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mere khuwab, mere khayal , mera pyar - 13th April 2007, 05:48 PM

main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan


mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar

mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar

uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar


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hi - 13th April 2007, 06:04 PM

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main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan


mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar

mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar

uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
mani ji ye ashaar bhi bhut khub lage......is meein ek gilha bhi hai ek adhoorepan ka ehsaas or tarap bhi mehsoos huyii mujhe.......yun hi likhti rehna.......raj........


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mani ji ye ashaar bhi bhut khub lage......is meein ek gilha bhi hai ek adhoorepan ka ehsaas or tarap bhi mehsoos huyii mujhe.......yun hi likhti rehna.......raj........

veeer humesha ki tarah aaj bhi aap ko apni post per dekh ker mujhe bohat bohat khushi ho rahi hai ...bohat shukrya aap ne pasand kiya.....aur sahi kaha waqai ye likhte waqt yehi ahsasaat the ji aap ne bayan kiye hain duaon main yaad rakhiyega aur apna bohat bohat khayal rakhiyega ...rab rakha


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15th April 2007, 10:39 AM

khuwabo ki tasweer hum dekha nahi karte
hum unhe churaane mai viswas karte hai
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aapke ehsaas bahut achhe lage. kam lafzo kaafi kuch kah gaye
aise hi likhte rahiyega
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khuwabo ki tasweer hum dekha nahi karte
hum unhe churaane mai viswas karte hai
agar koi hume naa pasand kare tho
usse bhool jaane mai hi uski bhlaai samajh liyaa jarte hai

sher share kerne ka shukrya


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reena ji sorry 4 late reply main dekh nahi payee thi ye post ....mujhay bohat khushi hoi ke aap yahan ayeen aur aaapne mera likha howa pasand kiya thanks a lot


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koi to ho me tuhada name ta nahi jandi par tusi likeh bhot vadhia likhea hamesha es tara likhde rehna
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4th May 2007, 11:10 AM

Hi maani ji

aapko merul ka sadar parnaam

maani ji aapne bare hi pyaare ehsason ko bayan kiya hai. mujhe aapki rachna pasand aayi

ese hi likhte rahe
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main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan


mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar

mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar

uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar


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4th May 2007, 12:14 PM

dear mani...yeh teeno sher bahut khoob lage...yu hi likhti rahiye

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4th May 2007, 10:19 PM

sahi likha hai very nice keep it up,,,,,,,,,,,,


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thank u preet ji aap ne mere likhey ko is qabil samjha aur yahan aa ker apnay alfaz diye bohat bohat shukrya yunhi sath deti rahiyega ....aur naam to ab aap jaan hi gaye hain


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maani ji aapne bare hi pyaare ehsason ko bayan kiya hai. mujhe aapki rachna pasand aayi

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merul ji bohat shukrya mera likha pasand kerne aur saraahne ke liye thanks a lot


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dear mani...yeh teeno sher bahut khoob lage...yu hi likhti rahiye

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thank u so much sunita ji bas yunhi khayalat ko likh deti hoon aap ko acha laga mujhay bohat khushi hoi apna khayal rakhiyega khush rahain humesha


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sahi likha hai very nice keep it up,,,,,,,,,,,,
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7th May 2007, 12:05 PM

maanii didi taSleemat:

aSh'aar be-Had achHe lage mujHe .

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uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
yeH sher bahhot hi khoob rahaa..

yuuNhi liKhte raheN aur apnii kosiShoN ke Z^ariiye ees bazm ko sajaate raheN..

khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN

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sukhriya maanii ji
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aSh'aar be-Had achHe lage mujHe .



yeH sher bahhot hi khoob rahaa..

yuuNhi liKhte raheN aur apnii kosiShoN ke Z^ariiye ees bazm ko sajaate raheN..

khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

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hmmm late hogaye shaitan is baar thank u so much dhaval apni didi ke ahsasaat ko samjhne aur sarahne ke liye duaaon main yaad rakhna yunhi sath detay rehna


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