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rishton ke hain roop anek - 6th August 2010, 01:32 PM
rishton ke hain roop anek
rishton ki pehchan hai apni
rishton ko, agar koi samjhe
to,rishton ki shaan hai apni

mat pita bachon ka rishta
bhai aur behan ka rishta
bhai aur bhai ka rishta
her rishte ki katha hai apni
ek rishta manavta ka bhi
priya aur priatam ka rishta
her rishte ki vyatha hai apni
jab koi rishta tode vo rabb
manav darad na seh pata hai
jaan bujh kar fir bhi vah per
khud rishton ko jhuthlata hai
ooper se hai pyar dikhaye
man me jahar bhara rehta hai
rishte mange hai kurbani
per koi, kya ye, de patta hai?

swarath chodo lalach chodo
rishton ki kimat pehchano
jinke pass na hota ye sukh
koshish kar vo darad bhi jano
agar pyar se nibh jaoge
rishton ko gr* ji jaoge (agar)
ant* samaya abhilashi man me (aakhir)
jaane ka avsad* na hoga (dukh)
rishton ka ehsas to hoga
apnepan ka bhas* bhi hoga (aabhas)
apnepan ka bhas bhi hoga
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Good post. Thanks for sharing............

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11th August 2010, 03:45 PM
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rishton ke hain roop anek
rishton ki pehchan hai apni
rishton ko, agar koi samjhe
to,rishton ki shaan hai apni

mat pita bachon ka rishta
bhai aur behan ka rishta
bhai aur bhai ka rishta
her rishte ki katha hai apni
ek rishta manavta ka bhi
priya aur priatam ka rishta
her rishte ki vyatha hai apni

jab koi rishta tode vo rabb
manav darad na seh pata hai
jaan bujh kar fir bhi vah per
khud rishton ko jhuthlata hai
ooper se hai pyar dikhaye
man me jahar bhara rehta hai
rishte mange hai kurbani
per koi, kya ye, de patta hai?

swarath chodo lalach chodo
rishton ki kimat pehchano
jinke pass na hota ye sukh
koshish kar vo darad bhi jano
agar pyar se nibh jaoge
rishton ko gr* ji jaoge (agar)
ant* samaya abhilashi man me (aakhir)
jaane ka avsad* na hoga (dukh)
rishton ka ehsas to hoga
apnepan ka bhas* bhi hoga (aabhas)
apnepan ka bhas bhi hoga
bahut khub

dil ko choo gaya ahsash


her rishte ki vyatha hai apni

jab koi rishta tode vo rabb
manav darad na seh pata hai
jaan bujh kar fir bhi vah per
khud rishton ko jhuthlata hai
ooper se hai pyar dikhaye
man me jahar bhara rehta hai
rishte mange hai kurbani
per koi, kya ye, de patta hai

itana acha hai kai bar padha

eri ek post hai riste padhana

jivan mai khusiya aur dukh dono hi risto me milate hai

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11th August 2010, 05:24 PM
bahut khooB RASHMI Jii, muje nahi maloom tha ki aap hindi kavita bhi likhti haiN, accha laga aapki kavita ko padna

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11th August 2010, 07:19 PM
very nice rashmi ji....bilkul sahi kaha aapne rishton se bad kar kuch nhi........
   
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12th August 2010, 06:08 PM
rashmi ji aapki kavita rishtoon ki ahemiyat ko bayaan kar rahi hai
rishton mein dhokha karne walo aur chal karne walo k liye ik prernadayak kavita k liye dhanyavaad...........good poem
aapka ...........prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
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very nice rashmi ji....bilkul sahi kaha aapne rishton se bad kar kuch nhi........good job ji

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Good post. Thanks for sharing............
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bahut khub

dil ko choo gaya ahsash


her rishte ki vyatha hai apni

jab koi rishta tode vo rabb
manav darad na seh pata hai
jaan bujh kar fir bhi vah per
khud rishton ko jhuthlata hai
ooper se hai pyar dikhaye
man me jahar bhara rehta hai
rishte mange hai kurbani
per koi, kya ye, de patta hai

itana acha hai kai bar padha

eri ek post hai riste padhana

jivan mai khusiya aur dukh dono hi risto me milate hai

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rashmi ji aapki kavita rishtoon ki ahemiyat ko bayaan kar rahi hai
rishton mein dhokha karne walo aur chal karne walo k liye ik prernadayak kavita k liye dhanyavaad...........good poem
aapka ...........prem anjana
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