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doston! kuch madad - 19th August 2006, 11:23 PM

Doston! Kai sare aalaa darje ke mash hoor shayar aur kaviyon ko dheere dheere sanjh ki kirano ki maanind padha hai...
Gulzar Sahab bhi unmein se ek hai .... par aaj unki kuch lines ke ahsaas aur bhavo ko mien samajh nahi pa raha hu !
aap sabhi se gujharish hai ki ,krapaya gaur farmaye aur agar koi in panktiyon mein chhupe emotions ko sidhe lafjo mein kagaj pe utaar ke pesh kare to shukragujar rahunga!!!!

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Subah tak jhal gaya tha wo canvas,
raat bikhri hui thi kamre mein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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in kaviyo ki kapna ke chakkar me mat pado. inki soch badi gahhri hoti hai. ye aasan si baat ko kabhi ithne kathinai se samjhate hain ki smajh na aaye or kabhi ithni khoobsurti se badi kathin baat ko kah jate hai.n ki wo baat turant samajh aa jaye.


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jab bhi koi bada shayar aisi cheez likhta hai jo samajh nahi aati hai, tab hum jaise log shayad yahi kehte ki "BADI GEHRI BAAT LIKHI HAI"......................... aisa hota isliye,,, hamesha yeh nahi samajhna chahiye ke bada shayar hamesha hi achchi kavita likhe...... be original my dear friend...
   
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21st August 2006, 12:07 AM

aap shayad sahi bhi ho doston .. bt jitna Gulzar sahab ko meine padha hai ... unki sabhi najm, triveniya aur gazale .... kan kan mein basne wale ek rishten ko bayan karte hai .. so kuch to hai iske piche ... jiske aage meri samajh dhoka de rahi hai .. khair.... aap dono ka shukriya... ki ek najar to aapne bhi is dali...
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