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Punjabi sher -
5th December 2001, 03:58 AM
ne tu baksh gunah mere
ki me teriya bhula bhul java mainu sambhi rakhi naina ch kite hanju ban na dhul jawa phulpyar da jo murjha gaya kite inj na howesuk javve ki pata is zindagi da kis morte akeruk jaavvvee this is punjabi sher let me know friends hwo u like it..  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th December 2001, 11:41 PM
ne tu baksh gunah mere
ki me teriya bhula bhul java mainu sambhi rakhi naina ch kite hanju ban na dhul jawa phulpyar da jo murjha gaya kite inj na howesuk javve ki pata is zindagi da kis morte akeruk jaavvvee din o na deekhawi oye rabba teri yaad jado dilo tur jawe kuch hur na mangaa bas khair teri teri yaadan de wich din bhul jawe hun ki dasiye dil ki kenda je naayon yakeen te vekh le tu bin dhadkan de dil kij rehda teri aas te hun vi jinda haan teri aas na dilon mud jawe din o na deekhawi oye rabba..... |
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wah -
7th February 2003, 02:19 AM
wah mast shahab! aapne sher pura kar diya
eho je din na dhikwayi rabba teri yaad dila phul jaave wah wah Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Priya ji -
7th February 2003, 07:18 AM
priya ji, i liked it a lot, i hope to see more punjabi shers from you and other ppl as well. i think somehow it has its own deep meaning. i loved what u wrote. i hope u continue to write
take care please Ishiqka |
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RABBA YAAR MILA DE TU MERA......GHULAM ALI..... |
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RABBA YAAR MILA DE TU MERA......GHULAM ALI..... -
9th March 2005, 02:45 PM
Priya....
kujh do dinaan pehlaan ek post padi si.....te jawab vich ek geet chete aaya....kal raati bai ke likhya..... yeh Ghulam ali ji di gaayi hui ae.... gaur naal padyo..... Aunsiyaan paa paa din langde ne ….. Te rattan gin –gin taare….. Takk-takk sunjiyaan rahvaan nu….. Mere rounde nayn vichaare….. Rabba yaar mila de tu mera…… Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Kehda mul lagda hai tera….. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Mangaya si pyar, hawaan jholi vich payiaan ne….. Naal – naal yaar de bahar rus gayiaan ne….. Ehda hooya hai kasoor merto kehda….. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Rusya ki pyar saathon rus gayi khudaayi ae….. Nitt de vichode saadi zindadi rulaayi ae…. Daadda paya hi dukhaan ne mainu ghera…. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Thakk gaya lokaan kolon sun-sun boliyaan….. Manga main duvavaan rabba chuk-chuk jholiyaan…. Chetti paave sajjan ghar phera…. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Rabba tu garib diyaan aasaan kar puriyaan….. Mukk jaan lekha vichoon nitt diyaan dooriyan…. Mera vass pave suiyaan- suiyaan vehda….. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Kehda mul lagda hai tera….. Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. Rabba yaar mila de tu mera…… Main hoor kujh nahi mangda….. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: Punjabi sher -
28th September 2005, 06:07 AM
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AWESOME>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Aansoon..... sambhal ke rakhna.... Kissi ke liye yeh anmol hain... |
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