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ab tum bhee chale jayoge saya bhee chala jayega
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ab tum bhee chale jayoge saya bhee chala jayega - 24th May 2006, 01:05 PM

ham log kayee baar kaheen is liye nahe ejate ki hamre swabhiman ko chhot lagee. kitne rishte toot jate hain ki swabhiman ko chhot lagee. kitnee hee baar yoon hota hai ham kahate hai us site par nahee jayoonga mere swabhiman ko chhot lagee. swabhiman to tum nahee ho woh tumhara saya hai apne saye ko itna bara kar diya ki use chhorna nahee chhate ? ek saye kee wajah se mandir tak jane se ruk jate ho kyon ke mandir main jhuna hota hai aur aap ap ka saya nahee jhukta. main manata hoon vyaktitva bara karama chaiye swabhiman nahee swabhiman bara ho jaye to prem ko torta hai rishte torata hai abhiman ban jata hai . bas aur kcuh nahee kahana mujhe shayed meree baat ko meree kavita samjha sake

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tum jab kal aye the
mere gar tak
aur ruk gaye the bas dar tak
main sochata raha darwaze par kaun khara hai
der baad main samjha woh tum hee the
apnee parchayee ke sath
aur tuamhre saye ka kad tum se bhee bara hai

tum mere darwaze se aa sakte ho
tumhara saya nahee aa sakta
tum bare bhee hote to jhuk ke chale ate
tumhara saya sar nahee jhuka sakta
mere ghar nahee aa sakta

mere ghar ka har kivar har deewar chhoti hai
har baree sheh bahar se lautee hai
tumahre saye ke pas sab kcuh bara hai
tum tumhare saye ko chor ke kahee nahee jate
isee liye tum bahar ho
saya bhee bahar khara hai

ab tumahre mujh tak ane kee koyee soorta nahee hai
tum mujh se alag sahee
phir bhee tumhe chahta hoon par
tumahre saye kee mujhe zaroorta nahee hai
jo jhuk nahee sakta
mere chhote gharon main ruk nahee sakta
jo ruk nahee sakta
dil use ghar main rakh nahee sakta

main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge
saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega

main muhabbat hoom
yahan jo bhee ata hai jhuk ke ata hai
jis ka saya bara hai
woh saye ko
darwaze se bahar rakh ke ata hai

main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega


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Anil ji

ye aapki ek aur behatareen rachna hai
hum jab bhi aapko parhte hain hume humesha ek naya vichar mil hi jata hai. aapki abhivyakti bahaut hi sateek hai aur gehari bhavnayein hai issme. aapko parh ke sukoon mil ta hai.
   
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Very Very Nice - 24th May 2006, 04:09 PM

Anil Ji..samaj ma nahi ata ap ki tareef kroun bhi tou kaisy keroun?...Itna acha likty ho k mujy us ki tareef k liye words nahi milty k kin alfaaz ma ap ki shayri ki tareef keroun...
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kamyanai - 24th May 2006, 10:51 PM

kamayani bahut khoobsoorta hai apke alfaz jab meree shayree se baat karte hain bahut bahut shukriya man dene ke liye
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shukriya - 24th May 2006, 10:52 PM

dharkan bahut bahut shukriya itana zyada mere kalam se pyar karane ke liye apana khayal rakhana
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25th May 2006, 06:39 AM

is par kya kahun
bus aaj aapne bhaut badha sach kaha hai

sawabhimaan sach mai kayi baar itna badha ho jata hai

ki samjhna hi muskil ho jata hai

ki kya sach mai ise itna badha hona chahiye


shayed nahi

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25th May 2006, 08:39 AM

ANIL ji its really beautiful............bahut sundar aur yah naya andaz bahut pasand aaya aapka .......


ab tumahre mujh tak ane kee koyee soorta nahee hai
tum mujh se alag sahee
phir bhee tumhe chahta hoon par
tumahre saye kee mujhe zaroorta nahee hai
jo jhuk nahee sakta
mere chhote gharon main ruk nahee sakta
jo ruk nahee sakta
dil use ghar main rakh nahee sakta

main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge
saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega


bhaut sundar lines likhi hain yeh aapne........

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25th May 2006, 02:11 PM

tum jab kal aye the
mere gar tak
aur ruk gaye the bas dar tak
main sochata raha darwaze par kaun khara hai
der baad main samjha woh tum hee the
apnee parchayee ke sath
aur tuamhre saye ka kad tum se bhee bara hai


main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge
saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega

main muhabbat hoom
yahan jo bhee ata hai jhuk ke ata hai
jis ka saya bara hai
woh saye ko
darwaze se bahar rakh ke ata hai


Anil ji

ye nahi lagta ki koi kavita per rahe rahi

aisa lagta hai ki kisi mandir mein baith ker koishiksha le rahe hai.

aur aisa lag raha hai hamari chaukhato ke baher invisble se log khare hai jo apne abhimaan ke karan ander nahi aa pa rahe hai

bahut kuch kah diya aapne

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hi - 25th May 2006, 05:27 PM

anilbhaiya har baar ki tarah aap ke is kalaam mai bhi kuchh nayapan hai ,is baar jo topic swaabhiman pe aapne apne khayaal paish kiye hai vo bahut hi umda hai ,mai ummid karta hu aap aise hi likhte rahenge hamesha,aur aap chinta mat karo sab theek ho jaayega
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shukriya - 25th May 2006, 06:26 PM

tumhre pas itnee achhee soch hai sharddha. tab bhee tum ne meree kavita parh ke kcuh socha bahut achha laga. meree yah kavita peera ke lamhon main eeshwar ko yaad karne jaisee baat hai mere liye tum bhee jab rishton se vishwas uthe ise parh ke dekhana achha lagega
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shukriya - 25th May 2006, 06:29 PM

ranjana tum ko achha laga mere liye bahut khushee kee baat hai. is kavita kee shuruat dheemee huyee ab log parh rahe hain ise bahut kripa hai tumahree meree kavitayon par bahut se tum jaise achhe logon ne meree kavita ka rutba barha diya hai
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shukriya - 25th May 2006, 06:31 PM

tum ne kavita ke jawab main kavita jaisee baat kah dee. bahut ooper kar diya mere kalam ko par sach main bahut hee alag man se likhee thee maine bahut hee alag see vyakhayon kee asha bhee thee tum ne pooree kee
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dhanyavad manu - 25th May 2006, 06:33 PM

manu ek bar phir tumhara bahut bahut dhanvavad karata hoon. manu jitna door jitna pas sada rah sako usee fasale tak anzdeek ana rishton ke aise tamashe dekhe pichle dino ke bahut dar lagata hai kabhee lagata hai kcuh log to dushman hona bhee nahee jante tum jaise achhe se ho waise hee achhe se rahana
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ham log kayee baar kaheen is liye nahe ejate ki hamre swabhiman ko chhot lagee. kitne rishte toot jate hain ki swabhiman ko chhot lagee. kitnee hee baar yoon hota hai ham kahate hai us site par nahee jayoonga mere swabhiman ko chhot lagee. swabhiman to tum nahee ho woh tumhara saya hai apne saye ko itna bara kar diya ki use chhorna nahee chhate ? ek saye kee wajah se mandir tak jane se ruk jate ho kyon ke mandir main jhuna hota hai aur aap ap ka saya nahee jhukta. main manata hoon vyaktitva bara karama chaiye swabhiman nahee swabhiman bara ho jaye to prem ko torta hai rishte torata hai abhiman ban jata hai . bas aur kcuh nahee kahana mujhe shayed meree baat ko meree kavita samjha sake

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tum jab kal aye the
mere gar tak
aur ruk gaye the bas dar tak
main sochata raha darwaze par kaun khara hai
der baad main samjha woh tum hee the
apnee parchayee ke sath
aur tuamhre saye ka kad tum se bhee bara hai

tum mere darwaze se aa sakte ho
tumhara saya nahee aa sakta
tum bare bhee hote to jhuk ke chale ate
tumhara saya sar nahee jhuka sakta
mere ghar nahee aa sakta

mere ghar ka har kivar har deewar chhoti hai
har baree sheh bahar se lautee hai
tumahre saye ke pas sab kcuh bara hai
tum tumhare saye ko chor ke kahee nahee jate
isee liye tum bahar ho
saya bhee bahar khara hai

ab tumahre mujh tak ane kee koyee soorta nahee hai
tum mujh se alag sahee
phir bhee tumhe chahta hoon par
tumahre saye kee mujhe zaroorta nahee hai
jo jhuk nahee sakta
mere chhote gharon main ruk nahee sakta
jo ruk nahee sakta
dil use ghar main rakh nahee sakta

main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge
saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega

main muhabbat hoom
yahan jo bhee ata hai jhuk ke ata hai
jis ka saya bara hai
woh saye ko
darwaze se bahar rakh ke ata hai

main jan gaya hoon main tumhe bulta rahoonga
tumhara wazood saye ko
chor ke nahee ayega
ab tum bhee chale jayoge saya bhee chala jayega
mere ghar koyee nahee ayega


Anil ji namaskaar

aapka apna alag hi style hai likhne ka, har baat ko jaisi ki taisi keh dene ka hunar aap hi meiN hai, seede saral lafzoN meiN har baat keh detey hai aap...yehi aapki kalam ki khoobi hai.

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