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kaise kahu.n mujhe aapki aadat nahi hai ab(GAZAL) -
30th March 2010, 03:58 PM
sabhi dosto ko raj ka adaab, namaskaar or sat sri akaal.....dosto ek gazal ke saath hazir hoon, umeed karta hoon aapka pyar milega....mere sabhi dosto ke naam mera ye kalaam.....
kaise kahu.n mujhe aapki aadat nahi hai ab or jooth bolne ki mujh mei.n himmat nahi hai ab dekho mujhe tum ab deewana na samjhna jo pehle hua karti thii wo halat nahi hai ab jab chahe mangna mere honto se hasi tum khushiyo.n ko mere ghar se rakabat nahi hai ab gar ho sake to khud hi apna daman sambhalna zamane ke saath hoon mujh me sharafat nahi hai ab wo pehle sa janoon wo pagalpan nahi raha magar main ye nahi kehta ke aapse mohabat nahi hai ab mumkin hai mere lafzo.n me kaanto ki chuban ho mere ehsaaso.n me kaliyo.n ki nazakat nahi hai ab rakeebo.n ko maine jab se seene liya lagaa habibo.n se bhi 'Raj' ko nafrat nahi hai ab.... aapki raye ka muntzir.....aapka Raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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30th March 2010, 04:37 PM
big B:
Pranaam! sach maaniYe aapki ees koShiSh ko deKh kar aaj itni KhuShii ho rahiiN hay.. ki maiN yahaaN bayaa.N nahiiN kar paa rahaa.. saath meN aapki Ghazal paRh ke aaNKheN jaise Thehar gayiiN.. bahot hi dard hay lafzoN meiN.. har Sher bahot kuch keh rahaa haii... aapse merii darKhaaSt yahee hai kii aage bhee bazm ko apnaa waQt dete raheN.. apni koShiShoN ke Zar'iiYe bazm ko sajaate raheN aage bhee..! apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raKheN.. aapki agli Ghazal ke iNtezaar meiN.. ! aapka ChhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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30th March 2010, 05:08 PM
Rajveer jee namaste,
aapki yeh ghazal mujhe bahut achhi lagi ... har ek lafz mein sachai hai ....waqt ke saath saath Insan ke andar aisa soch to aahi jata hai ...... aaj usi sochko aapki kalam se padh kar achha laga..... yun to saare aashar bahut umdaa hai ......... magar yeh dono mujhe apnsa laga wo pehle sa janoon wo pagalpan nahi raha magar main ye nahi kehta ke aapse mohabat nahi hai ab rakeebo.n ko maine jab se seene liya lagaa habibo.n se bhi 'Raj' ko nafrat nahi hai ab.... daad kabul kijiye DuaoN ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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30th March 2010, 06:13 PM
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Good one Raj, this was excellent mumkin hai mere lafzo.n me kaanto ki chuban ho mere ehsaaso.n me kaliyo.n ki nazakat nahi hai ab किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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30th March 2010, 06:37 PM
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30th March 2010, 06:37 PM
jab chahe mangna mere honto se hasi tum
khushiyo.n ko mere ghar se rakabat nahi hai ab mumkin hai mere lafzo.n me kaanto ki chuban ho mere ehsaaso.n me kaliyo.n ki nazakat nahi hai ab Nice One........Rajveer Ji......bahut khoob ! har ashaar apna sa dard bayaan karta laga mujhe........behtreen khayal aur umdaa adaayegi....ne samaa baandh diya.....yeh do sheyr aur maqtaa meri pehli pasand ban gaye.....nice creation....yunhi likhte rahen...khush rahen... tahe dil se daad hazir hai........qubuul farmaayen..... apna khayal rakhen.... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st March 2010, 12:36 AM
Wah wah Rajveer saheb wahhhhhhhhhh..........kya baat hai janab khush kar diya aapke is sher ne kya badi baat kehdi aapne.......
gar ho sake to khud hi apna daman sambhalna zamane ke saath hoon mujh me sharafat nahi hai ab Aapke is aala sher ke liye karodo dad kabool kare......... Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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2nd April 2010, 01:00 PM
sabhi dosto ka bhut bhut shukria jo aapne meri gazal ko apna keemti waqt diya....Raj........
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2nd April 2010, 01:47 PM
dekho mujhe tum ab deewana na samjhna
jo pehle hua karti thii wo halat nahi hai ab wo pehle sa janoon wo pagalpan nahi raha magar main ye nahi kehta ke aapse mohabat nahi hai ab wah wah maza aa gaya rajveer saheb....kya likha hai.... sari ghazal hi bahut badhiya hai...lekin yeh do sheyr khaas lage......bahut khaas...yuN laga jaise meri hi baat kisi ne keh di ho.....maza aa gaya saheb... dil se daad qubuul kijiyega... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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3rd April 2010, 11:05 PM
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Aur dosto ke bare me to pata nahi........par mera yeh manna hai ke aapki thread par agar 5 ya 10 replies ho aur sirf yeh kaha jaye "Aap sabka shukriyaa.N dosto", to badi mayusi hoti hai......... " Maine kuch galat kaha ho to nadaan samajh kar maaf kar de............ Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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11th April 2010, 11:57 PM
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namaskaar rajveer ji aapko bazm mein dekh kar bahuttttttttttttttttttt jayada khushi hue, kitni khushi hue main expalin nahi kar sakti. aapki gazal har baar ki tarah umda, lajwaab....ek ek sher dil ke kareeb raha, aapse iltija hai ki aap bazm mein aate raha kijiye aur hum sabko mokka dijiye ki hum aapke ahsaasoN se ru-ba-ru hote rahe aur aapse kuch seekhtey raheN, aapne hume shuru se hi bahut sikhaya hai aur aage bhi yeh umeed rahegi ki aap hamara saath deNge. apne ahsaas hum sabse share karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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shukria -
13th April 2010, 03:00 PM
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13th April 2010, 03:26 PM
Raj....
Its a good one............................ |
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16th June 2010, 07:54 PM
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16th June 2010, 08:11 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob achhi lagi aapki peshkash sada ki tarah khaas taur par makta bahut pasand aaya likhte rahiye duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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17th June 2010, 01:28 AM
Rajveer sahab Aadaab!
Sahab aapki yeh Gazal bahut khoob rahi..... Pahele bhi padh chuka tha par waqt ki tangi ki wajah se reply nahi de paya tha......... Aapki is Gazal ke yeh sher mujhe behad pasand aaye ....... gar ho sake to khud hi apna daman sambhalna zamane ke saath hoon mujh me sharafat nahi hai ab wo pehle sa janoon wo pagalpan nahi raha magar main ye nahi kehta ke aapse mohabat nahi hai ab mumkin hai mere lafzo.n me kaanto ki chuban ho mere ehsaaso.n me kaliyo.n ki nazakat nahi hai ab YouNhi likhate rahiye...... Bazm ki ronak banaye rakhiye..... Khush rahiye...... Khuda Hafez....... 
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26th June 2010, 07:49 PM
Aadaab Raj Sahab
Maafi chahta hoon ki der se reply kar raha hoon ab yanha ana kam hi hota hai, ab yanha aya to aapke itne khubsurat ehsaso se rubaru hua ese hi likhte rahiye aur yanha aate rahiye khaaksaar ki daad kubool kijiye.....Ijaazat Quote:
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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26th June 2010, 11:50 PM
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Tum nae to sab ko charoan khanae chit kerdiya waah bahut achchi ghazal hai Main to waqayee dil sae tumhari is khoobi ko niharti hoon Razia |
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28th June 2010, 09:44 PM
kashif bhai or razia ji ko khaakhsaar ka adaab or bhut sara pyar.....aapne is nacheez ko itni ijjajat bakshi so main aap dono ka teh dil se shukar guzaar hoon, umeed hai aindah bhi aapka saath milta rahega....Raj....
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