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Originally Posted by D33P
last line vadia c....bt j ik particular tone ch likhiya hunda ta effective hunda shyd...
may b kuj es tra..
Teri yaad nu seene vicchoN kaddh sakaN
eh mere vass da rog nahiN
kise agle janam te aas sadi,
es janam ta milia sanjog nahi.
meri maut te shyd rove koi,
meri zindgi da kise nu sog nahi.
oh haal puchan dilo,dil vich rakhn dya,
na na ene chnge ta shehr mere de log nahi.
rabba "deep" di iko sun lai.
hor jyada da mainu lobh nahi........
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hmmm main ta ji aiwe j akhar jod k likhda...
kise di latt fad laina ,kise di banh...
hehheheehhehe.
tuhadi soch vadia..likhde raho :-)
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Deep ji...you have done a great job...keep it up..