya baat hai huzuur.. bohat khuub Daad haazir hai... qubool keejiye.... Mayank |
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regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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