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Love Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana! - 3rd September 2009, 09:31 PM

Is nacheez ke qalam se ISHQ k jazbe se bharpor
aik mohabbat bhari Shayri Arz hai:

Ghazal-cum-Poem

Hur bar woh kehti, abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana
Hur bar main kehta na mumkin hai jaldi laut aana

Yahi takrar roz ka mamool ban gayi
Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana

Jab Jab woh kehti,

Samajh main jata PYAR sara,
Samajh main jata KHIYAL sara,
Samajh main jata QARAR sara,
Samajh main jata INTEZAAR sara,

K....Usko mujh se hai Pyar boht,
tabhi to kahe jaldi laut aana

Sab Kaam aadhey adhoray chor kar main mumkin banata
"jaldi laut aana"

Mere jaldi ghar laut aane se woh boht khush hoti
k HSN ko hai khiyaal boht

Jab k sach to yeh hai ke,
Han! Mujhe hai apna khiyaal boht

Agar main jaldi na laut jaon
To main us ko karon yaad boht

Ussi ke liye main ghar jaldi laut jaon
Ke usko hota tha intezaar boht

Ab woh nahi to kis liye Jaldi laut Jaon???

Ab to kaano mein sirf ik awaz gonjti hai

"Abhi Agar Jana to Jaldi Laut Aana....."

(Hassan Rasheed)

Kesa laga, sab ko bataiye ga zaroor...
   
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4th September 2009, 05:03 PM

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Is nacheez ke qalam se ISHQ k jazbe se bharpor
aik mohabbat bhari Shayri Arz hai:

Ghazal-cum-Poem

Hur bar woh kehti, abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana
Hur bar main kehta na mumkin hai jaldi laut aana

Yahi takrar roz ka mamool ban gayi
Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana

Jab Jab woh kehti,

Samajh main jata PYAR sara,
Samajh main jata KHIYAL sara,
Samajh main jata QARAR sara,
Samajh main jata INTEZAAR sara,

K....Usko mujh se hai Pyar boht,
tabhi to kahe jaldi laut aana

Sab Kaam aadhey adhoray chor kar main mumkin banata
"jaldi laut aana"

Mere jaldi ghar laut aane se woh boht khush hoti
k HSN ko hai khiyaal boht

Jab k sach to yeh hai ke,
Han! Mujhe hai apna khiyaal boht

Agar main jaldi na laut jaon
To main us ko karon yaad boht

Ussi ke liye main ghar jaldi laut jaon
Ke usko hota tha intezaar boht

Ab woh nahi to kis liye Jaldi laut Jaon???

Ab to kaano mein sirf ik awaz gonjti hai

"Abhi Agar Jana to Jaldi Laut Aana....."

(Hassan Rasheed)

Kesa laga, sab ko bataiye ga zaroor...
har lafz rote rote likha hai.............
ye baat tay hai........
   
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bahut dard mahsoos hua aapki poetry meiN - 4th September 2009, 05:17 PM

Hassan ji.........jo muje mahsoos hua padkar bilkul sach sach kahuNgi, aapki poetry padkar sach mein aisa mahsoos ho raha tha ki poori poetry hi aisi pyar bhari hogi, par last ki teen lines dard se bharpoor thi aur palko.n ke koney bheego gaye.....aur kya kahuN.


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4th September 2009, 07:43 PM

Dear Zidd!

Hansna aur Rona to zindagi ke sath sath hai,
Lekin khas kisi k liye hansna aur khas kisi k liye rona, koi koi kar sakta hai,
to kuch batien ya kuch lamhe aisey hote hain, jinhen yaad kar k dukh hota hai,
aur qalam khud ba khud uth jata hai aur kuch likh dia jata hai.

Apna khiyaal rakhiye,

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4th September 2009, 08:01 PM

Sunita Ji,

Dukh, sukh to insaan k saath saath hain,
kuch lamhey aise hote hain ke insaan ji bhar kar hansta hai,
aur kuch lamhey aisey bhayanak bhi aa jate hain k insaan ji bhar kar ro deta bhi hai.
Isi ka naam to zindagi hai....
to kuch baton kuch yadon ko yaad kar ke kuch likh dia jata hai,
aur is tarah woh batien woh yadien aur woh lamhey hamesha hamesha k liye
lafzon mein qaid ho jate hain.....

Khush rahiye ga,

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8th September 2009, 12:55 AM

Boht Nayab hote hain jinhen tum apna kehte ho,
Ijazat do k main bhi is qadar anmool ban jaon.....


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Ajeeb tarah se nakaam rahey hum dono "Mohsin"
Woh mujhe chah na saki, main usey bhula na saka....


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12th September 2009, 12:42 AM

Zabt karna gham chupana ab zarori ho gaya,
Rotay rotay muskurana ab zarori ho gaya,
Hath mera dekh k yeh mashwara dia us ne,
Kuch lakeron ko mitaana ab zarori ho gaya....


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Tumhare baad baqi or to sub theek hai lekin...!
Jahan DIL tha kabhi pehly wahan ab dard rehta hai ....


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17th September 2009, 06:52 PM

Mohabbat farz hoti ja rahi hai, kis ka qarz hoti ja rahi hai
Badan ko chaat lay gi yakenan mohabbat marz hoti ja rahi hai....!


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Tu ne abhi agar jana.......!
To Jaldi se laut aanaaaaaaaaaa.....>>>>>>


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2nd October 2009, 01:28 AM

Uska Shukrya kuch es tra se Ada karon
Wo kare Bewafai Mai Sada Wafa karon
Meri Muhabat ne bas itna Sikhaya mujhe
Khud Mit jaoon magar Us k lea DUAA karun


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7th October 2009, 02:22 PM

Hassan jee,

aap ki is poem ke ehesaas ne dil chhu liya...

aur to kya kahuN??

bas aise hee likhte rahiye aur mahefil sajaate rahiye

aap ki dost

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Hassan jee,

aap ki is poem ke ehesaas ne dil chhu liya...

aur to kya kahuN??

bas aise hee likhte rahiye aur mahefil sajaate rahiye

aap ki dost

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Purvi Jii,,

Shukar guzaar hon ke aap ko meray ehsasaat pasand aaye,
Aur meri hosla afzai ki....

Umeed hai k aagay bhi aisay hi aap ka saath milta rahy ga,

GOD BLESS YOU,


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8th October 2009, 08:57 PM

Tu rukhsat hua to hath mila kar nahi gaya
Tu kyun gaya, yeh bhi bata kar nahi gaya
Youn lag raha hai jesay abhi laut aao gay
Kyun k tu jalta hua chirag bhuja kar ni gaya


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9th October 2009, 11:00 AM

Dil Ko Dil se Churaaya Aap ne
Door Rehte Hue Apna Banaya Aap ne
Kabhi Bhool nahi Payein ge Hum Aap ko
Yaad Rakhna bhi To Sikhaya Aap ne


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hello hassan ji

kaise hai aap?
bahot khub likha hai aap ne
jo bhi main padh rahi thi mano mere nazaron ke saamne se ho kar guzar raha hai aisa lag raha tha....toh sochiyen kya asar kiya hai aap ki is poetry ne mujh par....sach mein behadh pasand aayi mujhe ye poetry
keep up n keep writing

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simply a very nice and emotional creation from ur side hassan bhai..
shuruaat se hi isme pyar ki jhalak mil rahi thi...
or aakhri line ne to aankh hi bhigo di..
sach me very nice thoughts
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kaise hai aap?
bahot khub likha hai aap ne
jo bhi main padh rahi thi mano mere nazaron ke saamne se ho kar guzar raha hai aisa lag raha tha....toh sochiyen kya asar kiya hai aap ki is poetry ne mujh par....sach mein behadh pasand aayi mujhe ye poetry
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Main theek hon, Aap kesi hain???
Yeh to aap ki zehra nawazi hai k apko meri composition phartay hue
sab kuch apni ankhon ke samnay hota mehsoos hua....

Aisay hi mera saath detay rahiye ga,,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

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simply a very nice and emotional creation from ur side hassan bhai..
shuruaat se hi isme pyar ki jhalak mil rahi thi...
or aakhri line ne to aankh hi bhigo di..
sach me very nice thoughts
aise hi likhte raho or
khush raho..


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Teh-e-dil se shukria.....
Ishq ka rutba to ishq karnay walay hi jantay hain Vicky Jiii...

Aap aisay hi mera saath detay rehna...

Apna khiyaal rakhiye,,

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Wo badgumaan hai tho souu baar aazmaaye muJhe

Main apni zaat mein neelam ho raha hoon 'qateel'
Gham-e-hayaat se keh do khareed laaye mujhe


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wahhhhhhh..... Hassan ji.... bahut khoob janab... bahut hi simple lafzon me aapne apne ehsaas pesh kiye jo dil me utar gaye....yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye.... khush rahiye....


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wahhhhhhh..... Hassan ji.... bahut khoob janab... bahut hi simple lafzon me aapne apne ehsaas pesh kiye jo dil me utar gaye....yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye.... khush rahiye....
Lamha Jii,,

Mere ehsaas kisi k dil meiN utar jayen,
boht badi baat hai mere liye......

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,

Faqat,,,


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ishk par bahut pyari kavita likhi hai ... ehsaas khoobsurat lage .. dil se daad hazir hai ... yuuhi likhte rahiye ...
IshQ Jii,

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aur paseendeedgi k liye main aap ka boht mashkoor hooN...

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Ghazal-cum-Poem

Hur bar woh kehti, abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana
Hur bar main kehta na mumkin hai jaldi laut aana

Yahi takrar roz ka mamool ban gayi
Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana

Jab Jab woh kehti,

Samajh main jata PYAR sara,
Samajh main jata KHIYAL sara,
Samajh main jata QARAR sara,
Samajh main jata INTEZAAR sara,

K....Usko mujh se hai Pyar boht,
tabhi to kahe jaldi laut aana

Sab Kaam aadhey adhoray chor kar main mumkin banata
"jaldi laut aana"

Mere jaldi ghar laut aane se woh boht khush hoti
k HSN ko hai khiyaal boht

Jab k sach to yeh hai ke,
Han! Mujhe hai apna khiyaal boht

Agar main jaldi na laut jaon
To main us ko karon yaad boht

Ussi ke liye main ghar jaldi laut jaon
Ke usko hota tha intezaar boht

Ab woh nahi to kis liye Jaldi laut Jaon???

Ab to kaano mein sirf ik awaz gonjti hai

"Abhi Agar Jana to Jaldi Laut Aana....."

(Hassan Rasheed)

Kesa laga, sab ko bataiye ga zaroor...
ji bhaut sunder....its too real........................



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ji bhaut sunder....its too real........................
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Khaak alfazooN ko itnii pazeeraayii dene k liye
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Aise hii saath dete rahiye ga,

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Hassan bhai ummeed karta hoon khush honge aap... muaafi chahunga ke is kalaam pe deree se nazar gai meri.. lekin jab padha to dil me dhaDkaa sa kuch lagaa... iski adaaygi jis tarah hui hai wo kaabile tareef hai.. aur har lafz beintehaan muhabbat se bhara huaa hai... mujh haqeer ki taraf se mubarakbaad kubool karen.. khush rahiye..

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Hassan bhai ummeed karta hoon khush honge aap... muaafi chahunga ke is kalaam pe deree se nazar gai meri.. lekin jab padha to dil me dhaDkaa sa kuch lagaa... iski adaaygi jis tarah hui hai wo kaabile tareef hai.. aur har lafz beintehaan muhabbat se bhara huaa hai... mujh haqeer ki taraf se mubarakbaad kubool karen.. khush rahiye..

shaad...

Shaad Bhai,

Aap ki tareef sir ankhooN per...

Aise hi saath dete rahiye,

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Hassan abhi tak maine tumhari jitni bhi creation padhi hun un sab mein ye sabse best hai in terms of feelings, it touched me very deeply....this is not just any creation from imagination you bared your true feelings in this exceptionally beautiful poem....i dont know if my observation is correct or not but i felt your longing in each and every word....simply outstanding.
Naaz,,

Thanks a lot for appreciation and your valuable time...

Actually I just described the love between two true lover souls,
the bond between them, the bond of love,
which can't be broken...

Yeah it's too real but in terms of feelings that how you respond to that feelings ..
if it's seems so real to you then, yes, you are a true lover.
that's just my opinion, you can argue..

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Pleasure is all mine



Very apt description of love, definitely u are or were in love



Yes i agree, i believe in love, love is life, its everything you can call me emotional fool

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No point arguing your poem is for all true lovers i agree
emotion fool or emotion cool? i think 2nd is better which may suits you...

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Is nacheez ke qalam se ISHQ k jazbe se bharpor
aik mohabbat bhari Shayri Arz hai:

Ghazal-cum-Poem

Hur bar woh kehti, abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana
Hur bar main kehta na mumkin hai jaldi laut aana

Yahi takrar roz ka mamool ban gayi
Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana

Jab Jab woh kehti,

Samajh main jata PYAR sara,
Samajh main jata KHIYAL sara,
Samajh main jata QARAR sara,
Samajh main jata INTEZAAR sara,

K....Usko mujh se hai Pyar boht,
tabhi to kahe jaldi laut aana

Sab Kaam aadhey adhoray chor kar main mumkin banata
"jaldi laut aana"

Mere jaldi ghar laut aane se woh boht khush hoti
k HSN ko hai khiyaal boht

Jab k sach to yeh hai ke,
Han! Mujhe hai apna khiyaal boht

Agar main jaldi na laut jaon
To main us ko karon yaad boht

Ussi ke liye main ghar jaldi laut jaon
Ke usko hota tha intezaar boht

Ab woh nahi to kis liye Jaldi laut Jaon???

Ab to kaano mein sirf ik awaz gonjti hai

"Abhi Agar Jana to Jaldi Laut Aana....."

(Hassan Rasheed)

Kesa laga, sab ko bataiye ga zaroor...
Waah hassan ji bahut hi achchi nazm....dil se likha hua ek ek alfaaz.....maine isme base huye dard aur ishq ke zazbaaton ko dil se mahsoos kiya....
Bahut khoob.....
Khush rahiye.....
Likhte rahiye....



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Is nacheez ke qalam se ISHQ k jazbe se bharpor
aik mohabbat bhari Shayri Arz hai:

Ghazal-cum-Poem

Hur bar woh kehti, abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana
Hur bar main kehta na mumkin hai jaldi laut aana

Yahi takrar roz ka mamool ban gayi
Abhi agar jana to jaldi laut aana

Jab Jab woh kehti,

Samajh main jata PYAR sara,
Samajh main jata KHIYAL sara,
Samajh main jata QARAR sara,
Samajh main jata INTEZAAR sara,

K....Usko mujh se hai Pyar boht,
tabhi to kahe jaldi laut aana

Sab Kaam aadhey adhoray chor kar main mumkin banata
"jaldi laut aana"

Mere jaldi ghar laut aane se woh boht khush hoti
k HSN ko hai khiyaal boht

Jab k sach to yeh hai ke,
Han! Mujhe hai apna khiyaal boht

Agar main jaldi na laut jaon
To main us ko karon yaad boht

Ussi ke liye main ghar jaldi laut jaon
Ke usko hota tha intezaar boht

Ab woh nahi to kis liye Jaldi laut Jaon???

Ab to kaano mein sirf ik awaz gonjti hai

"Abhi Agar Jana to Jaldi Laut Aana....."

(Hassan Rasheed)

Kesa laga, sab ko bataiye ga zaroor...

Hassan ji !!!!! bahut achche khayaal aur andaaz-e-sukhan ki peshkash thi ye poetry aapki........sawaal jo jawaab ban ke bhi sawaal hi reh gaya......."Jaldi laut aana"........ke liye aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad.....



Reps added.....


Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !!
(Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab')
   
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15th September 2014, 12:19 PM

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Waah hassan ji bahut hi achchi nazm....dil se likha hua ek ek alfaaz.....maine isme base huye dard aur ishq ke zazbaaton ko dil se mahsoos kiya....
Bahut khoob.....
Khush rahiye.....
Likhte rahiye....
Madhu jee,

Aap ki khaak alfaazoN ko itni tarjeeH bohat khushi ka sabab hai mere liye!

Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gi,

Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")
   
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