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Rulane se pehle ik baar hansaya hota -
5th November 2003, 10:02 PM
Rulane se pehle ik baar hansaya hota
qasoor kya tha dil ko bataya hota mili saza us khata ki jo ki na hum ne Kaash tum se dil na lagaya hota Author Unknown |
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Re: Rulane se pehle ik baar hansaya hota -
6th November 2003, 08:58 PM
Mango ji
behad acha sher likha hai aapne,,,hamari daad kubool kijiye...aap ke sher se prerna le kar meine bhi kuch likha hai,,,,mulaiza farmayein.... dil laga ke ham ne jana darg kyun hota hai yaad mein kisi ki kyun koi rota hai neend ke aagosh mein jab saara jahan dooba ho kyun kisi ki yaad mein koi tanha rota hai. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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6th November 2003, 09:07 PM
Manoj ji yeh jaan ke khushi hui ke hamare posts aapko pasand aatey hain aur woh aapko prerna dete hain aagey bhi yahi koshish rahegi ke aise ashaar post karoon jo sabhi ko pasand aaein
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6th November 2003, 09:14 PM
wow....that's really touchy.
bye the way.... is your name ...the fruit MANGO"? or to want MAANGO"? tell me mujhe to sirf tera waada aazmana tha. |
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6th November 2003, 09:20 PM
its mango coz i love mangoes n also some of my friends address me as mango thats y my nick is mango
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7th November 2003, 04:48 PM
namaste.. mango ji..
wah yar.. kya baat hai .. bahut khoob likha hai yar...apne...bahut kaam shabdon mein bahut khuch keah dia... . bahut khoob.. aise hi lihte rahiye .. aur mehfil ..sajte rehiye.. bye and take care. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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7th November 2003, 06:43 PM
hi tanhai ji
how r u? thanx for appriciating aagey bhi koshish rahegi ke achhe achhe post karoon |
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8th November 2003, 06:40 PM
Hi Mango,
It's a good1. Keep it up. Take Care, bye Manish |
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8th November 2003, 06:43 PM
hi
manish ji how r u? thanx 4 liking it take care |
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8th November 2003, 09:34 PM
Aapki SHayRi BaHut acHHi Hai ..
LikHti RaHiye |
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8th November 2003, 10:58 PM
shukriya kshitiz ji
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9th November 2003, 05:52 AM
Rulane se pehle ik baar hansaya hota
qasoor kya tha dil ko bataya hota mili saza us khata ki jo ki na hum ne Kaash tum se dil na lagaya hota bahut sundar post kiya mango jee...main aapsa likh to nahin sakti lekin haan doosron ka likha zaroor padti rehti hoon...aur yeh ek sher yaad aaya hai...aapke liye... mai.n mujarim huu.N mujhe iqaraar hai jurm-e-muhabbat kaa magar pahale Khataa par Gaur kar lo phir sazaa denaa shukriya...phir milenge...isi jagah gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th November 2003, 07:07 PM
Parastar
aapka isko pasand kerna ka shukriya aur rahi baat likhni ki to hum bhi kahan likhte hain bas post hi kerte hain and thanx 4 these wonderful lines. apna khayaal rakhiyega |
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wah wah wah |
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wah wah wah -
10th November 2003, 04:57 PM
kya khoob likha hai , maza aaya mango ji
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10th November 2003, 06:39 PM
hi kishore ji
aapko maza aaya jaan ke khushi hui aagey bhi yahi koshish rahegi take care |
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