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Im new at shayri.com ,,,n i hope u guyz out dere like meh poetry - 26th October 2005, 03:31 PM
Ek uljhay howay khawab ki tarhaan
Zindagee hai sarrab ki tarhaan


Phir dil mein utri teri yaad .......
Mehkay howay gulab ki tarhaan


Tum to bhool jatay ho humein
Kissi bhoolay howay baabah ki tarhaan


Nadaan hein jo waqt ko rokhna chahey
Yeh rukhta nai dhaltay shabaab ki tarhaan


Yeh fakt teri meri kahani nai
Her dil mein hai aftab ki tarhaan


Sardiyun ki sard raatein bhi guzar raheen hein
Teray bagar tanhaan aazab ki tarhaan....
   
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26th October 2005, 08:17 PM
Yeh fakt teri meri kahani nai
Her dil mein hai aftab ki tarhaan



Bahut khoob Kiran ji...kaafi achchha likha hai aapne poori ki poori ghazal bahut pasand aayi.

yooNhi likhte rahiyega.

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26th October 2005, 09:31 PM
Bahit khoob kiran ji...


Welcome to family of shayri.com!!!

Take care & keep writting!
   
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27th October 2005, 01:58 AM
hi kiran....very well written..keep writing..take care dear.bye

"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
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29th October 2005, 06:20 AM
Hi Kiran ji,

Nice very nice... keep writing...

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hi - 4th November 2005, 02:20 PM
welcome.nice kalaam
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want to make u friend - 12th November 2005, 03:20 PM
hi kiran
i m also new and here is somthing for u

mahak ishk ki kabhi kam nahi hoti
zindagi se iski khushboo khatam nahi hoti
saath ho agar aap sa koi dost
to zindagi jannat se kam nahi hoti
   
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18th November 2005, 11:43 AM
i don think that u r a good poet,"u r best poet" 1st poem in such gr8 words and thoughts awesome



gr8888888 kiran u r best poet

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25th November 2005, 02:07 PM
nice veryy nice
keep such posts coming

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