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Post jwab kaun dauga?... - 29th May 2010, 03:48 PM
jehre gulab ho chuke ne berang,
ohna nu leake rang laal kaun dauga?
murjhaye hoye fullan da dullh jehra chukya,
ohna nu dobara oh shabab kaun dauga?
do aashikan de dillan nu dubban lye fer,
vnde hoye punjab di chennab kaun dauga?
kinne sade gye jis, dangeyan di agg vich,
ehda os rabb nu hisab kaun dauga?
kho bethe ne jo nam te nishan,
ohna charkhe trinjna nu,
khoi hoi mud pehchan kaun dauga?
naag bnke dang leya,apne hi virse nu,
hun aaun wali peehri nu jwab kaun dauga?
jwab kaun dauga?.................
   
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29th May 2010, 03:55 PM
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jehre gulab ho chuke ne berang,
ohna nu leake rang laal kaun dauga?
murjhaye hoye fullan da dullh jehra chukya,
ohna nu dobara oh shabab kaun dauga?
do aashikan de dillan nu dubban lye fer,
vnde hoye punjab di chennab kaun dauga?
kinne sade gye jis, dangeyan di agg vich,
ehda os rabb nu hisab kaun dauga?
kho bethe ne jo nam te nishan,
ohna charkhe trinjna nu,
khoi hoi mud pehchan kaun dauga?
naag bnke dang leya,apne hi virse nu,
hun aaun wali peehri nu jwab kaun dauga?
jwab kaun dauga?.................
Loveleen ji,,,,

vdhiya koshish....... bdi khushi hoi tuhanu padh ke...vdi vadhiya lgi menu tuhadi eh koshish.........aida hi likhde rehna....


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jehre gulab ho chuke ne berang,
ohna nu leake rang laal kaun dauga?
murjhaye hoye fullan da dullh jehra chukya,
ohna nu dobara oh shabab kaun dauga?
do aashikan de dillan nu dubban lye fer,
vnde hoye punjab di chennab kaun dauga?
kinne sade gye jis, dangeyan di agg vich,
ehda os rabb nu hisab kaun dauga?
kho bethe ne jo nam te nishan,
ohna charkhe trinjna nu,
khoi hoi mud pehchan kaun dauga?
naag bnke dang leya,apne hi virse nu,
hun aaun wali peehri nu jwab kaun dauga?
jwab kaun dauga?.................
too good....mind blowing....
loveleen ji, bohat hi shaandar likhya hai tusiN....
e'h thaudi pehli post hai.....sdc de wich thauda swagat hai...
umeed karda haaN ke aan wale same ch thaudi kalam toN hor vi bohat vadhiya qalaam padh'n nu milange....

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SSA Loveleen ji.....hope u r doing great......SDC de es pariwar vich thuhada niggha swagat hai.....tusiN bahut hi vadhia likhia hai...eddaN hi likhde reho
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