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16th July 2014, 05:43 PM
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Naaz.. this is for you:-
hai yaQeeN k khatam hooN gay ayaam-e-khalwat..
phir hum bhi khoob lootieN gay maza-e-ulfat...
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Waaah waaah bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!! Aur "khalwat - ulfat" kya bhi kya lutf paida kiya hain!! Waaahhh !!!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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16th July 2014, 05:48 PM
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lijiye, aur ek
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Khalvat-nashii.n* hoo.n haath me.n khaalii hai baadiyaa*
hai intezaar ki aake pilaaye labo.n se wo
khalvat-nashii.n = sitting in isolation/seclusion ; baadiyaa = goblet
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Waaahhh !!!! Bahaut khoob !! Jazba-e-ishq ko ek ek rindaanaa rang dekar pesh kiya hai !! Waah !!! Aur "khalvat-nasheen" jumle se bhi ahl-e-mehfil ko waaqif karaaya!! Dheron daad Aadeil bhai !!
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17th July 2014, 12:48 PM
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Waaah waaah bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!! Aur "khalwat - ulfat" kya bhi kya lutf paida kiya hain!! Waaahhh !!!!
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17th July 2014, 01:14 PM
hum aadi-e-khalwat, shamil-e-jalwat nahi hona!!
haiN bohat ba-murrawwat, be-murawwat nahi hona...
khalwat = solitude
jalwat = crowd
ba-murawwat = affable
be-murawwat = disobliging
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17th July 2014, 10:01 PM
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hum aadi-e-khalwat, shamil-e-jalwat nahi hona!!
haiN bohat ba-murrawwat, be-murawwat nahi hona...
khalwat = solitude
jalwat = crowd
ba-murawwat = affable
be-murawwat = disobliging
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Waah waah Hassan sahab ! Bahaut khoob !
Khalwat - Jalwat X Bemurawwat - Bamurawwat .....
Kya khoob construct banaaya hai !! Bahaut si daad !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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17th July 2014, 10:04 PM
majma ushshaaq ka laga paayeiN
jo bhi khalwat meiN milne jaate haiN
-zarraa
majma = crowd
ushshaaq = lovers
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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17th July 2014, 10:18 PM
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majma ushshaaq ka laga paayeiN
jo bhi khalwat meiN milne jaate haiN
-zarraa
majma = crowd
ushshaaq = lovers
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wahhhhhh... boht khoob Zarra saheb.....
boht aala darjay ka shair biyaaN kiya hai,,
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17th July 2014, 10:23 PM
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lijiye, aur ek
ek adnaa si koshish..
Khalvat-nashii.n* hoo.n haath me.n khaalii hai baadiyaa*
hai intezaar ki aake pilaaye labo.n se wo
khalvat-nashii.n = sitting in isolation/seclusion ; baadiyaa = goblet
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boht boht khoob Aadil jiii....
be-had pasand aaya mujhe aap ka yeh shair...
younhi hii humaiN mehzooz karta rahiye ga,,
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17th July 2014, 10:24 PM
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Waah waah Hassan sahab ! Bahaut khoob !
Khalwat - Jalwat X Bemurawwat - Bamurawwat .....
Kya khoob construct banaaya hai !! Bahaut si daad !!!
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Zarra saheb,,
Na-cheez ko itni pazeraayi bakhshne k liye
be-had shuker guzaar hooN...
apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,
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17th July 2014, 10:42 PM
janay! Rab kis se raazi hai....!!!
woh parda-nasheeN, hum khalwat-nasheeN....
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18th July 2014, 12:28 AM
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Hassan too good yaar tumne to khalwat par kitne hi sher likh diye....mujhse to ek hi ban pai mushkilse
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koshish karne meiN kia harj hai... try it!
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18th July 2014, 12:36 AM
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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.
koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows
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wahh...... too good... seems like, my motivation works..
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18th July 2014, 12:38 AM
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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.
koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows
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change of mood...
khalwat meiN chupay dard ko woh kia janay!
woh shaks to hur waqt shararat meiN rehta hai....
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18th July 2014, 01:20 AM
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Nice one....now here's my reply
Meri sharartoN ko na samajh behisii
Khalwat meiN behte ashq baateiN nahiN kartey
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wahh.. subhan Allah.. boht khoob..
kyuN na biyaaN kar dooNh aaj ehwaal-e-shab-o-roZ!
kabhi ulfat, kabhi nafrat, kabhi jalwat, kabhi khalwat...
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18th July 2014, 01:22 AM
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Yes it did worked......thank you
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pleasures are all mine...........
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18th July 2014, 06:08 PM
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wahhhhhh... boht khoob Zarra saheb.....
boht aala darjay ka shair biyaaN kiya hai,,
teh-e-dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye...
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Tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN Hassan sahab !!!
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18th July 2014, 06:14 PM
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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.
koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows
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Waah !! Ek khoobsurat soz hai sher meiN !! Bahaut khoob N@zneen ji !!
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18th July 2014, 06:17 PM
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change of mood...
khalwat meiN chupay dard ko woh kia janay!
woh shaks to hur waqt shararat meiN rehta hai....
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Waah !! Bahaut khoob !! Khalwat meiN kya kya chhupa hota hai kaun jaan sakta hai !!
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18th July 2014, 06:18 PM
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Nice one....now here's my reply
Meri sharartoN ko na samajh behisii
Khalwat meiN behte ashq baateiN nahiN kartey
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Waaahh!! Behad gehra khayaal !!
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18th July 2014, 06:39 PM
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lijiye, aur ek
ek adnaa si koshish..
Khalvat-nashii.n* hoo.n haath me.n khaalii hai baadiyaa*
hai intezaar ki aake pilaaye labo.n se wo
khalvat-nashii.n = sitting in isolation/seclusion ; baadiyaa = goblet
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vo piyale ka brand name kya hai...jo peena chahte ho?
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18th July 2014, 10:06 PM
qit'a arz hai "fusoon-e-alfaaz" ke ab tak ke chhote se safar par ...
kis ki yaadoN ka ye fusoon hai jo
khalwatoN ko sajaaye jaata hai
kal ke daar-o-rasan ki fikr ho kyooN
kal ka bosa hi yaad aata hai
-zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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18th July 2014, 10:14 PM
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qit'a arz hai "fusoon-e-alfaaz" ke ab tak ke chhote se safar par ...
kis ki yaadoN ka ye fusoon hai jo
khalwatoN ko sajaaye jaata hai
kal ke daar-o-rasan ki fikr ho kyooN
kal ka bosa hi yaad aata hai
-zarraa
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wah subhan Allah.....
Zarra saheb... kamal ka kamal hai.... lajawaab..
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18th July 2014, 10:32 PM
Zarra saheb aap k qit'a ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay hue :-
fusooN-e-ishQ meiN giraftaar
aaj khalwatooN ki hai yalghaar
intezaam-e-daar-o-rasan se qabal!
ik bosa-e-yaar ke talabgaar…..
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18th July 2014, 10:46 PM
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Zarra saheb aap k qit'a ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay hue :-
fusooN-e-ishQ meiN
giraftaar
aaj khalwatooN ki hai yalghaar
intezaam-e-daar-o-rasan se qabal!
ik bosa-e-yaar ke talabgaar…..
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Waahhh !! Bahaut khoob !!
Bhai, aap ki shayari kehne ki speed to kamaal ki hai !!! Itne waqt mein to main ek misra bhi naheen keh paata jitne mein aap ne poora qit'a farma diya hai!!! Aap to shayari ke computer jaise haiN :
Ek baar phir se daad !!!
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18th July 2014, 11:21 PM
Aadaab Zaarraa bhaee!! Ayk chota sa tanz o mazah mayn tar paysh e qidmat baye....
Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
Turbat hamaaree banaanay lagay wo!!
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18th July 2014, 11:32 PM
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Aadaab Zaarraa bhaee!! Ayk chota sa tanz o mazah mayn tar paysh e qidmat baye....
Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
Turbat hamaaree banaanay lagay wo!!
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wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!! tanz meiN bhi ek gehree fiqr hai Ahmad bhai !!!!!
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18th July 2014, 11:46 PM
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wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!! tanz meiN bhi ek gehree fiqr hai Ahmad bhai !!!!!
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Zahenaseeb!!
bhaee aapki muhabbat wa khuloos haye jo aapko yay shayr e baykaar mayn bhi mafhoom nazar aayaa!! Saahab aap nahee jaantay aapkay is amal e nayk say kitnay talbaa ko nafa pahunch raha haye aur zubaan e urdu ke tahaffuz mayn aap ka hissaa aapkay takhallus say mukammal taur zid mayn haye... inshaAllah history will tell your contribution....some may laugh at my comment here but I simply don't care...coz time never stops.....
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Waahhh !! Bahaut khoob !!
Bhai, aap ki shayari kehne ki speed to kamaal ki hai !!! Itne waqt mein to main ek misra bhi naheen keh paata jitne mein aap ne poora qit'a farma diya hai!!! Aap to shayari ke computer jaise haiN :
Ek baar phir se daad !!!
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hahaha....
boht shukriyaaH aik anookhi tareef k liye
Younhi miltay rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
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19th July 2014, 12:09 AM
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Aadaab Zaarraa bhaee!! Ayk chota sa tanz o mazah mayn tar paysh e qidmat baye....
Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
Turbat hamaaree banaanay lagay wo!!
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wahhh boht khoob Ahmad bhai....
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19th July 2014, 11:13 AM
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Zahenaseeb!!
bhaee aapki muhabbat wa khuloos haye jo aapko yay shayr e baykaar mayn bhi mafhoom nazar aayaa!! Saahab aap nahee jaantay aapkay is amal e nayk say kitnay talbaa ko nafa pahunch raha haye aur zubaan e urdu ke tahaffuz mayn aap ka hissaa aapkay takhallus say mukammal taur zid mayn haye... inshaAllah history will tell your contribution....some may laugh at my comment here but I simply don't care...coz time never stops.....
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Ahmad sahab ... I am speechless at your generosity ... with all humility I thank you profusely for your extremely kind words ... aap ki lagaataar mil rahi hausla afzaayee se mera azm-e-khidmat-e-bazm aur bhi pakka hua hai, aap ko dheron duaein ..
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19th July 2014, 11:15 AM
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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19th July 2014, 01:17 PM
doston ... lafz "khalwat" par discussion aaj midnight (India time) tak rahega ... phir naya lafz
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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19th July 2014, 01:37 PM
Oh itni jaldi char din hogaye...yeh waqt itni tezi se kyun bhaag raha hai. ...ufff... ..
.sorry zarra sahab is baar apna sher banane ka waqt hi nahi mila
Khair ek pasandida sher share karti huun..pata nahi kiska hai
Kabhi Yaad Aaye to Poochna, Apni Khalwat e Shaam Sey
Kisey Ishq Tha Teri Zaat Sey Kisey Pyar Tha Teray Naam Se
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Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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Oh itni jaldi char din hogaye...yeh waqt itni tezi se kyun bhaag raha hai. ...ufff... ..
.sorry zarra sahab is baar apna sher banane ka waqt hi nahi mila
Khair ek pasandida sher share karti huun..pata nahi kiska hai
Kabhi Yaad Aaye to Poochna, Apni Khalwat e Shaam Sey
Kisey Ishq Tha Teri Zaat Sey Kisey Pyar Tha Teray Naam Se
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aap ke sher ki kami to mehsoos hogi Zainy ji, par aapne ek bahaut hi khoobsurat sher share kar ke bhi hamaari koshish meiN achchha saath diya hai ..
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19th July 2014, 10:32 PM
hum ne socha tha ki ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish huwee khalwat meiN bhi aane ke baad
- zarraa
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Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya N@zneen ji !
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yeh to hamari khushnaseebi hai Zarraa saheb..
Younhi miltay rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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19th July 2014, 11:14 PM
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Originally Posted by zarraa
hum ne socha tha ki ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish huwee khalwat meiN bhi aane ke baad
- zarraa
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wahh.... aik achhotay khiyaal k liye dherooN daad...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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19th July 2014, 11:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
wahh.... aik achhotay khiyaal k liye dherooN daad...
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nawazish Hassan bhai ......
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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19th July 2014, 11:34 PM
Zarra saheb khalwat per aakhiri shair arz hai:-
khalwat-e-jana ka kia zikr karieN ae saheb!
umar to beet gayi hai... jaan bhi chali jaye gi.......
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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