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Post ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN - 9th November 2003, 05:57 PM

Aap sab ke saath ek ghazal share kar rahee hoon...batayiega kaisi lagi...i have lost the shayar's name...agar kisi ko malum ho to bata dijieyga...

ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN
ke KHud ko yaad rakhooN, usko bhool jaaooN maiN
farebkaar meiN kuch to hai, koi baat to hai ke
jaan-booj ke itne fareb khaaooN maiN
vo shaqs hai ke naseem-e-sahar ka jhoNka hai
bikhar hi jaaooN jo usko gale lagaaooN maiN
khabhee to ho mere ehsaas kamtaree meiN kamee
kamee kabhee to ho ke use khul ke yaad aaooN maiN


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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9th November 2003, 06:18 PM

Parastaar ji,

Bahut hi pyara dil ko chune wala gazal post kiya hai aap ne. daaad kubool kijiye. Tahe dil se....

Kahin kuch padhaa hua yaad aa raha hai likh raha hoon.

dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho

phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad
tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho


Apna khayaal rakhein.

Manish

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9th November 2003, 06:25 PM

Parastaar ji,

Maine ye gazal suna hai. Iss ke shayer sahaab haiN "Mazhar Inam" ji aur iss song ka music diya hai Hariharan ji ne.

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9th November 2003, 06:28 PM

dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho

phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad
tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho

to jawaab mein yeh padiye...hum aapko mayoos nahin hone deinge...humaari pehli pehli koshish likhne kee...kahiye kaisi lagi...

dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam
mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam

aap har soo ho gaye sanam
ab kabhi na bichadenge hum


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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9th November 2003, 07:02 PM

thank you, manish for the info...I would like to hear it now, that you have told me


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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10th November 2003, 12:33 AM

Mein kuch aur kahu toh keya kahu? Sab kuch dekhte hue ek gane ki bol yaad agayi hein, likhrahi hu. Kuch yu hein,
Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajaabsi chahat jhalak rahi hein!! humari sasho ko choo ke dekho tumhari khushboo mehek rahi hein. Sune toh sabhi honge. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.


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10th November 2003, 12:43 AM

Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha
ajaabsi chahat jhalak rahi hein!!
humari sasho ko choo ke dekho
tumhari khushboo mehek rahi hein.

waah...kya mauke se aapko sab bol yaad aate hain...bahut khoob...nahin shimul maine nahin suna...kaunsi movie ka hai...aur kisne gaya hai...lagta hai aap bhi hamari tarah khoob gaane sunti hain...aapko apni post pe dekhkar itna achha lagta hai...hamesha navazish rakhein...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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10th November 2003, 12:53 AM

Film Name is: Kal Ki Awaz. It's a duet song. At this moment I can't remember who was the singers, but I will let you know when I remember. Mujhe aise hi parte hue yaad ajati hein. Is that strange? I hope not. Jee ha mein bachpan se hi gana sunti ayihu. Shukriya aapka. Take care. God bless you.


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Re: ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN - 10th November 2003, 01:35 PM

PARASTAAR JI
bahoot khoob,,,behad achi gazal se ru-b-ru karwaya hai aapne.,...dil se aap ka shukriya kehte hai....

dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam
mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam

aap har soo ho gaye sanam
ab kabhi na bichadenge hum


behad acha laga aap ko sher kehte hue dekh kar...keep it up....and take care
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dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho

phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad
tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho

bahoot khoob,,behad shandaar line likhi hai aapne...dil choo liya..
likhte rahiye
-MANOJ


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10th November 2003, 05:39 PM

Hi parastaar ji,

Zaroor suniyega album ka naam hai Paigham. Aap ne to bahut hi badhiya reply kiya hai, hume bahut achha laga.

dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam
mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam

aap har soo ho gaye sanam
ab kabhi na bichadenge hum

Bas itne se kaam nahi chalega kuch aur bhi kahiye hum aap se kuch aur bhi sunna chahte hain.

Pyaar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa
Doob kar khud bhee ubhar kay dekho

pyaar kahtay hain kise,
Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kay dekho

mera gum mehsoos karna ho to
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11th November 2003, 04:56 AM

Shukriya Manoj,

Hausla dene ka...ab jo Manish ji ne likha hai uska kuch to uttar dena hee padega...meri yeh doosri koshish dekhiey...

Pyaar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa
Doob kar khud bhee ubhar kay dekho

pyaar kahtay hain kise,
Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kay dekho

mera gum mehsoos karna ho to
meri raahoon se guzar kay to dekho

Manish ji...zara thanda thanda paani pee loon pehle...

ab zara gala saaf kar loon...um hmmmmmmn...

Haan ab theek hai....to lijiey...aapki nazar...

Pyaar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gehra,
hamare dil se kam gehra hai

kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein
hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge

reh jaao hamare dil mein tum
tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge

hmmmnnn! kaho kaisi rahi janaab! arre hamare dil ke hote huye aap kabristaan mein waas karein...jee nahin...parastaar kee parastish aajmaayi nahin aapne...

khayal rakhiey apna...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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11th November 2003, 06:49 PM

dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke to dekho

<dil kay dariya main utaar diya sanam
mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam>

phir tume ho shayad meri talab
tum kabhee mujh se bichad kar to dekho

<aap har soo ho gaye sanam
ab kabhi na bichadenge hum>

Pyaar ka saagar bahut hai gahraa
Doob kar khud bhee kabhi ubhar kar to dekho

<Pyaar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gehra,
hamare dil se kam gehra hai>

pyaar kahtay hain kise,
Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kar to dekho

<kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein
hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge>

mera gum mehsoos karna ho to
meri raahoon se guzar karto to dekho

<reh jaao hamare dil mein tum
tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge>

Parastaar sahiba,
Bahut achhay maan gaye. Bas abb sirf 4 line bachi hai iss gazal ko pura hone mai isse likh raha hoon.

duniya phir se lagnay lagegi dilkas
issay tum meri nazar se to dekho

kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka
meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kay to dekho

Iss ke baad yah shayri puri ho jaiegi. Apna khayaal rakhiega
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12th November 2003, 05:16 AM

Manish jee,

aapka kaha sar aankhon par...koshish karte hain...

duniya phir se lagnay lagegi dilkas
issay tum meri nazar se to dekho

<aapne is kadar dekha hamaari jaanib
ki nazar dilkash to duniya dilkash>

kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka
meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kay to dekho

<is tarah hamara imtehaan na lo
tumhein tumhari chahat kee kasam O Sanam!

Ke tumko pooja tumko hee chaha humnein
Hum tumhaare hain maan bhi lo na Sanam>


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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Smile bahoot khub ji - 12th November 2003, 12:10 PM

parastaar ji aur manish ji
aap dono ne bahoot hi aachi ratah se gazal ko pesh kiya hai.
parastaar ji aap ke likh ne ke andaz se lagta nahi ki aap koshish kar rahi hai maan gayee aap ke jawab dene ke andaaz ko bahoot khoob

likhte rahiye ga

manish ji aap ne parastaar ji ko likhne ka jo hausla diya wakai kabile tariff tha really good
bye and take care both of u


"tum na jane kis jaha main kho gaye"

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12th November 2003, 08:15 PM

khushi,

tumhaari zaroorat thi bus hamari post par...aati rehna bahaar lekaar...shukriya for the tareef....take care


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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Parastaar Ji,

dil kay dariyaa mein utar kar to dekho
tum mujhse mohabbat kar kay to dekho

<dil kay dariya main utaar diya sanam
mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam>

fir tume ho shayad meri talab
tum kabhee mujh say bichad kar to dekho

<aap har soo ho gaye sanam
ab kabhi na bichadenge hum>

Pyar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa
Doob kar khud bhee kabhi ubhar kar to dekho

<Pyar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gahra,
hamare dil se kam gahra hai>

duniya fir se lagnay lagegi dilkas
issay tum meri nazar se to dekho

<aapne is kadar dekha hamaari jaanib
ki nazar dilkash to duniya dilkash>


pyar kahtay hain kise,
Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kar to dekho

<kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein
hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge>

mera gum mehsoos karna ho to
meri raahoon se guzar kar to dekho

<reh jaao hamare dil mein tum
tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge>

kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka
meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kar to dekho

<is tarah hamara imtehaan na lo
tumhein tumhari chahat kee kasam O Sanam!

Ke tumko pooja tumko hee chaha humnein
Hum tumhaare hain maan bhi lo na Sanam>

Bahoot hi achha Duet bangayaa sawaal jwabb ka hai. Thanx aap ke bina shayad yah itnaa achha nahi ban paataa. Mai sukragujaar hoon aap ka aur humesha rahoonga aur shayad hi mai aap ke ehssan ka badla chukka sakoon. Apna khayaal Rakhein, Bye

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13th November 2003, 05:43 AM

manish jee,

is poori ghazal ko aap post kyon nahin karte...boliye yeh jugalbandi hai hum dono ke beech...kya kehte hain...it would be fun...take care...kya baat karte hain...ehsaan to aapne mujh par kiya...ek mauka diya mujhe bhi likhne ka, wo bhi apni rachna mein...main kabhi nahin bhooloongi yeh pehli koshish...i would love to do another one with you...


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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Aap sab ke saath ek ghazal share kar rahee hoon...batayiega kaisi lagi...i have lost the shayar's name...agar kisi ko malum ho to bata dijieyga...

ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN
ke KHud ko yaad rakhooN, usko bhool jaaooN maiN
farebkaar meiN kuch to hai, koi baat to hai ke
jaan-booj ke itne fareb khaaooN maiN
vo shaqs hai ke naseem-e-sahar ka jhoNka hai
bikhar hi jaaooN jo usko gale lagaaooN maiN
khabhee to ho mere ehsaas kamtaree meiN kamee
kamee kabhee to ho ke use khul ke yaad aaooN maiN
bahut khoob kaha aapne paras ji.


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