chand falak par-ishaq-ek junoon

[coolrohit]

chand falak par itra rha h aaj
koi bekhudi ki aarzu bikhra rha h aaj
use chhoone ka khwab kbhi pala to wo door jata raha
usko ehsaso me dhala to dil-e noor jalata raha
uske afsano ki sougaat me mai dil bahlata raha
ek arse k baad jamano me wo itra rha h aaj
koi ankahi si aarzu bikhra rha h aaj
use din raat chahte rahe,hal-e-dil usko sunate rahe
jab na dikha amawas ki raato me ,tasveer se dil bahlate rahe
or poornima ki chandni raato me uska daman sahlate rahe
wo rooth na jaye is dil se ,shamma parwano ki jalate rahe
phir bhi aaj dil todkar khud ko baadlo me chhipa raha h aaj
kaise kahu q chand falak par itra raha h aaj
mujhse u door jakar bhi apni khusbu bikhra rha h aaj!!!
rohit-ishaq-ek junoon

[Hamdam]

Rohit ji aap ki imagination aur ehsaas bahut ache lage.yun hi mehnat karte rahiye
aap ek achche kavi ban sakte hain.
Akhir ki line mein khushbu ki jagah chandni likhte to jyada khubsurat hota.

Regds
sanjay sehgal

[sameer'shaad']

bahot khoob , bahot pyaare ehsaas.............. likhte rahiye.

[coolrohit]

dhanywad bilkul koshish karenge

[nishasharma1490]

bhot badiya rohit ji bhot khoob ap to ram kasam maar he daloge..
Chaliye ab ek sher humari taraf se
Ishq Key Khayaal Bohat Hain..
Ishq Key Charche Bohat Hain..
Sochte Hain Hum Bhi Kar Le Ishq..
Par Sunte Hain Ishq Mein Kharche Bohat Hain..

[coolrohit]

kya baat kya baat nisha ji bhut khub

[nishasharma1490]

bhot bhot shukariya rohit ji...