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Bazm-e-maehfil ko ek baar fir is nacheez ghayal ka salaam...!
bade dino baad aane ka mauka mila aur nacheez hazir hai ek aur adni si peshkash ke saath, isi umeed me ki aapko jyada niraash nahi kiya hoga...! Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!! Tere diye zakhmoN ko khud pe sazaa rakha hai, Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use, To apni in ankhoN ke pardon ko giraa rakha hai...! Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…! Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai, Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…! Sach se waakif haiN, ki wo kabhi humari na hogi, Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…! Koi mukhatib nahi humse ab is bazm-e-mehfil me, Jo apna naam humne sabko,“ghayal”bataa rakha hai. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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27th April 2007, 01:35 PM
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wah wah....bahut khoob lucky....ek umda peshkesh...har sher lajwaab...! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! yeh sher khaas lagga...! Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use, To apni in ankhoN ke pardon ko giraa rakha hai...! Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…! en shero'n mein bhi ahsaas khoob lage...ek behtareen gazal padne ka mokka dene ke liye...shukriya..! dil se mubarkbaad kabool karna. god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th April 2007, 01:44 PM
wah ghayal ji wah
sach mein itni acchi syari likhi hai aapne ki kya kahein kis kadar dil ke jazbaaton ko raund ke rakh diya hai. sach mein padh ke rom rom khil utha hai. janab aise hi likhte rahiye Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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27th April 2007, 01:48 PM
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27th April 2007, 01:53 PM
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janab ghayal ji ko hamara namaskar aapka kalam pada wakai main kayamat hai kuch sher to ese hain jo seedhe dil main utar gaye Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai waah kya baat hai Koi mukhatib nahi humse ab is bazm-e-mehfil me, Jo apna naam humne sabko,“ghayal”bataa rakha hai. maqta to janab poochiye mat kamal hai ek umda kalam per merii dil se niklii daad hazir hai shukriyaa dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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27th April 2007, 02:48 PM
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27th April 2007, 03:16 PM
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Junooni aashique ke badle mizaaz to dekhiye.. nishana kahiN aur khanzar khud pe chala rakha hai ... Chote ... Kavish maiN dum hai .. aur bayani maiN bhi.. par aise nazroN ko band na rakhna ... kyuNki ye ansuN bhi kisi kanch se kam nahi hote.. palkoN ko bhed kar rukhoN ko bhi cheer dete hai .. acha hai aur acchi rah hai ... badhe chale jana isi pe tumhara apna Kunaal 2007 most impressive screensavers myscreensavers.info Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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27th April 2007, 06:35 PM
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shukriya janaab, lagatar aap humari mehfil me doosri baar aaye, aur aapko fir se humara likha pasand aaya, humare liye yahi bahut hai, aur aapko is nacheez ka likha bhaya ye jaan kar aur v behad khushi hui, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v yuNhi is nacheez ko padhne ki jehmiyat uthate rahenge...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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27th April 2007, 06:47 PM
hello ghayal ji appka name to nahi janta appko aj pehli var padda hai sach me app bhot acha likhte ho je kalam to bhot ki achi hai
is me je line mujhe bhot hi pasan d aye Tere diye zakhmoN ko khud pe sazaa rakha hai, Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! hameri daab kabol kijiye ghayal sahib har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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bhut khub -
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28th April 2007, 06:37 PM
Tere diye zakhmoN ko khud pe sazaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! Waaaaaah... Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use, To apni in ankhoN ke pardon ko giraa rakha hai...! Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…! Kyaa baat hai... Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai, Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…! Sach se waakif haiN, ki wo kabhi humari na hogi, Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…! Kya baaat hai...bahut khoobsurat aashaar... Koi mukhatib nahi humse ab is bazm-e-mehfil me, Jo apna naam humne sabko,“ghayal”bataa rakha hai. waaahhh.. Dear Lucky, Bahut khoobsurat likhne lage ho tumm...Bahut khoobsurati se ehsaas piroye hain... Accha laga padhkar..daad kubool karna meri.. likhte raho... do tc... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th April 2007, 02:28 PM
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shukriya ek baar fir se mani ji, is nacheez ko apni nazar dene ke liye, bas guzarish is nacheez ki yahi rahegi ki aap aage v yuNhi is nacheez ko padhne ki jehmiyat uthati rahiye...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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29th April 2007, 02:37 PM
ghayal jii,
aapki iss shayri na sach mai ghayal kar diya..bahut acha likha hai asa hi likhta rahiya. aapki dost~saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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29th April 2007, 06:31 PM
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aapki daad humare sar aankhon pe janaab, aapki tareef humare liye humesha se hi maayne rakhti rahi hai, ahcha laga ek baar fir se aapko humare kalaam ko pasand karte dekh, guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v is nacheez pe yuNhi gaur farmaate raheN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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30th April 2007, 01:09 PM
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bhaiya aapka aana hi apne aap me is baat ko kahin na kahin pukhta kar deta hai, ki maine kuch behtar likha hai is baar, aur bahut badi baat keh gaye haiN shayad apne sher me, bahut ahcha lagaa jaan kar ki aapko ye peshkash ahchi lagi, guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aage v yuNhi saath nibhate rahiyega...! aapka CHOTA ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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3rd May 2007, 11:29 AM
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3rd May 2007, 03:15 PM
oh luckky ji
aapne tau hamara rom rom ghayal kar diya. ek alag hi duniya me pahuch gaye in tumhare kareene se sajaaye hue shabdo ko padhkar. bahut hi achha. hum tau itne saksham bhi nahi ki aapki tareef me kuch kah sake. bas dil ko behad pasand aaya. hamesh aapke intzaar me Reena aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha |
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4th May 2007, 07:18 PM
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bhaiya behad khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko is nacheez ki naya karne ki sanak pasand aayi, aur is baar ki ye taaza tareen kosish v dil ko bhaai, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v isi tarah is nacheez ko padhne ki jehmat uthaate raheN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th May 2007, 08:58 PM
WAHHHHH EK DUM SAHI LIKHA HAI<BAHUT HI PASAND AAAYA JANAAB LIKHTHEY RAHIYEGA BAHUT HI DARD BHARA HAI<<<<<<<<
Tere diye zakhmoN ko khud pe sazaa rakha hai, Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke, Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi, ****************************** MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI. ------------------------------------------------ socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum KISHOR R KARKERA NEW PANVEL NAVI MUMBAi,410206 PH:-09322764070 
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5th May 2007, 11:36 PM
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Bahut acha lagaa aap ka yaha kalaam parh kar...! Har ek sher kaabil-e-tareef hai...! Really, a nice write Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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6th May 2007, 08:48 PM
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pulkit bhaiya muddatoN baad aap humari mehfil me aaye, dekh kar behad khushi hui, aur aap logoN se tareef paa kar dil ko bahut sukoon milta hai, aakhir aap logoN se bahut kuch seekha hai, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v is nacheez pe apni drishti yuNhi banayeN rakheN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th May 2007, 05:04 PM
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7th May 2007, 05:06 PM
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shukriya kishor ji, aaapne pehli baar humari mehfil me shirkat ki aur humara likha itna pasand kiya, iske liye hum aapke dil se shukraguzaar haiN, guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhte raheN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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reena ji hume sharmindaa na kareN jab dost keh deN ki kuch keh naa paayeNge tab dil baith jaata hai, bas dostoN ka hi daaman saath rehta hai is gumoN se bhari duniyaa me, bas yuNhi kabhi kabhar apne is nacheez dost ko v yaad kar liya kijiye...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th May 2007, 05:09 PM
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danny bhaiya bahut dino baad aana hua aapka humari mehfil me, ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya, guzarish yahi rahegi ki yuNhi jehmateN uthate rahiye is nacheez ko padhne ki....! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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bahot umda...behtareen...aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kaabil e taarif hai..unhi likhte rahiye khush rahiye.. god bless, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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18th May 2009, 08:54 PM
der se javaab dene ke liye maafi ka talagaar huN, waise ye humari khuskismati hai ki aapko humari likhi adni si peshkash pasand aayi, umeed karta huN aage v aap yuNhi hume padhne ki jehmiyateN uthaate aheNge....!!
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19th May 2009, 11:19 PM
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Ghayal ji ! adaab.... Maine aaj aapki iss Ghazal ko bahut gehrai se pada....iss Ghazal ka ek ek sher mujhe kahi bahut gehre tak ghayal karta chala gaya......aapki dard bhari ye ghazal mujhe behadd pasand aai... -----naresh mehra---- |
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22nd May 2009, 12:05 PM
naresh shahab ko is nacheez ka salaam, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko humari ghazal pasand aayi, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume padhne ki jehmiyateN yuNhi uthaate raheNge....!!
Aapka Ghayal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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22nd May 2009, 03:17 PM
lucky achi gazal likhi hai
apna khyaal rakhna शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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22nd May 2009, 06:02 PM
Tere diye zakhmoN ko khud pe sazaa rakha hai,
Teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…! Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai, Teri maaNg ki khatir ek katra bacha rakha hai…! Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use, To apni in ankhoN ke pardon ko giraa rakha hai...! Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…! Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai, Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…! Sach se waakif haiN, ki wo kabhi humari na hogi, Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…! Koi mukhatib nahi humse ab is bazm-e-mehfil me, Jo apna naam humne sabko,“ghayal”bataa rakha hai.[/quote] speechless...................................aweso me.....................  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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22nd May 2009, 10:11 PM
hi lucky..kaise ho..
behtreen gazal.. take care..  ..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi.. Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge.. Shayad Nahi.. Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to.. Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi.. Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi.. Main janti hun..Magar.. Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥.. ..nm.. ...mahuaa... |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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23rd May 2009, 10:21 AM
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ghazal padhne aur pasand karne ka shukriya d, umeed karta huN aap aage v mujhe padhne ki jehmiyat yuNhi uthaati raheNgi...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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23rd May 2009, 10:28 AM
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23rd May 2009, 11:00 AM
salaam bhayee
salaam ghazal ko bhi |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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23rd May 2009, 05:05 PM
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speechless...................................aweso me..................... [/QUOTE]Lamha ji bahut bahut shukriya is nacheez ke in adne se ehsashoN ko pasand karne ka, umeed karta huN ki aage v aap yuNhi jehmiyat uthaati raheNgi humari mehfil me aane ki...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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23rd May 2009, 06:15 PM
Hi friend
Wah Ghayal Sahib Kya baat hai Kuch is Tarah se kiya usne mere Zakhmo ka Ilaaj Marham bhi lagaya to Kanto ki Nok se. |
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23rd May 2009, 10:01 PM
Lucky Bhai Aadab.....
Really aapki Gazal bahut hi umda hai... har ek sher asardar.... Aur aapka andaze bayan behad kabile tarif hai.... Ummid hai aapke aur bhi kalam aage padhne milenge.... DuaoN ke sath daad kabool kijiye... 
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24th May 2009, 07:52 AM
lucky jii...
bahut khoobsuraat khayaalaat hai aapke... likhte raye ... aapne khayalon se rub a ru karte rahye take care ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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24th May 2009, 02:42 PM
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MaiN to mast hun ji, tussi dasso ki haal chaal....?? waise ghazal ko pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v humara yuNhi saath nibhaati raheNgi....!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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