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Inferno … 1412 2012 - 24th January 2013, 01:08 AM


So many times
we burn our own toil
cling to our fears
let them lives spoil

like the well done
kneaded tended dough
halfhearted, wretchedly
in the furnace throw

pain, imagined slight
burns in inward peep
so dear to our chest
we often happily keep

eagerly our ears listen
to demons guttural knell
glumly wait and let
some magic burn to hell


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14th Dec,2k12
Islamabad.


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24th January 2013, 06:46 PM

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So many times
we burn our own toil
cling to our fears
let them lives spoil

like the well done
kneaded tended dough
halfhearted, wretchedly
in the furnace throw

pain, imagined slight
burns in inward peep
so dear to our chest
we often happily keep

eagerly our ears listen
to demons guttural knell
glumly wait and let
some magic burn to hell


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14th Dec,2k12
Islamabad.
Sub'hanAllah! Kya baat haye.............

This poem... like the precious oil extracted from a large quantity of precious herbs............ the summary of the facts of life.... a craftsman at his best! Thanks for gifting us with such a class piece of art!

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So many times
we burn our own toil
cling to our fears
let them lives spoil

like the well done
kneaded tended dough
halfhearted, wretchedly
in the furnace throw

pain, imagined slight
burns in inward peep
so dear to our chest
we often happily keep

eagerly our ears listen
to demons guttural knell
glumly wait and let
some magic burn to hell


Original,
14th Dec,2k12
Islamabad.

Very good piece of work doctor sahab.......hatss offf......




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Thanx Ahmad and Zainy
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Dear Saadat Tahir sahib,

Indeed very touching and realistic poem.

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Dear Saadat Tahir sahib,

Indeed very touching and realistic poem.

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thanx sanjay bhai for this kind appreciation...am obliged


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