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Mohabbat kari kiyoun thi..
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Love Mohabbat kari kiyoun thi.. - 6th July 2004, 09:58 PM

Sooraj main tapish chanda main tari kiyoun thi
Aay khuda dil main mohabbat bhari kiyoun thi

Sab hi aik say hotey to bhala hota
Koi titly koi bijli koi pari kiyoun thi

Yehi ghum dil say laga rakhain kayee loog
Duniyaan jahan bhula kay mohabbat kari kiyoun thi

Kahin pay sehraoon kay unmit sisilay daykhay
Tu kahin pay roo-e-zameen hari kiyoun thi

Jab fana ho gaya wo aanchal hijaab-e-yar
Phir bichonay ko derd ki dari kiyoun thi

Tufaan bhi kum-zerfon ki dustaras main rahay
Janay husan ki ada itni khari kiyoun thi

Jala dil jab kisi mah-jabeen ka ager
To kehnay lagee main us pay mari kiyoun thi

Kis qadar ujli rah-e-wafa ki manzilain shaiki
Lakin qadam qadam pay jafa dhari kiyoun thi


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hi - 8th July 2004, 03:40 PM

hello shakeel ji
bahut hi acchi aur gehri gazal hai,,jismey kai rang jindgi ke aur mohabbat ke aker guzar geya.... per ye sher dil choo gaye...

Yehi ghum dil say laga rakhain kayee loog
Duniyaan jahan bhula kay mohabbat kari kiyoun thi

Kahin pay sehraoon kay unmit sisilay daykhay
Tu kahin pay roo-e-zameen hari kiyoun thi

Jab fana ho gaya wo aanchal hijaab-e-yar
Phir bichonay ko derd ki dari kiyoun thi

Tufaan bhi kum-zerfon ki dustaras main rahay
Janay husan ki ada itni khari kiyoun thi
....nice words....


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Smile Good one! - 9th July 2004, 01:45 AM

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14th July 2004, 06:01 PM

Aadaab shaiki ji..

Is baar to aapne kamaal kar diya! Kid khoobi se mohabbat ke hazaaron rang dhaale hain aapne in lafzon me.. behtareen! Har ek sher ka khayaal, uska bayaan, uska andaaz.. behad khubsoorat raha.. Umeed hai ki aap aise aala kalaam likhte rahenge.. Tareef kubool kijiyega.


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Love 14th July 2004, 11:37 PM

Salaam

Bohat shukriya doston aap sab ka khush rahiye ga Duaoon main yaad rakhiye ga.


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