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I Just Asked My Parents -
27th December 2014, 10:28 AM
Once , I just Asked My Parents,
Who 'm I ? You are My Child.... Once , I just Asked My Brother 'n Sister, Who 'm I ? You are My Brother... Once , I just Asked to My Friend, Who 'm I ? You are My Friend... Once , I just Asked to Other, Who 'm I ? You are Stranger... Once , I just Asked to God, Who 'm I ? You are My Art... But that was not My Answer... I wanna hear something else!! Suddenly I 'm shocked when someone Call me.. I Just Asked to Her... Who Are You ? SHe told me...,, I 'm Your Dream, I 'm Your Life, I 'm Your Everything, I 'm Your Real love.... This is me... 'coz I wanna to here only just "You Are My Love".. ! But Nobody Tell Me This.. !! * I Never MIss You Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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28th December 2014, 07:15 PM
Anil if this is your poem , then a wonderful feeling . But in case you are sharing , pls add NM at the end .
Any way the content of the poem was mesmerising .  Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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30th December 2014, 07:44 AM
Good work........very touchy....keep writing
With warm regards Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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