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Dosto Shiv Kumar Batalvi mere pasandida poet haiN, unko maiN aksar sunti hoon aur aaj dil hua kyuN na unko yahan aap sabke saath bhi share karooN. Vaise to wo punjabi poet hain aur ho sakta hai ki bahut se member unko na bhi jaante hoN par koi punjabi unko na jaanta ho yeh na-mumkin hai.






SHIV KUMAR BATALVI - A BIOGRAPHY

Shiv Kumar was born in Bara Pind Lohtian (Shakargarh tehsil), in Punjab (now Pakistan). Shiv’s date of birth as recorded on his horoscope is July 23, 1936, while a latter birth date, October 23, 1937 is recorded on his matriculation certificate that was the only official birth record at that time. His father was a Patwari by the name of Pandit Krishan Gopal. After the partition his family moved to Batala. As a child Shiv is said to have been fascinated by birds and rugged, thorny plants on the Punjabi landscape. Shiv was exposed to the ramlila at an early age, and it is to be expected that he received what was later to become his instinctive understanding of drama from these early performances.

Shiv passed his matriculate exams in 1953, from Punjab University. He went on to enroll in the F.Sc. programme at Baring Union Christian College in Batala. Before completing his degree he moved to S.N. College, Qadian into their Arts program. It is here that he began to sing ghazals and songs for his class-mates. Shiv never gave the final exams he needed to pass to receive his degree.

Around this period, he met a girl named Maina at a fair in Baijnath. When he went back to look for her in her hometown, he heard the news of her death and wrote his elegy 'Maina'. This episode was to prefigure numerous other partings that would serve as material to distill into poems. Perhaps the most celebrated such episode is his fascination for Gurbaksh Singh's daughter who left for the US and married someone else. When he heard of the birth of her first child, Shiv wrote 'Main ek shikra yaar banaya', perhaps his most famous love poem.

In 1965 Shiv won the Sahitya Akademi award for his verse-drama Loona.

He married on Feb 5, 1967. His wife Aruna was a Brahmin from Kir Mangyal in district Gurdaspur. By all accounts Shiv had a happy marriage. He had two children, Meharbaan (b. Apr. 12, 1968) and Puja (b. Sep. 23, 1969) whom he loved immensely.

By 1968 he had moved to Chandigarh, but both Batala and Chandigarh became soulless in his eyes. Chandigarh brought him fame, but scathing criticism as well, Shiv replied with an article titled 'My hostile critics'. Meanwhile his epilepsy got worse and he had a serious attack while at a store in Chandigarh's Sector 22.

Shiv Kumar Batalvi, the poet, literally dominated poetic gatherings in his short life.

In the early 70's Shiv came to Bombay for a literary conference. In keeping with Shiv's outrageous behaviour there is a story about his trip to Bombay as well. Part of the conference involved readings at Shanmukananda hall. After a few people had read their work (one of whom was Meena Kumari), Shiv got on the stage and began "Almost everyone today has begun to consider themselves a poet, each and every person off the streets is writing ghazals". By the time he'd finished with his diatribe, there was not a sound in the hall. This is when he began to read 'Ek kuri jeeda naam mohabbat. gum hai, gum hai...'. There wasn't a sound when he finished either.

Another thing great about Shiv, was that he wrote one poem :-

PRABH JI SAANU IK GIIT UDHAARAA HOR DEYO

By saying, "Prabh Ji Saanu Ik Giit Udhaaraa Hor Deyo", Shiv gave all credit for his writings to The Almighty God, as if all his poetry was from that Divine Power. This speaks of his spritual leanings. This was the greatness of a poet who wrote best of the Punjabi Giits but according to him it was only God who had bestowed on him the power to write and he had nothing, of his own, to write or say.

Shiv has been called a Bohemian. There were complaints about his drinking and some suggestions that his 'friends' had him drink so he would exhibit his outrageous self.

Shiv Kumar died in the 36th year of his life on May 7, 1973 in his father-in-law's house at Kir Mangyal near Pathankot.

Here is a live interview of Shiv with Mahendra Kaul in London :-


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgpSH...layer_embedded


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Dosto Shiv Kumar Batalvi mere pasandida poet haiN, unko maiN aksar sunti hoon aur aaj dil hua kyuN na unko yahan aap sabke saath bhi share karooN. Vaise to wo punjabi poet hain aur ho sakta hai ki bahut se member unko na bhi jaante hoN par koi punjabi unko na jaanta ho yeh na-mumkin hai.






SHIV KUMAR BATALVI - A BIOGRAPHY

Shiv Kumar was born in Bara Pind Lohtian (Shakargarh tehsil), in Punjab (now Pakistan). Shiv’s date of birth as recorded on his horoscope is July 23, 1936, while a latter birth date, October 23, 1937 is recorded on his matriculation certificate that was the only official birth record at that time. His father was a Patwari by the name of Pandit Krishan Gopal. After the partition his family moved to Batala. As a child Shiv is said to have been fascinated by birds and rugged, thorny plants on the Punjabi landscape. Shiv was exposed to the ramlila at an early age, and it is to be expected that he received what was later to become his instinctive understanding of drama from these early performances.

Shiv passed his matriculate exams in 1953, from Punjab University. He went on to enroll in the F.Sc. programme at Baring Union Christian College in Batala. Before completing his degree he moved to S.N. College, Qadian into their Arts program. It is here that he began to sing ghazals and songs for his class-mates. Shiv never gave the final exams he needed to pass to receive his degree.

Around this period, he met a girl named Maina at a fair in Baijnath. When he went back to look for her in her hometown, he heard the news of her death and wrote his elegy 'Maina'. This episode was to prefigure numerous other partings that would serve as material to distill into poems. Perhaps the most celebrated such episode is his fascination for Gurbaksh Singh's daughter who left for the US and married someone else. When he heard of the birth of her first child, Shiv wrote 'Main ek shikra yaar banaya', perhaps his most famous love poem.

In 1965 Shiv won the Sahitya Akademi award for his verse-drama Loona.

He married on Feb 5, 1967. His wife Aruna was a Brahmin from Kir Mangyal in district Gurdaspur. By all accounts Shiv had a happy marriage. He had two children, Meharbaan (b. Apr. 12, 1968) and Puja (b. Sep. 23, 1969) whom he loved immensely.

By 1968 he had moved to Chandigarh, but both Batala and Chandigarh became soulless in his eyes. Chandigarh brought him fame, but scathing criticism as well, Shiv replied with an article titled 'My hostile critics'. Meanwhile his epilepsy got worse and he had a serious attack while at a store in Chandigarh's Sector 22.

Shiv Kumar Batalvi, the poet, literally dominated poetic gatherings in his short life.

In the early 70's Shiv came to Bombay for a literary conference. In keeping with Shiv's outrageous behaviour there is a story about his trip to Bombay as well. Part of the conference involved readings at Shanmukananda hall. After a few people had read their work (one of whom was Meena Kumari), Shiv got on the stage and began "Almost everyone today has begun to consider themselves a poet, each and every person off the streets is writing ghazals". By the time he'd finished with his diatribe, there was not a sound in the hall. This is when he began to read 'Ek kuri jeeda naam mohabbat. gum hai, gum hai...'. There wasn't a sound when he finished either.

Another thing great about Shiv, was that he wrote one poem :-

PRABH JI SAANU IK GIIT UDHAARAA HOR DEYO

By saying, "Prabh Ji Saanu Ik Giit Udhaaraa Hor Deyo", Shiv gave all credit for his writings to The Almighty God, as if all his poetry was from that Divine Power. This speaks of his spritual leanings. This was the greatness of a poet who wrote best of the Punjabi Giits but according to him it was only God who had bestowed on him the power to write and he had nothing, of his own, to write or say.

Shiv has been called a Bohemian. There were complaints about his drinking and some suggestions that his 'friends' had him drink so he would exhibit his outrageous self.

Shiv Kumar died in the 36th year of his life on May 7, 1973 in his father-in-law's house at Kir Mangyal near Pathankot.

Here is a live interview of Shiv with Mahendra Kaul in London :-


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgpSH...layer_embedded
Around this period, he met a girl named Maina at a fair in Baijnath. When he went back to look for her in her hometown, he heard the news of her death and wrote his elegy 'Maina'.

kya Maina poem, ya usse relation koe bhi information mil sakti hai

baijnath is my hometown....... plzz
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Shiv as the traditional poetical phenomenon was born out of the literary conjugation (Kalmi sanjog) of Amrita Pritam and Mohan Singh, to whom he appropriately dedicated his most important creation -Briha too Sultan-. Both Amrita and Mohan had personally suffered in their respective love lives on account of circumstances beyond their control. In their romanticism therefore, a personal tinge of desperation was in-evitable. Punjabi character is far more emotional, both in happiness as well as sadness, than all other peoples- of the Indian subcontinent. To succeed as a poet, therefore, one must succeed in making people cry as well as bursting into hilarious laughter with the flow of the lines. In contradiction to Amrita and Mohan, Shiv therefore, developed the most superb art of recitation. He will be long remembered, like Heer Warris Shah, for this emotional rendering of whatever he wrote. I was deeply impressed by his exposition of this vivid magic in the very first Kavita that he gave at our house - -Ki puchde ho hal fakiran da-. This ren-dering has the touch of Sehgal-s voice - -])ukhh ke Aab din bitad nahin- Shiv like Sehgal had the inborn gift of soul-touching expression. He needed words and lines and in this he had the help of his creators more than anyone else past or present. I feel that in her enthusiasm to present her -poetic-child- to the world Amrita herself became too emotional in giving an unnecessary notoriety to Shiv as a heart-throwing lover (dil-pheank ashiq.).

Any healthy child experiences love-stings like Shiv and dreams love dreams like he did, but every child cannot be a poet. In the lines that are attributed to this side of Shiv-s creation there is the show of an irksome mockery. Every effort had been made to present him as a love-torn lover; as a half living, babbling corpse of love-s treachery. True to his creators he was expounding all his life a love-lost theme, which was not, his own but was someone else-s. He was never allowed to grow up beyond this slippery, muddy stage of deception with alcohol and tobacco in his body and love-potions in his mind. But Shiv violently protested against this utter subjugation. In his -Main to Main- he says:-

-O mere sirjko
Tan de trashanhar butkaro
Tuhadi wansh wich hun bal nahin
1k swal jamna si
Jida uttar wi moran ton
Tusan sabna sen sangna si
Te jad men oodri thup nen
Mere jungle choun langna si
Taan bhuldi sabiyata men
Shaher de moran to khangna si

He had tried to find himself in his own self. Similar effort has been made again and again in -Loona-. I feel sure that as time passes on people will try to find out more of the philosophy of his life butt at the occasion of the first national meeting that is being held in London to remember Shiv.

I wish to add my own appreciation of the man who came in our life only for a few brief moments. I had not heard of him in India and met him for the first time when I went to receive him at Heathrow. I was not aware of his poetry either.
During all his stay in England I had never found him sober, but he was wonderful to his onlookers, a joke to his critics, and an enigma to himself. What I have written so far is the expression of a mixture of feelings that Shiv generated. But he had something really unique in him which would have him a place of pride among poets of the Punjab. He will be remembered long after his contemporaries would be forgotten for having brought to the Punjabi Kavita a true expression of the Punjabi cultural panorama.

Although he has written on a variety of themes, the main theme in Shiv-s Poetry is Chet, Chandni, Joban rutan, Bhalke - nah - rehna. He writes

Phul di mahek mare
Par agg di mahek na mardi.

A flower does not die only its odour disappears

That is why he wished after death to become first a star and then a second choice a flower to pervade on the earth and sky, be here day or night. A shining star gives its odour in its twinkling - the fire of love. Shiv was himself a fiery person. His laughter was tinged with fire of inner grief and showed a perpetual depression - a fiery depression. He was depressed, is no doubt.

--Main niki umren sara dard banda baetha
eadi joban rat lahi dard kenwars hor deo-

In the parts of the Siwaliks there grow wild trees of har sangar (cyctanthes- arbor - tristis). The whole tree flowers around the early hours of the morning and fully grown white - dreamy - tinged with orange flowers fall down almost in rain before daybreak. It is a wonder-ful sight to see this spread of flowers, a massacre of youthful beauty. These are picked up, wovwn into garlands and tied around hair knots by young village lassies. Bushes of chamba and chambeli have also fully grown white creamy flowers that fall in the same way, but not so spectacularly. Chambe-di-kali flower buds are more commonly attributed to chamba. I am sure Shiv as a child must have been impressed by this dramatic death of the full grown youthful flowers, dying at the height of life. This became Shiv-s ideal -

-Chambe da phul sajra naio tur paina-

He grieved to see the death of a Chamba flower -
Aj ik chambe da phul moea
Gal paona de pa ke bahin
Gora chetar chham chham roea
-Asaan te joban ruten marna
Mur jana asan bhare bharae
Hijer tere di kar prikarma.

These lines are a superb poetry as an example of delicate sensitivity in expression. He filled sadness in the refreshing dew on the fallen flowers - as chham chham roaa and confirmed his faith in the transmigration of the soul.
He was truly a poet of nature-flower-soil-death and life, threading these into a garland of laughing sadness.
-Pa tandan de thaknan
Kis lei katna
Oah nah aapna
Tan asan kis lai katna hor ji-
He wanted to go -
-Ni jinde main kal nahin rehna-
Asan kis khatar hun jina
Is miti kise chuman da phul
Kade nah ditha khiria-

He was a lover of colour and beauty but with these he wanted purity integrity and respectability. He complained of -Widwa rut- Widwa joban

Whatever personal and impersonal emotion Shiv experienced he spread these to the outside nature. His outer and inner nature became one many a time, and one waited for the other for the union.
-Marua khirna babul Ji,
Jad chetar mur aawe-

In every aspect of nature he found an image of death - a phenomena which was unique in Shiv. He said -

-Main chaonda haan aaj da gora din
Aanaei maot na mar jae-


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No other poet before him, to my knowledge, was so much glamorised by the phenomenon of death as Shiv was. As Shiv was, death truly is a gift that is given to a man at birth and that is not an end, but is a milestone on the journey from beyond to beyond. I see Shiv walking on this path.
-Raat chanani main turan-

He will continue to walk and we will continue to see him shining as a star at nightfall and touch him, smell him, enjoy him as a flower, like the chambe da phul -he will be seen again and again dying on the morning after morning. To him death seems more real then life. No one sees the flower coming into life, but what we see is only the death of the living. But death also is not the end.

-Nahen sade tan koi rog awalra
Nahan sadi oomsr aakhiri
Babul ji
Aasan mukh da suraj
Dubde tak mur aonna
He will come back again on the horizon before sunset to live through the night.

I am waiting for that moment when Shiv, like Lord Shiv Ji will recreate himself out of the pieces and bits that he has left for all of us in the form of his poetry - the immortal images of his mortal frame.

-Zindgi us ke liye ik maut thi
Who pa gaya hai zindagi dar asal mar jane ke baad.-


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Around this period, he met a girl named Maina at a fair in Baijnath. When he went back to look for her in her hometown, he heard the news of her death and wrote his elegy 'Maina'.

kya Maina poem, ya usse relation koe bhi information mil sakti hai

baijnath is my hometown....... plzz


Vikas, agar muje unki poem "Maina" ya us se related koi information milli to maiN jaroor post karuNgi.

aapne yeh thread pada....thanks


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Shikra Yaar

Maaye Ni Maaye,
Main Ek Shikra Yaar Banaya,

Ude Siir De Kalgi,
Te Ude Paryi Jhanjar,
O Chog Chuginda Ayea,
maaye ni maaye........

Ek ohde Roop Dee Dhup Tikheri,
O Duja Mehka Da Tirhaya,
Teeja ohda Rang Gulabi,
O Kise Gori Maa Da Jaya,
maaye ni maaye........

Ishqe Da Ek Palang Nawari,
Weh Asa Chananiya vich daya,
Tan Di Chadar Ho Gayi Maili,
Os Pair Ja Palgi Paya,
maaye ni maaye........

Dukhan mere Naina De Koye,
Te vich Harh Hanjua Da Aya,
Sari Raat Gayi vich Socha,
Us Aye Ki zulm Kamaya,
maaye ni maaye........

Subha Savere Layni Vatna,
We Asa Mal Mal os Navaya,
Dehi De vich Niklan Chinga,
te sada hath gya kumlaya,
maaye ni maaye.....

Churi Kuta Ta O Khanda Nahi,
Weh Asa Dil Da Maas Khawaya,
Ek Udari Aisi Mari, -2
O Mud Vatni Na Aya,
O Maaye Ni maaye......
Main Ek Shikra Yaar Banaya............

Churi kutta.n te oh khaanda naahi,
ve asa dil da maas khawaya,
ek udhari us aisi maari,
O mud watni na ayya,
maaye ni maaye....
mai ek shikra yaar banaya...
maaye ni maaye................


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Babal bal-waresey
Joban ruttey sajan mareya
Moye geet palethhey
Hun taan parabh ji hadha je
Saadi baah na ghut phadho
Te mainu vida karo
Kosa hanjh shagan pao sanu
Birha tali dharo
Te mainu vida karo."


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Sad Dharmi Babula - 27th June 2015, 12:50 PM

Dharmi Babula


Jad pehn kapahi phul
Veh dharmi babula
Sanu oh rut leh de mulh
Veh dharmi babula!

Ehse rute mera geet gawacha
Jehde gal birho di gaani
Mukh te kil guma de
Naini ujarre khoo da paani
Geet keh jis nu hon suhaiya
Jaye kathuri ghul
Veh dharmi babula
Sanu geet oh leh dahi mulh
Veh dharmi babula!

Ik din mein te geet mere
Is toonehari rute
Dila di dharti vaahi godi
Beeje supne suche
Lakh naina de paani shinje
Par na lage phul
Veh dharmi babula
Sanu ik phul leh dahi mulh
veh dharmi babula!

Kehre kam eh milkh jageera
Je deeya kumlaiya
Kehre kam tere maan sarovar
Hansniya tirhaiya
Kehre kamm khilari teri
Chog mottiya tull
Veh dhamri babula!
Jad peh kapahi phul
veh dharmi babula!


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Mircha de patar - 30th June 2015, 02:03 PM

Mircha de patar


Puneya de chan nu koi maseya
Kikan arag charaye veh
Kyun koi dachi sagar kahtir
Maruthal shad jaae veh


Karma di mehndi da sajjna
Rang kive das charda veh
Je kismat mircha de patar
Peeth tali te laye veh

Gum da moti uthar aheya
Sidaq mere di naini veh
Preet nagar da aukha pehnda
Jindrri kinj mukaye veh

Kikra de phula di arreya
Kaun karende rakhi veh
Kadh koi maali maleya uto
Hariyal aan urraye veh

Peera de dharkone kha kha
Ho ge geet kusele veh
Vech nrroye bethi jindu
Keekan sohle gaye veh

Preeta de gal shuri ferh di
Vekh ke kinj kurlaave veh
Leh chandi de bing kasaiya
Mere gal fasaye veh

Tarrap tarra ke mar gaye arreya
Mel tere di hasrat veh
Ehse ishq de julami raaje
Birho baan chale veh

Chug chug rorr gali teri deh
Ghungniya vath chab leh veh
Kathe kar ke teele
Bukal vich tukhaye veh

Ik chuli ve peeh na saki
Pyar de nitare pani veh
Vehndeya saar paye vich poore
Ja mein honth suhaye veh.


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nice sharing sunita jee.....................


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Sehar Tere - 1st July 2015, 03:29 PM

Sehar Tere



Sehar tere tirkala dhaliya
Gal lag rohiya teriya galiya

Yaadan de vich murr murr sulghan
mehndi lagiya teriya taliya

mathe da deeva na baleya
tel ta pahiya bhar bhar palliya

ishq mere di saal gira te
eh kis kalhiya kaaliya kalliya

shiv nu yaar jad ahye fookan
sitam tere diya gala chaliya


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"ਬਾਲ-ਵਰੇਸੇ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਗਵਾਚਾ
ਜ਼ਖ਼ਮੀ ਹੋ ਗਏ ਸਾਹ
ਮੇਰੇ ਹੋਠਾਂ ਵੇਖ ਲਈ
ਚੁੰਮਣਾਂ ਦੀ ਜੂਨ ਹੰਢਾ ।
ਜੋ ਚੁੰਮਣ ਮੇਰੇ ਦਰ 'ਤੇ ਖੜ੍ਹਿਆ
ਇਕ ਅੱਧ ਵਾਰੀ ਆ
ਮੁੜ ਉਹ ਭੁੱਲ ਕਦੇ ਨਾ ਲੰਘਿਆ
ਏਸ ਦਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਰਾਹ ।
ਮੈਂ ਉਹਨੂੰ ਨਿੱਤ ਉਡੀਕਣ ਬੈਠਾ
ਥੱਕਿਆ ਔਂਸੀਆਂ ਪਾ
ਮੈਨੂੰ ਉਹ ਚੁੰਮਣ ਨਾ ਬਹੁੜਿਆ
ਸੈ ਚੁੰਮਣਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਣ ਗਾਹ ।
ਉਹ ਚੁੰਮਣ ਮੇਰੇ ਹਾਣ ਦਾ
ਵਿਚ ਲੱਖ ਸੂਰਜ ਦਾ ਤਾ
ਜਿਹੜੇ ਸਾਹੀਂ ਚੇਤਰ ਖੇਡਦਾ
ਮੈਨੂੰ ਉਸ ਚੁੰਮਣ ਦਾ ਚਾ।"



“baal-varese ishq gawacha
Zakhmi ho gye saah
Mere hoothan vekh lyi
Chumna di joon handaa!
Jo chumman mere dar te khahtia
Ek adh vaari aa
Mur oh bhul kade na langia
Ais daraan de raah!
Main ohnu nitt udikan baithan
Thakia aunsian paa
Mainu oh chumman na bahudia
main chummanan de vann gah!
Oh chumman mere haan da
Vich lakh surajan da taa
Jehde saahin chettar khed-da
Mainu uss chumman da chaa!”


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"ਜਿੰਦੂ ਦੇ ਬਾਗ਼ੀਂ
ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦਾ ਬੂਟੜਾ
ਗੀਤਾਂ ਦਾ ਮਿਰਗ ਚਰੇ
ਹਿਜਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਾਉ
ਵਗੇ ਅੱਧ-ਰੈਣੀ
ਕੋਈ ਕੋਈ ਪੱਤ ਕਿਰੇ ।
ਕੋਈ ਕੋਈ ਪੱਤ
ਕਿਰੇ ਮਾਏ ਮੇਰੀਏ
ਬਾਗ਼ੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਸ਼ੋਰ ਪਵੇ
ਉੱਡੇ ਜਾਂ ਕੋਈ ਕੋਈ
ਸਾਹਵਾਂ ਦਾ ਪੰਛੀ
ਗੀਤਾਂ ਦਾ ਮਿਰਗ ਡਰੇ ।
ਸਾਹਵਾਂ ਦੇ ਪੰਛੀ
ਤਾਂ ਉੱਡਣ ਹਾਰੇ
ਦਾਮੀਂ ਨਾ ਜਾਣ ਫੜੇ
ਰਾਤ ਬਰਾਤੇ
ਦੇਸ਼-ਦਿਸ਼ਾਂਤਰ
ਉੱਡਦੇ ਜਾਣ ਚਲੇ ।
ਡਰੀਂ ਨਾ ਮਿਰਗਾ
ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਪੱਤਰ
ਰੋਜ਼ ਨਾ ਰਹਿਣ ਹਰੇ
ਵਿਰਲੇ ਤਾਂ ਉੱਗਦੇ
ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਬੂਟੜੇ
ਸੰਘਣੇ ਮਹਿਕ ਭਰੇ।"




“Jindu de baagi
Dardaan da butraa
Geetan da mirag charey
Hijran di vau
Vagge adh raini
Koi koi patt kire!
Koi koi patt
Kire mai meriye
Sahvan da panchi
Geetan da mirag darey!
Sahvan de panchi
Tan udan haare
Daami na jaan phade
Raat baraate
Des-disantar
Ud de jan chale!
Darrin na mirga
Dardan de pattar
Roz rahin harey
Virle taan ugde
Dardaan de butde
Sanghne mahek bhare”


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