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waqt tanha sa...... - 18th October 2012, 10:44 PM

waqt tanha sa satane lga hai
koi bewajah neend se jagane lga hai
socha tha , dhal jayengi yaadein uski
sham ki tarha.n
par wo roz , subah bankar zindgi mein
aane lga hai
kaise mitau.n apne dil par likha
naam uska
wo to mujhme chhup kar
mera naamo nishan mitane lga hai

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19th October 2012, 08:02 AM

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waqt tanha sa satane lga hai
koi bewajah neend se jagane lga hai
socha tha , dhal jayengi yaadein uski
sham ki tarha.n
par wo roz , subah bankar zindgi mein
aane lga hai
kaise mitau.n apne dil par likha
naam uska
wo to mujhme chhup kar
mera naamo nishan mitane lga hai
bahut khoob ... dil se daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ..........


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19th October 2012, 12:34 PM

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waqt tanha sa satane lga hai
koi bewajah neend se jagane lga hai
socha tha , dhal jayengi yaadein uski
sham ki tarha.n
par wo roz , subah bankar zindgi mein
aane lga hai
kaise mitau.n apne dil par likha
naam uska
wo to mujhme chhup kar
mera naamo nishan mitane lga hai
bahut khoob minni mujhe kabhi kabhi yakin nahi aata ke tu itna achcha likh sakti hai


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22nd October 2012, 09:16 PM

Bahut khub ...ap ke sher per ek khayal likh raha hun

Tujh se tum ko churane ko jee chata hai,
Tere paas aa ke duur na jane ko ji chahta hai,
Apni is chahat ko ab main kya naam dun,
Khush rahe tu sada ye hi dua karun.

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23rd October 2012, 01:25 PM

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Bahut khub ...ap ke sher per ek khayal likh raha hun

Tujh se tum ko churane ko jee chata hai,
Tere paas aa ke duur na jane ko ji chahta hai,
Apni is chahat ko ab main kya naam dun,
Khush rahe tu sada ye hi dua karun.

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bahut hee sundar nazm
Loveleen its truly very appreciating.



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waqt tanha sa satane lga hai
koi bewajah neend se jagane lga hai
socha tha , dhal jayengi yaadein uski
sham ki tarha.n
par wo roz , subah bankar zindgi mein
aane lga hai
kaise mitau.n apne dil par likha
naam uska
wo to mujhme chhup kar
mera naamo nishan mitane lga hai


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