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andaz zamane se apna juda rakhte hain.....
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andaz zamane se apna juda rakhte hain..... - 22nd September 2005, 06:48 PM

dosto..kuch likhne ke kosis ke hain..apke nazar kar raha huin.....apne rai zarur dein...

Andaz zamane se apna juda rakhte hain,
kamro mein nai dil mein khuda rakhte hain.

kehne do zamanne ko asmaa jhukega nai.
ham bhi apne zid apna hosla rakhte hain.

tark-e-taluq se pehle to kitabo mein thee,
dekhte hain ab hamare tasverrkaha rakhte hain.

hamne dekha hain unhe suli pe chadte hue,
jo shakhs apne soch aur apne zuba rakhte hain
   
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22nd September 2005, 07:58 PM

Wonderful...

Loved reading each and every word, keep writing and be happy!

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thank u parul jee...waise esme kuch galti ho gaye..abb edit karne ke kosis ke..par hue nai....

tark-e-taluq se pehle to kitabo mein thee,
dekhte hain ab hamare tasver kaha rakhte hain.
   
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