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9th November 2003, 05:57 PM
Aap sab ke saath ek ghazal share kar rahee hoon...batayiega kaisi lagi...i have lost the shayar's name...agar kisi ko malum ho to bata dijieyga...
ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN ke KHud ko yaad rakhooN, usko bhool jaaooN maiN farebkaar meiN kuch to hai, koi baat to hai ke jaan-booj ke itne fareb khaaooN maiN vo shaqs hai ke naseem-e-sahar ka jhoNka hai bikhar hi jaaooN jo usko gale lagaaooN maiN khabhee to ho mere ehsaas kamtaree meiN kamee kamee kabhee to ho ke use khul ke yaad aaooN maiN gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th November 2003, 06:18 PM
Parastaar ji,
Bahut hi pyara dil ko chune wala gazal post kiya hai aap ne. daaad kubool kijiye. Tahe dil se.... Kahin kuch padhaa hua yaad aa raha hai likh raha hoon. dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho Apna khayaal rakhein. Manish |
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9th November 2003, 06:25 PM
Parastaar ji,
Maine ye gazal suna hai. Iss ke shayer sahaab haiN "Mazhar Inam" ji aur iss song ka music diya hai Hariharan ji ne. Thanks again Manish |
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9th November 2003, 06:28 PM
dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho to jawaab mein yeh padiye...hum aapko mayoos nahin hone deinge...humaari pehli pehli koshish likhne kee...kahiye kaisi lagi... dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam aap har soo ho gaye sanam ab kabhi na bichadenge hum gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th November 2003, 07:02 PM
thank you, manish for the info...I would like to hear it now, that you have told me
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th November 2003, 12:33 AM
Mein kuch aur kahu toh keya kahu? Sab kuch dekhte hue ek gane ki bol yaad agayi hein, likhrahi hu. Kuch yu hein,
Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajaabsi chahat jhalak rahi hein!! humari sasho ko choo ke dekho tumhari khushboo mehek rahi hein. Sune toh sabhi honge. Thanks. Take care. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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10th November 2003, 12:43 AM
Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha
ajaabsi chahat jhalak rahi hein!! humari sasho ko choo ke dekho tumhari khushboo mehek rahi hein. waah...kya mauke se aapko sab bol yaad aate hain...bahut khoob...nahin shimul maine nahin suna...kaunsi movie ka hai...aur kisne gaya hai...lagta hai aap bhi hamari tarah khoob gaane sunti hain...aapko apni post pe dekhkar itna achha lagta hai...hamesha navazish rakhein... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th November 2003, 12:53 AM
Film Name is: Kal Ki Awaz. It's a duet song. At this moment I can't remember who was the singers, but I will let you know when I remember. Mujhe aise hi parte hue yaad ajati hein. Is that strange? I hope not. Jee ha mein bachpan se hi gana sunti ayihu. Shukriya aapka. Take care. God bless you.
 Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Re: ye tajurba bhee karooN, ye bhee GHam uThaaooN maiN -
10th November 2003, 01:35 PM
PARASTAAR JI
bahoot khoob,,,behad achi gazal se ru-b-ru karwaya hai aapne.,...dil se aap ka shukriya kehte hai.... dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam aap har soo ho gaye sanam ab kabhi na bichadenge hum behad acha laga aap ko sher kehte hue dekh kar...keep it up....and take care _____________________________________________ Manish bhai dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho tum mohabbat mujhse karke dekho phir tumhein meri talab ho shaayad tum kabhi mujh se bichaR ke dekho bahoot khoob,,behad shandaar line likhi hai aapne...dil choo liya.. likhte rahiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th November 2003, 05:39 PM
Hi parastaar ji,
Zaroor suniyega album ka naam hai Paigham. Aap ne to bahut hi badhiya reply kiya hai, hume bahut achha laga. dil ke daryaa mein utaar diya sanam mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam aap har soo ho gaye sanam ab kabhi na bichadenge hum Bas itne se kaam nahi chalega kuch aur bhi kahiye hum aap se kuch aur bhi sunna chahte hain. Pyaar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa Doob kar khud bhee ubhar kay dekho pyaar kahtay hain kise, Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kay dekho mera gum mehsoos karna ho to meri raahoon se guzar kay to dekho |
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11th November 2003, 04:56 AM
Shukriya Manoj,
Hausla dene ka...ab jo Manish ji ne likha hai uska kuch to uttar dena hee padega...meri yeh doosri koshish dekhiey... Pyaar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa Doob kar khud bhee ubhar kay dekho pyaar kahtay hain kise, Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kay dekho mera gum mehsoos karna ho to meri raahoon se guzar kay to dekho Manish ji...zara thanda thanda paani pee loon pehle... ab zara gala saaf kar loon...um hmmmmmmn... Haan ab theek hai....to lijiey...aapki nazar... Pyaar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gehra, hamare dil se kam gehra hai kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge reh jaao hamare dil mein tum tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge hmmmnnn! kaho kaisi rahi janaab! arre hamare dil ke hote huye aap kabristaan mein waas karein...jee nahin...parastaar kee parastish aajmaayi nahin aapne...  khayal rakhiey apna...gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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11th November 2003, 06:49 PM
dil ke daryaa mein utar ke dekho
tum mohabbat mujhse karke to dekho <dil kay dariya main utaar diya sanam mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam> phir tume ho shayad meri talab tum kabhee mujh se bichad kar to dekho <aap har soo ho gaye sanam ab kabhi na bichadenge hum> Pyaar ka saagar bahut hai gahraa Doob kar khud bhee kabhi ubhar kar to dekho <Pyaar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gehra, hamare dil se kam gehra hai> pyaar kahtay hain kise, Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kar to dekho <kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge> mera gum mehsoos karna ho to meri raahoon se guzar karto to dekho <reh jaao hamare dil mein tum tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge> Parastaar sahiba, Bahut achhay maan gaye. Bas abb sirf 4 line bachi hai iss gazal ko pura hone mai isse likh raha hoon. duniya phir se lagnay lagegi dilkas issay tum meri nazar se to dekho kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kay to dekho Iss ke baad yah shayri puri ho jaiegi. Apna khayaal rakhiega Manish |
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12th November 2003, 05:16 AM
Manish jee,
aapka kaha sar aankhon par...koshish karte hain... duniya phir se lagnay lagegi dilkas issay tum meri nazar se to dekho <aapne is kadar dekha hamaari jaanib ki nazar dilkash to duniya dilkash> kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kay to dekho <is tarah hamara imtehaan na lo tumhein tumhari chahat kee kasam O Sanam! Ke tumko pooja tumko hee chaha humnein Hum tumhaare hain maan bhi lo na Sanam> gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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bahoot khub ji |
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bahoot khub ji -
12th November 2003, 12:10 PM
parastaar ji aur manish ji
aap dono ne bahoot hi aachi ratah se gazal ko pesh kiya hai. parastaar ji aap ke likh ne ke andaz se lagta nahi ki aap koshish kar rahi hai maan gayee aap ke jawab dene ke andaaz ko bahoot khoob likhte rahiye ga manish ji aap ne parastaar ji ko likhne ka jo hausla diya wakai kabile tariff tha really good bye and take care both of u khushiiiiiiiiiiiii |
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12th November 2003, 08:15 PM
khushi,
tumhaari zaroorat thi bus hamari post par...aati rehna bahaar lekaar...shukriya for the tareef....take care gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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12th November 2003, 09:19 PM
Parastaar Ji,
dil kay dariyaa mein utar kar to dekho tum mujhse mohabbat kar kay to dekho <dil kay dariya main utaar diya sanam mohabbat tumse ho gayi sanam> fir tume ho shayad meri talab tum kabhee mujh say bichad kar to dekho <aap har soo ho gaye sanam ab kabhi na bichadenge hum> Pyar ka sagar bahut hai gahraa Doob kar khud bhee kabhi ubhar kar to dekho <Pyar ka sagar jitna bhi ho gahra, hamare dil se kam gahra hai> duniya fir se lagnay lagegi dilkas issay tum meri nazar se to dekho <aapne is kadar dekha hamaari jaanib ki nazar dilkash to duniya dilkash> pyar kahtay hain kise, Zara meri baahoon main bikhaar kar to dekho <kaise sametoge hamein bahon mein hum to bikhar ke khushboo ho jayeinge> mera gum mehsoos karna ho to meri raahoon se guzar kar to dekho <reh jaao hamare dil mein tum tumhare ghum humare ho jayeinge> kya hota hay humari asar bairukhi ka meri chaahat se ek baar mukar kar to dekho <is tarah hamara imtehaan na lo tumhein tumhari chahat kee kasam O Sanam! Ke tumko pooja tumko hee chaha humnein Hum tumhaare hain maan bhi lo na Sanam> Bahoot hi achha Duet bangayaa sawaal jwabb ka hai. Thanx aap ke bina shayad yah itnaa achha nahi ban paataa. Mai sukragujaar hoon aap ka aur humesha rahoonga aur shayad hi mai aap ke ehssan ka badla chukka sakoon. Apna khayaal Rakhein, Bye Manish |
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13th November 2003, 05:43 AM
manish jee,
is poori ghazal ko aap post kyon nahin karte...boliye yeh jugalbandi hai hum dono ke beech...kya kehte hain...it would be fun...take care...kya baat karte hain...ehsaan to aapne mujh par kiya...ek mauka diya mujhe bhi likhne ka, wo bhi apni rachna mein...main kabhi nahin bhooloongi yeh pehli koshish...i would love to do another one with you... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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