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Did you feel... - 19th July 2010, 12:35 AM
Friends,

I know it might be the wrong section for this. But my friends are here and requested me to post my latest creation. I am sharing with you all. Hope you all like it.

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On a Wonderful Sunny Day
Walking through the Garden
Did you feel a Soft Crease?

Yes, Satin Petals of a Red Rose.

On a Day of White Grey Clouds
Looking at the Skies above
Did you feel something Wet?

Yes, Drops from the First Rain.

On a Early December Morning
Reaching out of your Window
Did you feel something Cold?

Yes, Flakes of Pure White Snow.

On a Beautiful Moonlit Night
Sitting out in the Balcony
Did you feel someone Smile?

Yes, Twinkling of the Stars.

On a Day when all was not perfect
World far from being heavenly
Did you still feel blessed in your heart?

No.

I do, ‘coz I have her
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19th July 2010, 12:53 AM
And may she be eternally yours, Rohin Bhai...!

Nice creation as always...!

God bless you...!


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19th July 2010, 03:12 AM
Rohin Bhaiya,


Beautiful creation ....

u are a awesome writer ....

keep writing and sharing

take good care

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19th July 2010, 08:07 AM
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Friends,
On a Wonderful Sunny Day
Walking through the Garden
Did you feel a Soft Crease?

Yes, Satin Petals of a Red Rose.

On a Day of White Grey Clouds
Looking at the Skies above
Did you feel something Wet?

Yes, Drops from the First Rain.

On a Early December Morning
Reaching out of your Window
Did you feel something Cold?

Yes, Flakes of Pure White Snow.

On a Beautiful Moonlit Night
Sitting out in the Balcony
Did you feel someone Smile?

Yes, Twinkling of the Stars.

On a Day when all was not perfect
World far from being heavenly
Did you still feel blessed in your heart?

No.

I do, ‘coz I have her
----------------------------------------------------
Regards,
Rohin
Its Too Good......Rohin Ji ! Very Nice Poetry ........
best creation as always .... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Friends,

I know it might be the wrong section for this. But my friends are here and requested me to post my latest creation. I am sharing with you all. Hope you all like it.

------------------------------------------------------

On a Wonderful Sunny Day
Walking through the Garden
Did you feel a Soft Crease?

Yes, Satin Petals of a Red Rose.

On a Day of White Grey Clouds
Looking at the Skies above
Did you feel something Wet?

Yes, Drops from the First Rain.

On a Early December Morning
Reaching out of your Window
Did you feel something Cold?

Yes, Flakes of Pure White Snow.

On a Beautiful Moonlit Night
Sitting out in the Balcony
Did you feel someone Smile?

Yes, Twinkling of the Stars.

On a Day when all was not perfect
World far from being heavenly
Did you still feel blessed in your heart?

No.

I do, ‘coz I have her
----------------------------------------------------

Regards,
Rohin
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19th July 2010, 12:13 PM
wow......nice creation.........keep posting.

thanks Rohin jii

god bless u

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And may she be eternally yours, Rohin Bhai...!

Nice creation as always...!

God bless you...!
Danny bhai,

Thanks for the encouragement as always..

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Rohin Bhaiya,


Beautiful creation ....

u are a awesome writer ....

keep writing and sharing

take good care

mandeep
Mandeep,

Thanks a lot...
My creations are beautiful
For readers like you

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Its Too Good......Rohin Ji ! Very Nice Poetry ........
best creation as always .... !
Naresh ji,

Shukriya...

Not as good as yours....

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wow......nice creation.........keep posting.

thanks Rohin jii

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I am glad you liked it...
Thanks for the encouragement as always...

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Friends,

I know it might be the wrong section for this. But my friends are here and requested me to post my latest creation. I am sharing with you all. Hope you all like it.

------------------------------------------------------

On a Wonderful Sunny Day
Walking through the Garden
Did you feel a Soft Crease?

Yes, Satin Petals of a Red Rose.

On a Day of White Grey Clouds
Looking at the Skies above
Did you feel something Wet?

Yes, Drops from the First Rain.

On a Early December Morning
Reaching out of your Window
Did you feel something Cold?

Yes, Flakes of Pure White Snow.

On a Beautiful Moonlit Night
Sitting out in the Balcony
Did you feel someone Smile?

Yes, Twinkling of the Stars.

On a Day when all was not perfect
World far from being heavenly
Did you still feel blessed in your heart?

No.

I do, ‘coz I have her
----------------------------------------------------

Regards,
Rohin
ji nice creation.......................


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