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Na Jane Kyun Is Mod Pe Tanha Kiye Jaa Rahe Ho.. - 22nd June 2009, 03:45 AM

DEarest SDC friends,

doston aaj apke samne ek kavita pesh kar raha hun, halanki is kavita ko maine kareeb 1 saal pehle likha tha, is poem ke jazbaat thode juda se hain, par kyunki yeh meri shuruati kavitaon me se ek hai toh shayad apko iski rhyming kuch ajeeb si lage, koi gustakhi ho toh muaaf kijiyega..... exams ke karan nayi kavita likhne ka waqt hi nahi mil paa raha hai, isliye yeh ek purani kavita ap logon ke hawale hain..

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yun tanha tanha chale jaa rahe ho,
zindagi se ho khafa ya hampe naarazgi jata rahe ho,
jaante ho hamein aadat hai tumhari muskurahaton ki,
isliye hoke udaas hame tadpaaye jaa rahe ho

zara dekh bhi lo ek nazar hamri taraf,
yun pher ke chehra kyu dil dukhaye jaa rahe ho,
nibhai hai hamne mohobbat har pal tumse,
phir kyun hamein bewafa kahe jaa rahe ho,

zamana to leta hai imtehaan har mohobbat ka,
par tum to zamane se bhi zaalim huye jaa rahe ho,
jaante ho ki tut ke bikharna toh fitrat hai is dil ki,
phir bhi isay thes pahuchaye jaa rahe ho

main toh hairaan hun tumahri ada-e-Qatl par,
khud dete ho zakhm aur khud hi dawa lagaye jaa rahe ho,
karke wada sath chalne ka umr bhar,
na jane kyun aaj tum is mod pe tanha kiye jaa rahe ho..


यूँ तनहा तनहा चले जा रहे हो,
ज़िन्दगी से हो खफा या हमपे नाराज़गी जता रहे हो,
जानते हो हमें आदत है तुम्हारी मुस्कुराहटों की,
इसलिए होके उदास हमें तडपाये जा रहे हो,

ज़रा देख भी लो एक नज़र हमारी तरफ़,
यूँ फेर के चेहरा क्यूँ दिल दुखाये जा रहे हो,
निभाई हमने मोहोब्बत हर पल तुमसे,
क्यू फिर हमें बेवफा कहे जा रहे हो,

ज़माना तोः लेता है इम्तेहां हर मोहोब्बत का,
पर तुम ज़माने से भी जालिम हुए जा रहे हो
जानते हो की टूट के बिखरना तोः फितरत है दिल की,
फिर भी इसे ठेस लगाये जा रहे हो,

मैं तोः हैरान हूँ तुम्हारी अदा-ऐ-कत्ल पर,
ख़ुद देते हो ज़ख्म और ख़ुद दवा लगाये जा रहे हो,
करके वादा साथ चलने का उम्र भर,
न जाने क्यूँ आज तुम इस मोड़ पे तन्हा किये जा रहे हो......

Nalin - The Lost Poet



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Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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25th June 2009, 04:42 PM

Doston Apke Comments Ki Kab Meherbaani Hogi...............accha Hai Ya Bura Hai, Jo Bhi Hai, Kuch Toh Boliye.................



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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NaliN Jii..........

Firstly i want to ask you why are you posting? I mean what do you want by your posts..

Agar aap tarif ke liye likhate hai?

If yes " to dost aapko phir apni achche se achchi post likhani hogi aur kadi mehnat kerni hogi...

If No" to phir logoN ko comments karne ke liye request na karo...

agar aapki post really kisi ke dil ko chu jaye to woh aapko replly karenga hii.. so friend
koyi replly na kare to nirash nahi hote aisa hone per aapko chahiye aur bhi zid se aur bhi lagan se behtarin likhker logon ke dil ko jitna chahiye....

Meri baaten buri lagi ho to mujhse direct keh sakte ho... may aisi baaton ka katai bura nahi manta... Ok take care aur apne exams mein dyan dijiye....


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Uffff, Itna Gussa.............. - 25th June 2009, 11:43 PM

@ SDC members, doston khwahish ji ko behad shikayat hai ki maine apni thread pe extra posts kyun karta hun, ap logon ko baar baar dawat kyun deta hun ki ap mere thread par aayiye, agar ap sab ko bhi mera yun dil se apko bulana bura lagta hai toh ap bhi khwahish ji ki tarah apne vichaar is thread pe de sakte hain.......

@ Khwahish , Oh My god, Someone's really angry, just for ur information too much anger cause high BP and also leads to gray hairs, he he he, as far as my posting issue is concerned, i guess i dont need to answer, it is quite obvious that, i write so that people get to read and comment on it,
ab khwahish ji kya karen ham toh yunhi chote-mote shayar hain, aise hi kuch bhi likhte rehte hain, apki tarah koi bade fankaar toh nai hain, isliye mehfil mekis tarah pesh aaye, yeh bhi hamein aat nahi, zara badtameez kism ke hain hum, kher ab ap jaise logon ka saath milega toh ham bhi zarur sudhar jaayenge, aur aage se ek bhi akshar post karne se pehle 100 martaba sochenge................ waise jahan tak mujhe jankari hai, SDC ke rules and regulations me aisa kahin bhi nahin likha hai ki, ap kisi ko apne thread pe aane ki dawat nahi de sakte.........
kher, mujhe lagta hai apke dil ko kafi chot pahuchi hai, toh janab ab apne hamari galti toh bata hi di hai, toh zarur koi saza sunane ka intezam bhi kiya hoga..............

hamein intezar rahega apki saza ka,....................bahut aacha laga ki apne itna samay nikal kal kar, mujh jaise chhote se shayar pe apna dhyan lagaya....

apke andaaz ne hame wakai behad mutasir kiya hai..

apka... apna...

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NaliN Jii..........

Firstly i want to ask you why are you posting? I mean what do you want by your posts..

Agar aap tarif ke liye likhate hai?

If yes " to dost aapko phir apni achche se achchi post likhani hogi aur kadi mehnat kerni hogi...

If No" to phir logoN ko comments karne ke liye request na karo...

agar aapki post really kisi ke dil ko chu jaye to woh aapko replly karenga hii.. so friend
koyi replly na kare to nirash nahi hote aisa hone per aapko chahiye aur bhi zid se aur bhi lagan se behtarin likhker logon ke dil ko jitna chahiye....

Meri baaten buri lagi ho to mujhse direct keh sakte ho... may aisi baaton ka katai bura nahi manta... Ok take care aur apne exams mein dyan dijiye....



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Waaaaah nalin bhai.. Bahut he khoobsoort andaaz hain roothe hue ko manaane k.. Mujhe bahut achhe lage.. Aur sharminda hu k itni late reply kar raha hu... Btw khwaish g ki baato ko dil se samajhne ki koshish karo.. Jab unhone aapka ye thread dekha hoga to Shayad unse koi rootha hua hoga jisko wo mana nahi paaye.. Aur aapki taang kheech di.. Bura mat maaniyega.. Wo dil k bahut achhe hain.. Aur aap bhi.. god bless u ... keep writing and sharing..
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@ SDC members, doston khwahish ji ko behad shikayat hai ki maine apni thread pe extra posts kyun karta hun, ap logon ko baar baar dawat kyun deta hun ki ap mere thread par aayiye, agar ap sab ko bhi mera yun dil se apko bulana bura lagta hai toh ap bhi khwahish ji ki tarah apne vichaar is thread pe de sakte hain.......

@ Khwahish , Oh My god, Someone's really angry, just for ur information too much anger cause high BP and also leads to gray hairs, he he he, as far as my posting issue is concerned, i guess i dont need to answer, it is quite obvious that, i write so that people get to read and comment on it,
ab khwahish ji kya karen ham toh yunhi chote-mote shayar hain, aise hi kuch bhi likhte rehte hain, apki tarah koi bade fankaar toh nai hain, isliye mehfil mekis tarah pesh aaye, yeh bhi hamein aat nahi, zara badtameez kism ke hain hum, kher ab ap jaise logon ka saath milega toh ham bhi zarur sudhar jaayenge, aur aage se ek bhi akshar post karne se pehle 100 martaba sochenge................ waise jahan tak mujhe jankari hai, SDC ke rules and regulations me aisa kahin bhi nahin likha hai ki, ap kisi ko apne thread pe aane ki dawat nahi de sakte.........
kher, mujhe lagta hai apke dil ko kafi chot pahuchi hai, toh janab ab apne hamari galti toh bata hi di hai, toh zarur koi saza sunane ka intezam bhi kiya hoga..............

hamein intezar rahega apki saza ka,....................bahut aacha laga ki apne itna samay nikal kal kar, mujh jaise chhote se shayar pe apna dhyan lagaya....

apke andaaz ne hame wakai behad mutasir kiya hai..

apka... apna...

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Nalin ji....yeh Ghussa hone ki baat nahi hai.... Sameer ji ne... sirf....aapko samjhane ki koshish ki hai.....yaha koi zabardasti nahi hai....aap bahut acha likhte hai....likhne mai hamesh koshish karte rehna hota hai....aap toh kitno se acha likh lete hai....isliye naraz nahi hote....aap se sab ko piyar hai....aur apne ko samjhana bhi padhta hai....aap mujhe bhi samjha sakte hai....main aapko bhi samjha sakta hu....phir ghussa hone ki jagha kaha reh jaati hai....aapki kitni kavitaao ki sameer ji ne taarif bhi ki hai....tab kiyon nahi ghussa aaya aapko.....jaha piyar hota hai.....wahi kaha bhi jata hai...yeh baat aapko jaanni chahiye....maine yeh sab koi waqalat ke lehze mai nahi kaha hai....yeh sdc ke sbhi members ke liye hai....yeh ek parivaar hai....sab ko ....sab se pyaar hai...




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Iss thread pe vaise hi ruka tha, jab padna shuru kiya to ruka hi nahi ant tak. Uoo.n koi paarkhi to nahi hoo.n mai.n na hi zyada liyaqat hai mujhme lekin baat to maloom hai ki hunar ko kaise jancha jaata hai...... Aapki Lekhan shaili bahut achhi hai aur mujhe kaafi pasand bhi aayee. Lekin dost daawo.n ka bharam rkhna aur nibhana do Alag Alag cheeze.n hai.n. Aapko to asal mei.n khush hona chaahiye ki kisi ne aap pr tippani to ki aur jo ki vo kis qadar Khoobsoorat ki.
Likhe ka sambandh swtantrata se hai, maine jo bhi likha agar pasand na aaye to bejijhak isse ignore kar dijiyega aur agar Achha lage to ek baar soochiyega zaroor. Kisi ne Aapki behtari ke liye Kuch Waqt nikla hoga to aap apne aap hi important hai.n. Umm'eed Karta hoo.n ki mera ye likhne ka uddeshya safal hoga...
Hamesha likhte rahe.n aur har baar aap behtar se behtreen ho.

Nacheez,
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vikram jee, apki baaton pe gaur farmaya maine aur inko samjha bhi........... bahut bahut shukriya apka
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Iss thread pe vaise hi ruka tha, jab padna shuru kiya to ruka hi nahi ant tak. Uoo.n koi paarkhi to nahi hoo.n mai.n na hi zyada liyaqat hai mujhme lekin baat to maloom hai ki hunar ko kaise jancha jaata hai...... Aapki Lekhan shaili bahut achhi hai aur mujhe kaafi pasand bhi aayee. Lekin dost daawo.n ka bharam rkhna aur nibhana do Alag Alag cheeze.n hai.n. Aapko to asal mei.n khush hona chaahiye ki kisi ne aap pr tippani to ki aur jo ki vo kis qadar Khoobsoorat ki.
Likhe ka sambandh swtantrata se hai, maine jo bhi likha agar pasand na aaye to bejijhak isse ignore kar dijiyega aur agar Achha lage to ek baar soochiyega zaroor. Kisi ne Aapki behtari ke liye Kuch Waqt nikla hoga to aap apne aap hi important hai.n. Umm'eed Karta hoo.n ki mera ye likhne ka uddeshya safal hoga...
Hamesha likhte rahe.n aur har baar aap behtar se behtreen ho.

Nacheez,
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vikram jee, apki baaton pe gaur farmaya maine aur inko samjha bhi........... bahut bahut shukriya apka

Shukriya Nalin jee mujhe samjhne ke liye......


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