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13th April 2007, 05:48 PM
main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan
mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar
mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar
uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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hi -
13th April 2007, 06:04 PM
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main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan
mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar
mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar
uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
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mani ji ye ashaar bhi bhut khub lage......is meein ek gilha bhi hai ek adhoorepan ka ehsaas or tarap bhi mehsoos huyii mujhe.......yun hi likhti rehna.......raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th April 2007, 11:25 PM
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mani ji ye ashaar bhi bhut khub lage......is meein ek gilha bhi hai ek adhoorepan ka ehsaas or tarap bhi mehsoos huyii mujhe.......yun hi likhti rehna.......raj........
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veeer humesha ki tarah aaj bhi aap ko apni post per dekh ker mujhe bohat bohat khushi ho rahi hai ...bohat shukrya aap ne pasand kiya.....aur sahi kaha waqai ye likhte waqt yehi ahsasaat the ji aap ne bayan kiye hain duaon main yaad rakhiyega aur apna bohat bohat khayal rakhiyega ...rab rakha
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
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15th April 2007, 10:39 AM
khuwabo ki tasweer hum dekha nahi karte
hum unhe churaane mai viswas karte hai
agar koi hume naa pasand kare tho
usse bhool jaane mai hi uski bhlaai samajh liyaa jarte hai
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15th April 2007, 12:45 PM
aapke ehsaas bahut achhe lage. kam lafzo kaafi kuch kah gaye
aise hi likhte rahiyega
reena
aksar yaad karte hain un guzre hue lamho ko
aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko
kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare
jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha
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15th April 2007, 08:50 PM
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khuwabo ki tasweer hum dekha nahi karte
hum unhe churaane mai viswas karte hai
agar koi hume naa pasand kare tho
usse bhool jaane mai hi uski bhlaai samajh liyaa jarte hai
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sher share kerne ka shukrya
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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3rd May 2007, 10:37 PM
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aapke ehsaas bahut achhe lage. kam lafzo kaafi kuch kah gaye
aise hi likhte rahiyega
reena
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reena ji sorry 4 late reply main dekh nahi payee thi ye post ....mujhay bohat khushi hoi ke aap yahan ayeen aur aaapne mera likha howa pasand kiya thanks a lot
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
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ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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3rd May 2007, 10:42 PM
koi to ho me tuhada name ta nahi jandi par tusi likeh bhot vadhia likhea hamesha es tara likhde rehna
preet
dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya
aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya
kamalrajpreet
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4th May 2007, 11:10 AM
Hi maani ji
aapko merul ka sadar parnaam
maani ji aapne bare hi pyaare ehsason ko bayan kiya hai. mujhe aapki rachna pasand aayi
ese hi likhte rahe
aapka dost
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main ne jab jab poetry likhi mujhe shayri.com ki apni is family ki yaad aye aaj jb wapis aaye hun to phir se share kerne ko dil chaha apne ahsasat ko yahan
mere khuwab mere khayal mera pyar
dil dhoondta hai ye qeemti asase bar bar
mere dil ki gar woh sunle ik baar pukaar
tarrap jayega uska dil pal main hazar baar
uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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4th May 2007, 12:14 PM
dear mani...yeh teeno sher bahut khoob lage...yu hi likhti rahiye
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th May 2007, 10:19 PM
sahi likha hai very nice keep it up,,,,,,,,,,,,
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6th May 2007, 09:01 PM
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koi to ho me tuhada name ta nahi jandi par tusi likeh bhot vadhia likhea hamesha es tara likhde rehna
preet
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thank u preet ji aap ne mere likhey ko is qabil samjha aur yahan aa ker apnay alfaz diye bohat bohat shukrya yunhi sath deti rahiyega ....aur naam to ab aap jaan hi gaye hain
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
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ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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7th May 2007, 11:33 AM
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Hi maani ji
aapko merul ka sadar parnaam
maani ji aapne bare hi pyaare ehsason ko bayan kiya hai. mujhe aapki rachna pasand aayi
ese hi likhte rahe
aapka dost
Merul
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merul ji bohat shukrya mera likha pasand kerne aur saraahne ke liye thanks a lot
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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7th May 2007, 11:35 AM
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dear mani...yeh teeno sher bahut khoob lage...yu hi likhti rahiye
god bless u
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thank u so much sunita ji bas yunhi khayalat ko likh deti hoon aap ko acha laga mujhay bohat khushi hoi apna khayal rakhiyega khush rahain humesha
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
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7th May 2007, 11:36 AM
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sahi likha hai very nice keep it up,,,,,,,,,,,,
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aap ko sahi laga to phir sahi hi hoga thanks a lot sarahney ka bohat shukrya
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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7th May 2007, 12:05 PM
maanii didi taSleemat:
aSh'aar be-Had achHe lage mujHe .
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uski nigaah ne jo paehli baar kiya tha waar
uski chot na bhule aj bhi dil roye zaar zaar
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yeH sher bahhot hi khoob rahaa..
yuuNhi liKhte raheN aur apnii kosiShoN ke Z^ariiye ees bazm ko sajaate raheN..
khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN
duaoN ke saath ijaazaT
aapkaa shaitaan
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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7th May 2007, 12:54 PM
sukhriya maanii ji
ese hi sath nibhate rehna
aapka dost
merul
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merul ji bohat shukrya mera likha pasand kerne aur saraahne ke liye thanks a lot
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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14th May 2007, 06:57 PM
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maanii didi taSleemat:
aSh'aar be-Had achHe lage mujHe .
yeH sher bahhot hi khoob rahaa..
yuuNhi liKhte raheN aur apnii kosiShoN ke Z^ariiye ees bazm ko sajaate raheN..
khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN
duaoN ke saath ijaazaT
aapkaa shaitaan
dhaval
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hmmm late hogaye shaitan is baar thank u so much dhaval apni didi ke ahsasaat ko samjhne aur sarahne ke liye duaaon main yaad rakhna yunhi sath detay rehna
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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14th May 2007, 06:59 PM
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sukhriya maanii ji
ese hi sath nibhate rehna
aapka dost
merul
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thanks again merul ji
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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