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"Ishq Ka Hunar" -
21st September 2007, 03:10 PM
“ISHQ KA HUNAR”
kar husan ko tanha dikha aadam ka hunar gaye muskurati aankho ko ashkon se bhar gaye..... chhor teri galion ko jab ham door nikal gaye thaa har jaanib tera hii charcha ham jidhar gaye...... pa to lete ham bhi mohabat ki manzil shayad par aap sar-e-raah hi chhor safar gaye...... dhundha kiye hum unhe har gali har shehar jalane ko dil hamara wo rakeebon ke ghar gaye..... thii ab bhi kush shikayatain yaaron ko hamse hamko thaa ye guma.n ki ham sudhar gaye...... suna na doon zamane ko daasta.n- e- bewafaii isii dar se jaate jaate wo pila hume zehar gaye...... thaa wada ki "Sunita" waqt-e-rukhsat aaounga jaroor leke khuli palkain hum intzaar mein mar gaye.....  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st September 2007, 04:27 PM
Hi Di,
Ab aapki is gazal ki tareef kya karoon. Shabd kam hain mere paas. Bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne. Khush rahiye aur kareeb rahiye... |
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21st September 2007, 05:34 PM
Namaste Sunita ji..........Aap kesi hain...........kafi smaye baad apka kalaam pada ..........kya baat hai aaj kal masroof kuch zyada hi hain jis wajha se kafi samay baad apko padne ka mouka mila,bahut hi umda likha hai apne dili daad hazir hai kubool ho.unhi likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye hamesha
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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21st September 2007, 07:54 PM
Sunita ji meri taraf se namaskar
aapki ye "ishaq ka hunar" mujhe bahut hi aachhi lagi, Bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne  GOD IS GREAT
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!! -
21st September 2007, 09:06 PM
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
 bhot hi pyaara likha hai aapne to..mai yahan itne waqt se hun par aaj aapko maine bhi pehli baar padha hai kitna badhiya likha hai..ab mujhe bhi kaafi kuch sikhne ko milega aapse wow!!!khush rahiye hamesha..hasti muskarati rahiye or hume yuhi acchi acchi poems sunate rahiye..........  .....love u...tc..
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21st September 2007, 09:35 PM
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Sunita G namaskar aaj bahut hi dino baad aapko padha lekin sach mein padh kar maza aa gaya.. itne khoobsurti se likha hai aapne ise ke tareef karu to kaise karu??? par padh kar sach mein bahut hi achha laga... kuch sher to itne achhe lage ke kya kahu par bata nahi sakta ke kaun se jyada achhe lage kyunki khud hi judge nahi kar pa raha hoon ki kaun sa jyada achha lag raha hai kyunki sab hi achhe hai.. Khush rahiye........... Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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21st September 2007, 10:14 PM
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hello ji didi ji kaisi hai aap? sacch kahun to bahut accha likkha hai apne.... or jhooth kahun to bahut bura(dont mind) khikhikhikhikhikhi waise apki is post ne mujhe beete din yaad dila diye.. ik sher jo dil ko chu gaya... "pa to lete ham bhi mohabat ki manzil shayad par aap sar-e-raah hi chhor safar gaye......" sacch hi to hai jab mohabbat mein doobte hai tab to mazaa ata hai... or jab chor jaaye to zindagi doobti hai.... aise hi likhtin rahiye tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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frnd 4 ever -
21st September 2007, 10:24 PM
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kaise hai aap? hmmmmmmmmm kya baat hai sunita ji, itne shaandaar,or dilko chhu jane wali nazam ke saath aapne wapsi ki hai, sach dil khush ho gaya aapki nazam padh kar, aapki nazam wakayi kabile tarif hai.ek_ek ashaar dil ko chhu gaya, dhundha kiye hum unhe har gali har shehar jalane ko dil hamara wo rakeebon ke ghar gaye..... suna na doon zamane ko daasta.n- e- bewafaii isii dar se jaate jaate wo pila hume zehar gaye...... sunita ji aapke likhe ye do Ashaar hame be_hadd pasand aaye. MASHA ALLAH, BOHOT HI KHOOB. APNA khayal rakhiye, khush rahiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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nice dear -
22nd September 2007, 09:41 AM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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22nd September 2007, 10:08 AM
Pranaam Sister:
jaise ki big B ne kahaa bahot hi gehraaYii sey aapne ehsaaSoN ko lafzoN meiN peSh kiYaa haii.. aur Ghazal hai hi itani baDhiyaa..! yeH Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa.. Quote:
mere dil sey niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl keejiYeNgaa. KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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22nd September 2007, 10:30 AM
Hi sunita di
kese ho aap? maafi chahta hu ki kafi dino bad dastak de paya hu aaj.. aake dekha bahut hi behtareen ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai aapne, har alfaaz mein dard saf nazar aa raha hai, ehsaason pe dil se nikli daad pesh hai, kabul kijiyea.. di aapne bahut hi gehraai se ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai yuhi mehfil ko sajate rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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22nd September 2007, 02:12 PM
chhor teri galion ko jab ham door nikal gaye
thaa har jaanib tera hii charcha ham jidhar gaye...... pehle di aap yeh bataiye...is ghazal ke 3 ashar kyun gayab kar diye......compeitition ke waqt bhi aapki ghazal hume pasandaayi thi... ...jo ashar apane nikal diye woh bhi acche hi the.....haan shayad maikashjee ke anusaar technicaaly galat ho par ehsaas ke kya kehna..................di diil se daad kubool kare is ghazal parJaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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22nd September 2007, 02:13 PM
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kush raho aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2007, 06:08 AM
namaste dii
kaise hain aap? bahut bahut dher k baad aapko padne ka mocka mila. sach mein kahun. to mujhe to yeh poem bahut achi lagi. kafi dher k baad, koi achi hi, straight forward, poem padi hai maine. pata hai, maine yeh 6-7 bar padi....  ......sabhi k sabhi sher bahut ache hai, phir yeh sher to mano zehan mein samaa gaye:thii ab bhi kush shikayatain yaaron ko hamse hamko thaa ye guma.n ki ham sudhar gaye...... suna na doon zamane ko daasta.n- e- bewafaii isii dar se jaate jaate wo pila hume zehar gaye...... abb ki bar. jaldi jaldi likhna dii, aapki agli kalaam ka hum intezaar karenge. yuhin likte rahein aur humesha khush raheiin. aapka chohta bhai munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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25th September 2007, 04:01 PM
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Keep writing Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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25th September 2007, 04:32 PM
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namastey kashif ji....aap kaise haiN ji sach meiN aaj-kal bahut busy hoon, SDC par bahut kum aa pa rahi hoon  accha laga ki aapne mujhe pada aur mere ahsaasoN ko pasand kiya....yu hi saath banaye rakhna....kush rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th September 2007, 04:34 PM
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kaise haiN aap.....aapne meri gazal ko pada aur saraha....dil se aapki shukar_gujaar hoon....yu hi padti rahiyega. kush rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 05:22 PM
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lots of love tumahri dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 05:24 PM
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dear jasdeep......aapne mujhe etne pyar se padda aur saraha......tahe-dil se aapki shukargujaar hoon.....yu hi aatey rahiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 05:26 PM
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meri pyari shweta....yeh batao ki chottoN ki baat mind karni chahiye kaya...nahi na, bas maine bhi mind nahi kiya.....balki tumhari yeh thitholi bahut acchi lagi....dua hai yu hansti-muskurati raho..... padne aur sarahne ke liye shukriya. love tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 05:28 PM
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padne aur pasand karne ke liye.....bahut bahut shukriya. kush raho god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 05:30 PM
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 absent maiN rahti hoon ja aap...kaya zamana aa gaya hai....khud ka iljaam mujpar...bahut galat baat hai  aapne humey pada aur saraha.......dil se shukriya kabool kijiye aur yu hi saath detey rahiyega. kush rahiye aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th September 2007, 07:32 PM
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hi didi kaisii ho bahut dino baad mahfil main aaya hoon na? per kya batun main didi sacchi bahut busy ho gaya aaj kal abhii aaya to is per nazar padi bahut khoobsurat gazal likhi hai apne suna na doon zamane ko daasta.n- e- bewafaii isii dar se jaate jaate wo pila hume zehar gaye...... thaa wada ki "Sunita" waqt-e-rukhsat aaounga jaroor leke khuli palkain hum intzaar mein mar gaye meri daad hazir hai........ apna khyal rakhna........... aapka bhai dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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1st October 2007, 11:52 AM
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BAS AAP HI LIKH SAKTI HAI SUNITA JI----DEV |
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1st October 2007, 03:24 PM
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mere pyarey chottu....bahut sarra pyar chottu etne pyar se saath dene ke liye shukriya....aur aaj maiN bahut udhaas hoon...tujhe kitni baar call kiya....ring jati hai par udhar se koi call attend nahi kar raha....chotuu tujhe bahut miss karungi.....love u alot tu hamesha har pal...mere saath hai yeh mujhe yakeen hai....kush rahna chottu aur dil laga kar padai karna. waqt nikaal kar SDC par bhi aatey rahna aur haaN jaldi se apna naya contact no. dena....intjaar raheyga mujhe teri call ka. kush rahna lots of love teri sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 11:03 AM
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bahut accha laga aapka likha diii padkar.... en khoobsurat ahsaasoN ke liye shukriya, accha laga.aapne etne pyar se padda aur saraha, dil se shukriya.....! kush raho god bless u aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 11:05 AM
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kush raho hamesha muskurati raho aapki dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 02:45 PM
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tumne etne pyar se mujhe pada aur woh bhi 5-6 baar bahut khoob, aap sab ka saath hai tabhi to maiN kuch likh pati hoon....yu hi saath banaye rakhna. kush raho tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 02:46 PM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 02:49 PM
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jao hum aapse baat nahi kartey....kaha ho etne dino ? mana ki bahut busy ho, par aisa bhi kaya ki apne pariwaar ke liye kuch pal bhi nahi nikaal saktey...hum aapse katti haiN meri shayri pasand karne ke liye dil se shukriya, roj aaya karo, abhi to joothi jooti ki naraz hoon  agar ais hi absent rahe to sacchi meiN naraz ho jauNgi.kush raho aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 02:52 PM
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yu hi aatey rahiyega god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th October 2007, 08:26 PM
jalane ko dil wo mera raqeebon ke ghar gaye.
kya bat kahi hai aapne lagta hai jaise kisi ne gaye waqt ki tasweer palat kar rakh di ho bahut umda andaz laga aapka mubarkbad is sher ke liye yun hi likhti rahiye mai aapke liye tahe dil se dua karta hoon.............rahnuma ishtiyaq |
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15th October 2007, 10:28 AM
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kaise ho? wakai aapne bahot badhiya likha hai, aur mujhe ye do sher bahut pasand aaye. aap bahot achha likhte hai. take care! |
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16th October 2007, 05:24 AM
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Kya khubsurati se aapne har bat kahi hai. BHai WaHH Is baat Par ek mashhoor shayar ka sher yaad aa gaya........ Ke Dil Ke Chahlon Ko Koi Sher Kahe To Gam Nahi Takleef To Tab Hoti Hai Jab Koi Wahhhhh Wahhhhhh Karta hai  Code:
A jaan-a-vis tumhe khabhar kya tumhe chahe hum kitna !! Kabhi kisi deewane sai puchna ki khudha ki bandgi kya hai !! "VISHAL ARYA"  |
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16th October 2007, 12:18 PM
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wah wah wah ! wah sunita ji kya kamal ka likhte hoon har ek alfaz ko kya mithi aur samajdari se aap ne is kavita me paroya he aaisa lagta he ki jaise koi zavari ne ek ek kimti anmol moti (hire) ko koi suwarn haar me piroya ho. aap ki kuch line to haad se bhi jyada aachi he jaise ki yeh line "thii ab bhi kush shikayatain yaaron ko hamse hamko thaa ye guma.n ki ham sudhar gaye" "suna na doon zamane ko daasta.n- e- bewafaii isii dar se jaate jaate wo pila hume zehar gaye......" "thaa wada ki "Sunita" waqt-e-rukhsat aaounga jaroor leke khuli palkain hum intzaar mein mar gaye..." really muje bahot hi aacha laga thanx sunitaji humare sath yeh share karne ke liye Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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18th October 2007, 10:45 AM
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aaj maine teri dono gazley padi hai, ab dekhna jab tu mileygi na abhi kuch der baad, teri khichai karti hu, dono mai rona rona likha hai, tujhe pata hai na mujhe tu hasti hue hi acchi lagti hai, tere chehrey par udhasi nahi jachti, tera khilkhilla kar hasna hi humey pasand hai. gazal acchi lagi par udhas kar gaye mujhe bhi. teri didi baljit |
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18th October 2007, 01:01 PM
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jis din aap mujhe sacchi main naraz ho jao............ khuda kare wo meri jindgi ka aakhri din ho......... ab main kya bataun aapko ko main kitna busy rahta hoon...... fir bhii waqt mile aa hi jata hoon aap sab ko tang karne ke liye....... per pls aap naraz na hona..... aapka dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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19th October 2007, 12:37 PM
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aatey rahiyega god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th October 2007, 12:40 PM
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accha laga jaha dekhkar aapko....aapne hamari likhi chand lines pasand ki...dil se shukriya. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th October 2007, 12:42 PM
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aapne hamari shayri pasand ki dil se shukriya. aapki likhi shayri bhi acchi lagi....yu hi aatey rahiyega god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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