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Love :)...... - 16th April 2011, 11:32 AM
palchin palchin raat ka dhalna
taron ko dhage mein piroke,
tham ke usko
teri aur ko badna......
suraj ka ujala sajna
tumhare sang chla aata hai
tum chahe ho door bhi kitna
akas nazar aa jata hai
hathon mein khanakti choodiaan
intzar tumhara karti hai...
janam janam tak mile sath tumhara
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
meri har dhadkan
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16th April 2011, 11:53 AM
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palchin palchin raat ka dhalna
taron ko dhage mein piroke,
tham ke usko
teri aur ko badna......
suraj ka ujala sajna
tumhare sang chla aata hai
tum chahe ho door bhi kitna
akas nazar aa jata hai
hathon mein khanakti choodiaan
intzar tumhara karti hai...
janam janam tak mile sath tumhara
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
Its vry nice poem... Loveleen Ji !



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Its vry nice poem... Loveleen Ji !

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palchin palchin raat ka dhalna
taron ko dhage mein piroke,
tham ke usko
teri aur ko badna......
suraj ka ujala sajna
tumhare sang chla aata hai
tum chahe ho door bhi kitna
akas nazar aa jata hai
hathon mein khanakti choodiaan
intzar tumhara karti hai...
janam janam tak mile sath tumhara
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
bhoot hi pyara likha hai appne phad ke achcha laga bhut aise hi likhti rahyee
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palchin palchin raat ka dhalna
taron ko dhage mein piroke,
tham ke usko
teri aur ko badna......
suraj ka ujala sajna
tumhare sang chla aata hai
tum chahe ho door bhi kitna
akas nazar aa jata hai
hathon mein khanakti choodiaan
intzar tumhara karti hai...
janam janam tak mile sath tumhara
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
bhut hi khoobsurat orr behtareen likha hai appne dil se daad kbool kijiye orr yunhi likhti rahye

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suraj ka ujala sajna
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palchin palchin raat ka dhalna
taron ko dhage mein piroke,
tham ke usko
teri aur ko badna......
suraj ka ujala sajna
tumhare sang chla aata hai
tum chahe ho door bhi kitna
akas nazar aa jata hai
hathon mein khanakti choodiaan
intzar tumhara karti hai...
janam janam tak mile sath tumhara
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
meri har dhadkan
fariyad ye rab se karti hai
Well Written Qabil e tarif , keep it up!!

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