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mashoori..the advertisement - 20th April 2009, 02:24 PM
ethe har koi apni hi cheez bechda.
koi bechda imaan,koi tameez bechda.
kite paisea lyi doctor mareez bechda.
koi zindgi te koi saleeb bechda.
koi filmi sitara hai kameez bechda.
koi kutte de busicuita nu v keh keh lazeez bechda.
koi kehnda thanda pio,
sir uttha k jio.
zehar thodde lyi kalakaar thodda apna azeez bechda.
koi karda v hai himayt os jwaani di dso,
jo ghar di tangi khatir apni har reejh vechda.
"deep" manniye taan j koi kre mashoori ohna di v,
ghar chalavan lyi mitti de khidaune jo gareeb vechda...

ethe har banda apni hi cheez bechda...
koi bechda imaan......
   
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20th April 2009, 07:20 PM
Bahut khoob bhai....

Jitna b mujhe samajh aaya , kaafi touchy tha...
Dil bhar aaya aapki ye rachna padhkar...

Thanks 4 sharing...
   
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Deep ji lajwaab. Kadi kadi enna kamaal kar jaandey oN ke tuhaadi kalam chumman nu man kardaa hai. Wasdey raho. Har shabd bemisaal si

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thanx g.... mehrbani.....thanx 4 reading me................................................ ....
   
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thanx tilkji.. jina chir tsi ni pad'de inj lagda klaam flop gya... mehrbani..
   
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Its superb!!...punjabi thodi thodi aati hai mujhe, bohat accha likha hai aapne...bohat hi khoobsurti se bayaan kiya hai aapne, zindegi ki kadwi sacchai ko...

Sad but true...sab kuch bikta hai yahaaN.........

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20th April 2010, 10:37 PM
Kya kahne jee tusi to bahut hi changa aur vadiyaa likhiyaa si....

tuhadi sari ki sari line lajaab lagiyaa.... bahut sachi kaha aapne jee..
Tuhadi is kalaam per dil se daad ......

Kya keh diya jee sade dil da lag gaya...

ethe har koi apni hi cheez bechda.
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Jeete raho yaara...

likhate raho.......
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ethe har koi apni hi cheez bechda.
koi bechda imaan,koi tameez bechda.
kite paisea lyi doctor mareez bechda.
koi zindgi te koi saleeb bechda.
koi filmi sitara hai kameez bechda.
koi kutte de busicuita nu v keh keh lazeez bechda.
koi kehnda thanda pio,
sir uttha k jio.
zehar thodde lyi kalakaar thodda apna azeez bechda.
koi karda v hai himayt os jwaani di dso,
jo ghar di tangi khatir apni har reejh vechda.
"deep" manniye taan j koi kre mashoori ohna di v,
ghar chalavan lyi mitti de khidaune jo gareeb vechda...

ethe har banda apni hi cheez bechda...
koi bechda imaan......


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