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1st September 2014, 04:17 AM

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wwwwwwwwaaaaahhhhhhh !! superbbbbbbbbb !!
zabardast pur-lutf sher kaha Ananthpak sahab !!! maza aa gaya !! dheron dheron daad aap ko !!
chaliye, rind-bahana-fund mein mera adna sa contribution, aap ki ijaazat se :
mausam-e-bahaar
saaqi ka israar
mehbooba ka inkaar
biwi se takraar
office ki maaraamaar
cricket mein haar
happy hour

on a serious note, sharaab peene ke bahaanon par, Ghalib ke 2 behtareen sher yaad aate hain ...
"ghalib" chhuti sharaab par ab bhi kabhi kabhi
peetaa hooN roz-e-abr-o-shab-e-maahtaab meiN
-ghalib
piyooN sharaab agar khum bhi dekh looN do chaar
ye sheeha-o-qadah-o-kooza-o-suboo kya hai
- ghalib
Bohat bohat shukriya Zarraa sahab ....hahahahahaha...rind-bahana-fund ka account main achha khaasa ezaafa kar diya aap k cobtribution ne....infact main ghalib sahab ki pehli sher ko yaad hi kar raha tha ki aap ka comnent padha...aap ne bhi wahi sher share kiya yahan thanx for the sharing





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Main mai se Main ko bhool jaata hun
Har subah sochta hun, k raat baada-khaana fazool jaata hun
na gaya kabhi ibadat k liye mandir ya kaaba
jitne imaan-o-siddatt se har roz "ya-rasool" jaata hun
mujh par padhta nahi mausam ka asar koi
ho fasaad ka din wo, ya waqt maqool jaata hun
Log kehte hain k main aadmi achha hun, magar
Main se mai Main ko bhool jaata hun.
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh....
Ananthji,
bahot hi khubsurat nazm hai jo aapne banaayii hai ... laajavaab, kya baat kahi hai.... uusme ek dard bhii kahiN nazar aata hai aur shokhi bhii...

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rind mujhe ba adab bulaatein hain baada-noshi k liye

k baad*-e-jaam-e-sharaab main kisse aachhi sunata hun

*afterwards
haa haa haaa.............
behad khubsurat nuktachinii sher pesh kuya hai, Ananthji....
waaah waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaahh

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uthai thi kabhi aik jaam-e-baada,shauq-e-sharab main

aaj ,chhute sare dost,mila gham, mili bebasi behisaab main
waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh...
bahot khub..................

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ghamgusar,hijr-e-yaar,khusi ka izhaar,doston ka pyaar,koi tehwar,kal itwaar

rindon ke liye baada-khwaari k bahane aur bhi hain
haa haa haa......
itwaar akele manaaya ki Pariji ke saath
bahot khub... bahot khub....

dilse daad............



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1st September 2014, 10:48 AM

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sirf kar paimaaish-e-baada hi is se rind tu
wus'at-e-gham naap mat ek-ek paimaane ke baad


- zarraa



paimaaish = measurement
wus'at = extent
waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!
Zarrasaab,
kya fikr aur kya dard chhalak rahaa hai iis sher se... aur kya addayegii hai sir, gham ko na naapnekii baat jiis khubsurti se aapne paimaaish-e-baada aur paimaane se co-relate kii hai.....

dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanibse.

Adil



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1st September 2014, 10:55 AM

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ek taaza sher ....

buri is qadar jo sharaab hai, to phir apna khud hi hisaab hai
jise mil raha ye azaab hai, rahe khush wo baada-gusaar kyooN

- zarraa
waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!
Zarraasaab,
beautiful wordplay. magar ek doubt hai iis sher ko leke..
azaab kise mil rahaa hai? thoRa confusion wahi pe hai iis liye wahi atkaa hooN
muaafee chahunga agar koii galti huii ho...



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1st September 2014, 11:03 AM

Naaz,
First of all, I would like to commend your sincerety.. Just wowwwwwwww!!!!! Ek se badkar ek sher pesh kiye haiN.....
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Baada-khwaarii mujhe achchii nahiN lagtii
Magar ye ghooNt zindagii se behtar hai
In simple words, you have made this an excellent sher. Co-relating sharaab ka ghooNt with zindagii ke ghuNt... Just as Zarraasaab said, this is really a great thought.

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Baad-paimaaish rehney dey saaqee
Ghum-o-badaa key hisaab kii adat nahiN
again an excellent thought. dard aur sharaab kii paimaaiish, waaah just too good.

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Ek aur sher pesh hai....rind ke jazbaat bayaaN karne ki ek koshish


Baada-noshee nahiN sabab qadmoN ki laghzish kii
MaiN raah par huN ye Kaaenaat ghoom rahii hai
And improvisation with each sher
kya wordplay hai... just amazing. Bahot se shaayaroN ne ye baat apne andaaz meN bayaaN kii hai, aur, aur ek andaaz tumhaaraa.. waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!

behad khubsurat.....

daad hi daad iin sabhii aashaar pe....

Regards,
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh....
Ananthji,
bahot hi khubsurat nazm hai jo aapne banaayii hai ... laajavaab, kya baat kahi hai.... uusme ek dard bhii kahiN nazar aata hai aur shokhi bhii...
haa haa haaa.............
behad khubsurat nuktachinii sher pesh kuya hai, Ananthji....
waaah waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaahh
waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh...
bahot khub..................
haa haa haa......
itwaar akele manaaya ki Pariji ke saath
bahot khub... bahot khub....
dilse daad............
Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...thank you so much for all your wonderful comments ...waise to har itwaar pari k saath hi manata hun par bina shauq-e-sharab k...m a non-drinker





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1st September 2014, 11:36 AM

meri ek ghazal se...

baadaa ko yagaanoN* meN maanaa jo gayaa yakta*
har gham ka wo saathi hai har jashn sajaataa hai

(donoN lafzoN ke maanii 'Best' hai, to be read as best among the best)



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So fusooN e Adil is back

Missed your sher's dear ab barsaat shuru kar do

And thanks a lot dear for appreciation
chalo, mohtarmaa, aapka hukuum sar-aankhoN par

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Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...thank you so much for all your wonderful comments ...waise to har itwaar pari k saath hi manata hun par bina shauq-e-sharab k...m a non-drinker
haa haa haa...
tab to aapko double daad denii hogii... hum to peekay bhii soch rahe haiN...



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awesome....bahot khoob jij wakai bahane to bht hote haiN sirf ghum hi wajah nahin
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meri ek ghazal se...
baadaa ko yagaanoN* meN maanaa jo gayaa yakta*
har gham ka wo saathi hai har jashn sajaataa hai

(donoN lafzoN ke maanii 'Best' hai, to be read as best among the best)
Waaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab...chaliye aap ka khata khula...dheron daad





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Waaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab...chaliye aap ka khata khula...dheron daad
haa haaa....
Thanks, Ananthji....

duaaoN ke saath,
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1st September 2014, 11:54 AM

mat puchh ki parastish kii misaal kya hai mujhe rind
maiN baada-o-jaam ko bhii khuda-saaz* samajhtaa hooN

(* God's gift)



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baadaa-kade ke paas valii kyuN mile mujhe?
shaayad koii firaaq-e-muhabbat kii baat hai?



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rind zaraa chal ki aaj baada-kashii ho
kal na ho jhumbish kahiN iin uzv-e-badan* meN

(* parts of body)



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yuN mere gaye itne daur-e-baada-paimaaii*
sab kashiid-e-khooN** ko baada-e-naab*** samajhte haiN

(*period of drinking wine; **drawing of blood; ***red wine [bahot baRHiyaa sharaab])



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aaghaaz hai baada-khasii ka tujh se ,tujh se anjaam nahi
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mat puchh ki parastish kii misaal kya hai mujhe rind
maiN baada-o-jaam ko bhii khuda-saaz* samajhtaa hooN

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rind zaraa chal ki aaj baada-kashii ho
kal na ho jhumbish kahiN iin uzv-e-badan* meN

(* parts of body)
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yuN mere gaye itne daur-e-baada-paimaaii*
sab kashiid-e-khooN** ko baada-e-naab*** samajhte haiN

(*period of drinking wine; **drawing of blood; ***red wine [bahot baRHiyaa sharaab])

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Adeil sahab...ek baad ek nayab moti nikal rahe hain.....bohat khoob....dheron daad qubool farmaiyega





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1st September 2014, 02:57 PM

baad-e-baada-aashaamii aks-e-naayaab* aate rahe
jitne aaye utne hi shauq-e-naayaab** aate rahe

(*rare reflections; **rare desires)



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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Adeil sahab...ek baad ek nayab moti nikal rahe hain.....bohat khoob....dheron daad qubool farmaiyega
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aapka behad shukr guzaar hooN, iis zarraanavaazii ke liye

milte rahiye...
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Waaahhhh! bahot khoob ek se badhkar ek sher......kamaal kar diya yaar aate sath hi apna fusooN chala diya

Wakai barsaat kar di tumne
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waiting for some more from you, shuruaat achchhii kii hai to continue... vaise chaahiye to bottle dene aa jaauuN? .....



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pilaa pilaa ki hangaam-e-sahar* talak, saaqii
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(*morning chaos)



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meri ek ghazal se...

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har gham ka wo saathi hai har jashn sajaataa hai

(donoN lafzoN ke maanii 'unique' hai, to be read as unique among the unique)
pataa nahiN kaise galat meaning dimaag meN aa gayaa? maybe the effect of weekend



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raaz-e-dil chhupa rakhha tha taa-umr,dil-figaarii* k baad
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Waaaaaah adil ji

Kabhi kabhi aapme mirza Ghalib ki aatma aa jaati hai . Bohut khoob.
Sarikaji,
aapka teh-e-dil se shukriya adaa karna chaahunga... khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye

duaaoN ke saath,
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iis pyaar bhari daad aur hausla afzaaii ke liye aapka mamnoon hooN...

duaaGo,
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*Heart break
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
behad khubsurat khayaalaat aur dil-soz bayaanii se labrez hai ye sher..
aapko dheroN dheroN daad, Ananthji...

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doston ..... waise to aaj lafz "baada" par charcha ka aakhiri din tha, par kyunki guftagoo abhi bhi garm hai, aur behtareen qalaam aaye ja rahe hain, to hum daur-e-baada 2 din aur bardha dete hain .... yaani 4 Sept raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GST .... tab tak lafz-e-baada ki baada-noshi ka lutf uthaate rahiye ... CHEERS !


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Wah.....Bohat khoob..........................




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doston ..... waise to aaj lafz "baada" par charcha ka aakhiri din tha, par kyunki guftagoo abhi bhi garm hai, aur behtareen qalaam aaye ja rahe hain, to hum daur-e-baada 2 din aur bardha dete hain .... yaani 4 Sept raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GST .... tab tak lafz-e-baada ki baada-noshi ka lutf uthaate rahiye ... CHEERS !
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Wah.....Bohat khoob..........................
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2nd September 2014, 12:09 PM

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Originally Posted by aadeil View Post
baada-kHvaarii se agar maiN aaj laa-haasil huaa
phir muhabbat meN fanaa hoke bhii kya haasil huaa

WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!kya baat hai Aadeil sahab....bohat khoob ...dheron dheron daad





Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

*pari*
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