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Nice one pooja ji....

Welcome to sdc family

Keep writing. ..


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Pooja ji...

welcome to SDC... acchi koshish par daad kabool kijiye

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Bahut achcha khayal pesh kiya Pooja aapne ..
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Apni to zindagi gumnaam guzri..!
waahh kya baat hai pooja ji................. bahut acche.

likhti rahiye, aatii rahiye..

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