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ajab yeh Hazrat.e.Sarwar kamaal karte haiN - 4th March 2004, 12:30 PM

yaaraan.e.bazm: aadaab!

aaj hee aik Ghazal hu'ee hai. zameen hai :savaal karte haiN, kamaal karte haiN:! Haazir.e.Khidmat hai. ummeed hai k agar pasand na bhee aayee to naa.pasand bhee naheeN ho gee! apne ta'assuraat aur Khayaalaat likhiye. maiN muntazir rahooN gaa. shukriya!

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ajab yeh Hazrat.e.:Sarwar: kamaal karte haiN
dayaar.e.hijr meiN zikr.e.visaal karte haiN!

yeh ham jo Khud se javaab.o.savaal karte haiN
to yooN samajhiye, bayaaN apnaa Haal karte haiN!

hamaare Haal per voh muskuraa to dete haiN
chalo yehee sahee, kuChh to Khayaal karte haiN!

maqaam.e.shauq meiN fikr.e.jafaa, umeed.e.vafaa?
jo ahl.e.dil haiN voh kab qeel.o.qaal karte haiN?

hameN bhee dekhiye! ummeed hai zamaane se!
jo baat karte haiN ham be.misaal karte haiN!

tumhee bataa'o, kaheeN tum ne yeh bhee dekhaa hai
k ahl.e.dard Gham.e.maah.o.saal karte haiN?

Khudaa bachaa'ye tujhe in vafaa ke maaroN se
javaab jiss kaa na ho voh savaal karte haiN!

balaa se gar na milee daad aap ko :Sarwar:
zaraa see baat kaa itnaa malaal karte haiN?

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4th March 2004, 08:33 PM

Salam,
Dear Sarwar Jee, keise hein aap? Na pasand ho aisi toh kabhi ho nehi paayegi, Balke mujhe bohot achha laga aapka yeh Gazal. Waise aapko pata hein ke mein ab kam par hu aur sahi tarha reply nehi kar paarahi hu, I wish I computer was working at this moment!! I will talk to the person who will come and repair by tomorrow morning, will see what he say. Yunhi likhte rahiyega. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Khush rahe yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

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5th March 2004, 11:11 AM

Shimul jee: aadaab!

yeh aap kaa computer kab Theek ho gaa? England meiN aisee der to naheeN honee chaahiye! yeh ko'ee India yaa Pakistan to naheeN hai. Theek ho to baat ho gee.

Ghazal aap ko pasand aayee to meraa dil Khush hu'aa. aap kee daad ke liye mamnoon aur du'aa go donoN hooN.

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5th March 2004, 05:02 PM

Salam,
Dear Sarwar Jee, hope you are well. The thing is we have some one who we know who do the work for us as a friend. Of course we pay him but you see I don't force him that way. Hopefully he will come this weekend & do it. I will let you know when it's done. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

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