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Smile Meri gustakhnigahiyaan !!!!!! - 8th September 2014, 10:10 PM

Aankho mein jaise saadgi poori sama gayi !
Ashkon se lad ke aashiqui honto pe aa gayi !!

Palkon ki harkaten kahin saansen na rok de !
Unke liye kahin hum sabko na chod de !!

Dil hai har roj ek khwab dekhta hai !
Neele dupatte me lipta gulaab dekhta hai !!

Sajde mein sar jhukana ab ho gaya hai aasan !
Rahon ko ghar batana ab ho gaya hai aasan !!

Manzil bahut hai door per humsafar yahin hai !
Phike hain saare rang per daaman abhi wahi hai !!

Barbadiyon ke daur ki parwaah ab nahi hai !
Naakamiyon ki ISHQ me aukaat bas yahi hai !!

Ek aag hai jo dil mein kab se dabi hui hai !
Aawaz hai ke honton pe aa ke ruk gayi hai !!

Khamosh hai ye mausam khamosh hain nazaare !
Bas chand hai falak per dhundhle pade sitaare !!

Shaayar nahi hoon main meri majbooriyon ko samjho !
Aashiq hoon tumhara khamoshiyon ko samjho !!
   
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Pankaj Mishra ji...aap ki har shayri bahut khoobsurat hai, aap to bahut umda shayar hai...har shayri aapki hame bahut pasand aa rhi hai...aur sachi baat kahu, ham aapse aik sawaal poochna chahte hai agar aap bura na maane to...!
Kya yeh sab gazleN aapki apni likhi hue hai ??
kyuki aap nye shayar nahi lagte, aapki kalam lagta hai shayri ka bahut safar kar chuki hai...!

regards & thanku


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9th September 2014, 10:35 AM

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Pankaj Mishra ji...aap ki har shayri bahut khoobsurat hai, aap to bahut umda shayar hai...har shayri aapki hame bahut pasand aa rhi hai...aur sachi baat kahu, ham aapse aik sawaal poochna chahte hai agar aap bura na maane to...!
Kya yeh sab gazleN aapki apni likhi hue hai ??
kyuki aap nye shayar nahi lagte, aapki kalam lagta hai shayri ka bahut safar kar chuki hai...!

regards & thanku

Ji mere sheron ko sarahne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aur Sunita virender ji isme bura lagne wali koi baat nahi hai...asliyat to ye hai ki hum likhte likhte ye bhul gaye ki sawaar ke rakhna bhi ek zimmedaari hai.....pahele diaries me likha phir facebook par bhi likh diya.....waqt ki kami thi so kabhi hunar be-parda na ho saka......13 saal puraana shauk hai......ab aadat aur jine ki wajah banta ja raha hai........Thank u so much for having given me a patient hearing.....
   
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Smile dil se shukriya - 9th September 2014, 10:41 AM

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Ji mere sheron ko sarahne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aur Sunita virender ji isme bura lagne wali koi baat nahi hai...asliyat to ye hai ki hum likhte likhte ye bhul gaye ki sawaar ke rakhna bhi ek zimmedaari hai.....pahele diaries me likha phir facebook par bhi likh diya.....waqt ki kami thi so kabhi hunar be-parda na ho saka......13 saal puraana shauk hai......ab aadat aur jine ki wajah banta ja raha hai........Thank u so much for having given me a patient hearing.....

Pankaj ji

bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne hamare sawaal ka tafseel meiN jawaab diya...bhagwaan kare ki aapki kalam shayri ki bulandiyoN ko chuye...ameeN



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bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne hamare sawaal ka tafseel meiN jawaab diya...bhagwaan kare ki aapki kalam shayri ki bulandiyoN ko chuye...ameeN


U R welcome Sunita jee..........Thank u so much


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9th September 2014, 11:07 AM

waaaahh! Pankaj jii,

Bohat umdaaH aur behtareen peshkash hai ....

Bohat si daad aap ko iss kalaam ke liye!

likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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waaaahh! Pankaj jii,

Bohat umdaaH aur behtareen peshkash hai ....

Bohat si daad aap ko iss kalaam ke liye!

likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,



Thanks hassan ji !!!!!!! bahut bahut shukriya


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