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Sakhi -
3rd January 2006, 10:12 AM
HOTE GULABI ANKHA SARABI
BOLI USKI KOYEL SI HANSTI HAI TO AISA LAGTA VERSA HOTI PHOOLO KI VADE PE VADA HAI NA JANE KYA IRADA HAI SEEMA KABHI KHOO NA JANA YE BANDA SIDHA SADHA HAI WO RAH THI KANTO KI, JINSE HUM GUJRE HAI KAL JAHA HUM THAHRE THE, AAJ WAHA PER PEHRE HAI DEKH MUGHE MUSKA DETE THE JISKE GULABI GAAL HOTA THA PRATIT JAISE LAMBI HO JIVAN SAAL PHIR KIYO WO RAKHTI HAI, PARDE UPER PARDA AAJ KAL KIYO NAHI AAYI, MERE MILNE PE USKO LAAJ JAB SE WO JUDA HUE, KHO GAYI HAI MERI AAWAJ AB TO BAS INTEJAR HAI, PAHENNE KO MOUT KA TAAJ DIL SE DIL DIYA NIKAL, BHOOL GAYA TERI RAHO KO KHIL DS PHOOL BNA GULAAL, TOODH DIYA APNI AAHOO KO |
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3rd January 2006, 04:05 PM
Bahout acha laga aap ke kalaam padhkar...Sudhir Ji !
Younhi likhte rahiyega aur parivaar main aap ka swaagat hai...! Apna khayaal rakhiyega...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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Thanks -
3rd January 2006, 04:25 PM
appne meri kavita ko read kiya uske liye
appka bahut bahut thanks main ange aur bhi likhta rahunga bas app jaise chahne walo ki nagre milni chahiye thanks jald hi 1 nei kavita ke sath hajir hota hu |
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3rd January 2006, 05:41 PM
Intazaar hai aap ki nayi kavita ki...! Dard ya Ishk forum main submit kijiyega...thik hai ?
Take care Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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5th January 2006, 04:44 PM
nice ....very nicely written
keep writtin No regrets they only HURT..!! |
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