burning punjab...plz read it

[ricky judge]

ssa dosto..eh meri shayri.com te pehli koshish hai..ithe deep bhaji te babbu bhaji warge mahaan shyar ne te ohne de sahmne te meri eh rachna khuch nahi..par ik umeed a ke tuc maan bakshoge...eh khuch pal punjab de maare dinne de thuadi nazar,,



aj subah uthde-uthde hi khiyaal aya.
Laage punjab ch kise chandri rooh da kangaal aya.
koi laawe aag, koi bhanhi janda ea keemti smaan.
khabre loka de dila ch kihra obaal aya.
Parhi jado akhbaar te pata laaga
ik waar fer dharam da moorhe swaal aya.

Eh sabh hunda vekh 84 da yaad haal aya.
Odo indra mari c te ajj sant ramanand
oh ta challe gaye par har waar bichara punjab hi hunda halaal aya.
84 de dangiya ch aakhde ho congress da c hath.
sajjan kumar, Tytler wargiya de kol odo dangiya di c nath.
par ajj ta akaaliya di v gandi raajneeti da saahmne malaal aya.

Lai ke sahara pavitar ravidass ji da ehna aj punjab larah ditta.
Maariya thuada dharam guru jattan ne eh keh bhambar bharka ditta.
Nashukriyo kiyun tuc paak rooh nu jaat-paat da adhaar banaya.

Nasamaj loki v saari jande ne busa,raila te dukaana.
khuch ni jaana ehna sarkara da bharna saade hi siro fer khijaana.
Mand-bhudhi loka nu aje tak nahi netaawa da paya samaj eh jaal aya.

Changa hunda je raaj desh te angreja da hi rehnda.
Ehna gandhiya,nehruya(gandhi,nehru) to gori chamri changi e bhagat singh c kehnda.
par aaj saanu apniyaa hi sarkaara ne gulaam banaya.

[ricky judge]

deep bhaji tuc jarror commnt diyo te galtiya daasiyo....

[D33P]

hahhahahaha.... pehli gal ta aini izzat bakshan lyi mehrbani,,,, te rahi gall tuhadi eh pehli post a,ta its awesome... eho ja ta main nai likh sakda ji.. tsi bht vadia likhia... tsi future ch bht agge javoge... u rocks man!.. keep it up..may god bless u.. n thanx 4 sharing.. eh sb sach tsi bakhoobi beyan kita, bt khyaal rakhio gurdass maan ji ne keha ik geet vich-sach da hoka de k jeeb ktaa le ga,bekdre loka vich kadar gwa le ga... take care.

[ricky judge]

Originally Posted by D33P

hahhahahaha.... pehli gal ta aini izzat bakshan lyi mehrbani,,,, te rahi gall tuhadi eh pehli post a,ta its awesome... eho ja ta main nai likh sakda ji.. tsi bht vadia likhia... tsi future ch bht agge javoge... u rocks man!.. keep it up..may god bless u.. n thanx 4 sharing.. eh sb sach tsi bakhoobi beyan kita, bt khyaal rakhio gurdass maan ji ne keha ik geet vich-sach da hoka de k jeeb ktaa le ga,bekdre loka vich kadar gwa le ga... take care.

Bhaji bahut-2 shukriya..bhaji jo tuc likh sakde o oh sdc te koi v nahi likh sakda...baki baba gurdass ji di gal oh ta sahi a par osdin punjab de halaat dekh ke khuch likhan nu dil keeta ta koshish keeti c....