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4th June 2007, 12:05 AM
Hame bhi shauk hai bazm ko is kadar sajane ka,
Doob jaayen nashe mein na hosh rahe thikane ka, Aaj mat pila saaki jaam bar jaam, Ghar jana hai mujhe intezaar hai kisi ke ane ka, Yeh kehkar ham chal diye maikade se usdin, Raat to intezaar mein kat gayi khabar nahi unke aashiyaane ka, Waqt ne ek aur ranj kiya mere saath is baar bhi, Khat aya usika Likha yeh raasta tha teri aadat chudane ka, Aadaton ke hamkadam aadaton mein ulajh kar reh gaye, Ham aadi the peene ke gam mein mauka mil gaya maikade jaane ka, Samjha nahi aaj bhi woh meri in aansuon ko, Main peeta raha saaki ke sang jaise daaman ho yaar ka, Bas aur nahi jee sakta main is zindagi ko is kadar, hara hua insaan hun ab mauka nahi hai jeet paane ka, Mar ke mit jaane de aaj mujhko is pal is ghadi, Ke ab bacha nahi mere paas kuch aur peene ke liye lutaane ka...  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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MaiN Our Meri Tanhaayii
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5th June 2007, 07:41 AM
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waah Abrar jiu bahoot khoob likha hai aapne... Intezaar ki khaatir yuiN tumne ik umra ko yahaan per Jhela hai Hum baste haiN har kshan dil maiN, tire laga jahaan ik mela hai. Jo mout khadi ho aangan maiN, hone do usko bhi ruswa Mit jane ka nahi hai ye sabab ye zind hai ab koi khela nahi Harash |
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5th June 2007, 04:52 PM
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apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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15th June 2007, 11:28 PM
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Apka bohot bohot shukriya harame likhe chand alfazon ko pasand karne ka.... Umeed hain ap aise hi aate rahenge... Shukriya... Apka dost Abrar.... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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15th June 2007, 11:29 PM
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bohot bohot shukriya apka... lagta hain main seekh raha hun... Shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye... Abrar.... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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29th June 2007, 09:13 PM
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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Good Job -
10th July 2007, 08:26 PM
wow, very good lines,
bahut hi aachha likha hai aapne, ese hi likhate rehana  GOD IS GREAT
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11th July 2007, 06:00 PM
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Aapki is behad khoobsoorat nazm ne to mere honth hi sil diye hain... pyar aur dard ki bahut khoob kashmakash hai.... Ispe to vaaah kehne se darr lag raha hai... ki kahin yeh aapka dard to nahi... Shayri samjhun.. to behad khoobsoorat.. aur agar Dard hai... to yehi kahungi dost zindagi me kuch bhi namumkin nahi hai... himmat karoge to sab phir se theek ho jaayega.. bas housla mat haarna.. muskuraate ho, aur mushkilon ka saamna karo..  Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th July 2007, 02:47 AM
Aadab... kashif Sahab, Punjaban heer. And Chahat ji...
Ap sab ka bohot bohot shukriya ke aap ne mere likhe kuch dard ko pasand kiya.. haan chahat ji yeh dard hi hai par main kabhi drink nahi karta bas kuch format change kar likhne i koshish ki hai... Ap sab ka bohot bohot shukriya... Chalta hun... na jaane kis gali andhera ho jaye... Raasta hai itmenaan na rakh raasta hi hai to hai... Safar karna hai mujhe bas shaam hi to hai... ghum hai chaaro taraf mere fasal e aam hi to hai... lambi hai ghum ki shaam par shaam hi to hai... Apna khayal rakhe... Apka dost... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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