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koi faryaad tere dil maiN dabi ho jaise, BY PRADHYUMAN 8 23.53%
Koi fariyad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise BY FATHOMLESS (SHAN) 8 23.53%
Koi kitaab-si mere dil meiN bani ho jaise BY RASHID RAHIL 19 55.88%
ek muddat se kayi dard sahi ho jaise BY PRANEETA 8 23.53%
Aisa lagta hai kahiN zulf khuli ho jaise BY KWAHISH(SAMEER) 16 47.06%
Hansi main ek aah chupi ho jaise BY NOOR_NOOR(ASLAM) 7 20.59%
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Ghazal Of The Month "may 09" - 1st June 2009, 07:22 AM

Jab bhi safar ko dastaN me rakhna ,
Yakeen kadam me, manzil guman me rakhna,

Chand sitaroN ki baat to chhodo ,
Gali ki dhool ko bhi apni udaan me rakhna,

Mehnat aur mushakKat se milta hai sub kuch,
Kabhi kabhi naseeb ko bhi imtehan me rakhna......nm





Aadaab dostoN

Ghazal of the month 'MAY' ke liye hame kul 6 Ghazal mili haiN, . maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone 'ghazal of the month' meiN hissa liya aur apnii ghazalein hame bheji...

Aap sab kii yeh ghazalein behad achhi lagii mujhe, iske liye mere taraf se daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye

ooparwaale se duaa hai kii aap ko aur hunarmand kare, aur aap ke kalaammoN me aur nikhaar aaye:


INSHALLAH result ke baad aapki ghazalon ka tabsirah hoga....


ek baar phir aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriyah


aayiye dostoN in ghazalon ko aap maze se padhiye aur voting karke inki hausla afzaai kijiye




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Ghazal Submitted By Pradhyuman - 1st June 2009, 07:28 AM

koi faryaad tere dil maiN dabi ho jaise,
ik ‘aah’ maiN shaamil mere gunaaH sabhi ho jaise,

tujhe har mehfil main badnaam kiya tha maine
aur sharm se teri nazar mere liye jhuki ho jaise

mein bhagta rahaa jhuthi khusiyoen ke peeche
tere dil maiN sacche pyaar ki hasrat pali ho jaise

socha ki anjaan hai tu mere iraadoen se aur
meri hansee ki aanch pe teri ruuh jali ho jaise

tu itna door hai gaya, na lautega kabhi, aur ab,
teri baat main chupi baat aa’ine se dikhi ho jaise

main teri tasveer ko dekhun, saaki mujhe dekhe aur
chalakte paimaane se do dil ki pyaas bujhi ho jaise

tere saath beeta har lamha main phir se jee aaya
khwaab tuuta to haqeeqat khanjar si chubhi ho jaise

aaj akhbaar main jannat paane waaloen ko dekha
sazaa-e-zindagi ki khabar mere liye chapi ho jaise

phir baarish ki bundoen ke dhokhe maiN “Bismil”
teri aankhoen se ashkoen ki dhaar bahi ho jaise


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Ghazal Submitted By Fathomless(shan) - 1st June 2009, 07:29 AM

Koi fariyad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise,
Hotho.N par aake woh aaj ruki ho jaise

Na suna zamane ne tera dard to kya ??
Bin kahe mai.Ne, har baat suni ho jaise,

Maut ke intezaar mein kat rahi zindagi
Jine ki khwaahish baki na bachi ho jaise,

Itna raushan hai dil mera, tere pyar se,
Mujhe sooraj ki zarurat na rahi ho jaise,

Har pal har ghadi bas tujhe hi sochta hoon,
Meri saans bhi tere naam se chali ho jaise,

Basar mein mere teri woh tasveer hai,
tu husn aur ishq ke rango.N se saji ho jaise,

tujhse dur hone ka ehesaas bhi nahi hota
meri saanson mein tu yunh basi ho jaise,

mang ke ab kya mangu ? O khudaya tumse
“Itlaaf” ko har khushi apni mili ho jaise


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Ghazal Submitted By Rashid Rahil - 1st June 2009, 07:30 AM

Koi kitaab-si mere dil meiN bani ho jaise
Iske har warkh meiN teri yaad basi ho jaise

Tujhse bichhad ke bhi tanha nahi rahtaa hooN main
Ta umr tu mere saath hi rahi ho jaise

Havaa ki sarsaraahat se ye gHumaN hotaa hai
Tune chupke se koi baat kahi ho jaise

Is Kadar tujhe chhoone se bhi dartaa hooN main
Tera hona koi vaham hi na kahiN ho jaise

Teri ankhoN ki khamoshi kah rahi hai mujhse
Koi fariyaad tere dil meiN dabi ho jaise

Mere armanoN ka mujassama ban gayi teri yadeiN
Teri aarzoo hi meri zindagi ban gayi ho jaise

Ek muddat se inmeiN koi khwaab nahi “Rashid”
Meri ankheiN patthar ki bani ho jaise.


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Ghazal Submitted By Praneeta - 1st June 2009, 07:31 AM

Ek muddat se kayi dard sahi ho jaise
koi fariyad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

haal-e-dil baya karte hain tere ye aasu
khamoshi mein bhi ashqon ne kahi ho jaise

tere chahere se dard ki khalish mit na payi
aaj fir meri mohabbat nakaam rahi ho jaise

tujhse juda ho kar ye ehsaas hua dil ko
zinda rahene ko dhadkano ki kami ho jaise

tera ye shaq mere pyar par aye dilbar
koi khwahish mere dil mein tuti ho jaise


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Ghazal Submitted By Kwahish(sameer) - 1st June 2009, 07:32 AM

Aisa lagta hai kahiN zulf khuli ho jaise
Hoke Gulshan se saba aa chali ho jaise

adh khule hont siyah zulf gazali ankheN
Kisi shayar ne gazal taaza likhi ho jaise

Mil ke usse dil ko yeh guman hota hai
Ek muddat woh mere Saath Rahi ho jaise

Teri bechain nigahoN se aayaN hota Hai
Koyi fariyaad Tere dil mein Dabi ho jaise

Milta hai aasman bhi zameen se kahin door
Hai to yeh baat galat lagti Sahi ho jaise

Kisi paher tere tasawwur ka mussabir banake
Ta umar meri khayalon mein kati ho jaise

Tab ek shararat se mere lab muskura gaye
Dabi aawaz mein tum diwana kahi ho jaise

Ishq musk ban kar uda yuN Kwahish
sookhe jungle main aag lagi ho jaise


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Ghazal Submitted By Noor_noor(aslam) - 1st June 2009, 07:34 AM

Hansi main ek aah chupi ho jaise
Koi fariyaad tere dil main dabi ho jaise

Tera wo mud mud ke dekhne mujhko
Koi khwahish aankhon main basi ho jaise

Poore chaand ki shab aur madham hawa
Tere aanchal ki chandni bikhri ho jaise

Palkon ki jumbish pe mehsoos yoon hua
Band honto se koi baat kahi ho jaise

Fizaaon main masti ka kuch aisa hai aalam
tere badan ki khushbu udi ho jaise

aslam dar ba dar tujhay dhoondta hi raha
aur tu thi ke mujhmein hi chupii ho jaise

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Mashallah...............

Kya likha hai sabhine...............

Meri taraf se sabhi dosto.N ko All the best............

AAp ki Dost

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Aisa lagta hai kahiN zulf khuli ho jaise
Hoke Gulshan se saba aa chali ho jaise

adh khule hont siyah zulf gazali ankheN
Kisi shayar ne gazal taaza likhi ho jaise

Mil ke usse dil ko yeh guman hota hai
Ek muddat woh mere Saath Rahi ho jaise

Teri bechain nigahoN se aayaN hota Hai
Koyi fariyaad Tere dil mein Dabi ho jaise

Milta hai aasman bhi zameen se kahin door
Hai to yeh baat galat lagti Sahi ho jaise

Kisi paher tere tasawwur ka mussabir banake
Ta umar meri khayalon mein kati ho jaise

Tab ek shararat se mere lab muskura gaye
Dabi aawaz mein tum diwana kahi ho jaise

Ishq musk ban kar uda yuN Kwahish
sookhe jungle main aag lagi ho jaise


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well yahan par kis kis ki tareef karoon.............. sabhi ne ek se badhkar ek likha hai....... dosto.n maine ek choti si koshish ki hai.......... meri galtiyon ke liye muaf kijiyega....[]


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Koi kitaab-si mere dil meiN bani ho jaise
Iske har warkh meiN teri yaad basi ho jaise

Tujhse bichhad ke bhi tanha nahi rahtaa hooN main
Ta umr tu mere saath hi rahi ho jaise

Havaa ki sarsaraahat se ye gHumaN hotaa hai
Tune chupke se koi baat kahi ho jaise

Is Kadar tujhe chhoone se bhi dartaa hooN main
Tera hona koi vaham hi na kahiN ho jaise

Teri ankhoN ki khamoshi kah rahi hai mujhse
Koi fariyaad tere dil meiN dabi ho jaise

Mere armanoN ka mujassama ban gayi teri yadeiN
Teri aarzoo hi meri zindagi ban gayi ho jaise

Ek muddat se inmeiN koi khwaab nahi “Rashid”
Meri ankheiN patthar ki bani ho jaise.


--by Rashid rahil

Rashid Bhai kya khoob kaha hai aapne...katl karr diya...yeh kuch sher to mujhe bahot pasand aaye..

Is Kadar tujhe chhoone se bhi dartaa hooN main
Tera hona koi vaham hi na kahiN ho jaise

Ek muddat se inmeiN koi khwaab nahi “Rashid”
Meri ankheiN patthar ki bani ho jaise.

khush rahiye...daad kubool kijiye..

sabhi dosto ne behad umda likha hai (all d best to all of u)

Pradhyuman - Bismil


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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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Ishq musk ban kar uda yuN Kwahish
sookhe jungle main aag lagi ho jaise


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wahh Sameer..bahot khoob..yunhin likhte raho...god bless u

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Pradhyuman - Bismil


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It was pleasantly surprising to c u can write such an absolutely wonderful ghazal ki tumne baaki logoN ko sach meiN tuff competition de diya
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Koi kitaab-si mere dil meiN bani ho jaise
Iske har warkh meiN teri yaad basi ho jaise

Tujhse bichhad ke bhi tanha nahi rahtaa hooN main
Ta umr tu mere saath hi rahi ho jaise

Havaa ki sarsaraahat se ye gHumaN hotaa hai
Tune chupke se koi baat kahi ho jaise

Is Kadar tujhe chhoone se bhi dartaa hooN main
Tera hona koi vaham hi na kahiN ho jaise

Teri ankhoN ki khamoshi kah rahi hai mujhse
Koi fariyaad tere dil meiN dabi ho jaise

Mere armanoN ka mujassama ban gayi teri yadeiN
Teri aarzoo hi meri zindagi ban gayi ho jaise

Ek muddat se inmeiN koi khwaab nahi “Rashid”
Meri ankheiN patthar ki bani ho jaise.


--by Rashid rahil
Bahut khooB Rashid Sahab...

Aapki Gazal behad umda hai....
Wakai aapne ahsaasOn ko khub piroya hai... Subhan Allah..

Har sher khobsurat laga, puri gazal hi behtrin hai................

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Ab isay kehte hain, ek shandaar gazhal,
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Ek muddat se kayi dard sahi ho jaise
koi fariyad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

haal-e-dil baya karte hain tere ye aasu
khamoshi mein bhi ashqon ne kahi ho jaise

tere chahere se dard ki khalish mit na payi
aaj fir meri mohabbat nakaam rahi ho jaise

tujhse juda ho kar ye ehsaas hua dil ko
zinda rahene ko dhadkano ki kami ho jaise

tera ye shaq mere pyar par aye dilbar
koi khwahish mere dil mein tuti ho jaise


--by praneeta



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sameer bhai, yaar chaa gaye ap toh.............. ek baat toh batao, kya khate ho aap, jo itna accha likhte ho, koi jaadu hai toh mujhe bhi sikha dijiye................., kasam se kya likha hai apne..................haye qatil hai jee............agar yeh thread pe hota toh , apko abhi tak patanahi kitne hi reps, mil chuke hote...
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shaan bhai,
behad umda likha hia apne......................bahut khoob, maza aa gaya gazhal padke
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Na suna zamane ne tera dard to kya ??
Bin kahe mai.Ne, har baat suni ho jaise,

Maut ke intezaar mein kat rahi zindagi
Jine ki khwaahish baki na bachi ho jaise,

Itna raushan hai dil mera, tere pyar se,
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Har pal har ghadi bas tujhe hi sochta hoon,
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woooooooooooooooooooooow..................great job guys......kya baat hai yaaro.........bahut khoob......sabne bahut hi achcha likha hai....PARI,SHAAN,PRADHYU,SAMEER,RASHID and ASLAM....aap sab ko meri taraf se bahut bahut congrates......and GOOD LUCK to all of u.....


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Thanks Dear,

Itni saari achchhi ghazaloN meiN se aapne specially mujhe compliment diyaa, uske liye tahe dil se shukriyaa

Take care

Bye

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Meri ankheiN patthar ki bani ho jaise.

khush rahiye...daad kubool kijiye..

sabhi dosto ne behad umda likha hai (all d best to all of u)

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Thanks Sameer Sahab,

Aapne khud bahot achchha likha hai, aur phir bhi mujhe compliments de rahe hai, Really I am greatful

Thanks a lot

Take care

Bye bye

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Aapki Gazal behad umda hai....
Wakai aapne ahsaasOn ko khub piroya hai... Subhan Allah..

Har sher khobsurat laga, puri gazal hi behtrin hai................

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Boss,

Thanks for choosing First, I hope aur sab bhi aapki tarah hi sochte, magar Lagtaa hai aapka aankdaa fail ho gayaa hai

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Thanks for choosing First, I hope aur sab bhi aapki tarah hi sochte, magar Lagtaa hai aapka aankdaa fail ho gayaa hai

Take care

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-Rashid
Aankdaa kabhi fail nahi hota Rahil,

Its just that hosakta hai kuch faltoo log dummy id's se voting bhi karleyte hai...

If i am the mod.... i can find out who voted for whom.....

Khair if you know that you are the best than you dont need any faltoo votings to judge u .....
   
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Aankdaa kabhi fail nahi hota Rahil,

Its just that hosakta hai kuch faltoo log dummy id's se voting bhi karleyte hai...

If i am the mod.... i can find out who voted for whom.....

Khair if you know that you are the best than you dont need any faltoo votings to judge u .....
i wanna ask SDC members..hw do u guys tolerate him?? Baqtiar...firstly der r only six participants here..v al knw each oder well..i can guarantee nobody wld b usin dummy id's to vote..he is no authority to pass on comments like dese...c'mon dis is a place wher v share each oders thots...if sum1 wins dis game doesnt necessarily mean he/she wrote d best..and vice versa..


Baqtiar..dnt pass ur value judgements..like d rankings u gave. nobody wants it (atleast not me)..also dnt come up wid stuff like dat. (crap)...hope u understnd..nothn against u..let Mods do their job nd u do urs..

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i wanna ask SDC members..hw do u guys tolerate him?? Baqtiar...firstly der r only six participants here..v al knw each oder well..i can guarantee nobody wld b usin dummy id's to vote..he is no authority to pass on comments like dese...c'mon dis is a place wher v share each oders thots...if sum1 wins dis game doesnt necessarily mean he/she wrote d best..and vice versa..


Baqtiar..dnt pass ur value judgements..like d rankings u gave. nobody wants it (atleast not me)..also dnt come up wid stuff like dat. (crap)...hope u understnd

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Do you believe in Democracy......
i strongly do..nd dats y m telln u not to pass on ur value judgements...u got sumthn to prove ur point (facts)..den please go ahead nd do dat...else u r blamin sum1 hu is as much a part of SDC as u r..i hope u understnd hu m i talkn bout..

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i strongly do..nd dats y m telln u not to pass on ur value judgements...u got sumthn to prove ur point (facts)..den please go ahead nd do dat...else u r blamin sum1 hu is as much a part of SDC as u r..i hope u understnd hu m i talkn bout..

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Well if you strongly believe than am sure you are aware that every person is having his/her own say..... and i suppose i gave my two cents comment. Now dont make it obvious (Warna log samjhingey chor ki daadi mein tinka).

And if you read my comment i said (HOSAKTA HAI) and if you want the fact Mod's are the best ppl to give u answer with facts...

How can you be sooo sure that ppl are not sooo much desperate just to win a mere... GTM contest, ppl go to anylength i suppose just for reps and jhoothi wah wah.... I say what i feel is correct according to me. And if any person dont wanna "TOLERATE" me... than by all means they have one option they can either skip reading or put me in ignore the member in your setting.

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Well if you strongly believe than am sure you are aware that every person is having his/her own say..... and i suppose i gave my two cents comment. Now dont make it obvious (Warna log samjhingey chor ki daadi mein tinka).

And if you read my comment i said (HOSAKTA HAI) and if you want the fact Mod's are the best ppl to give u answer with facts...

How can you be sooo sure that ppl are not sooo much desperate just to win a mere... GTM contest, ppl go to anylength i suppose just for reps and jhoothi wah wah.... I say what i feel is correct according to me. And if any person dont wanna "TOLERATE" me... than by all means they have one option they can either skip reading or put me in ignore the member in your setting.

Hope things are clear at u r end....

And for your info i dont need Authority to pass my comment.
dis one is gnna b discussed at length wid u.(may b whn i hav loads of free time).my second concern was d rankings u gave...did neone ask for it??..der is a polling option u have..POLL nd muh mat KHOL...

if u c d comments of oder members..dey hav all praised d work dey liked..hav nt RANKED it..u rnt authorised to..r u?? forget bout d authority..lets talk bout capability alone

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dis one is gnna b discussed at length wid u.(may b whn i hav loads of free time).my second concern was d rankings u gave...did neone ask for it??..der is a polling option u have..POLL nd muh mat KHOL...

if u c d comments of oder members..dey hav all praised d work dey liked..hav nt RANKED it..u rnt authorised to..r u?? forget bout d authority..lets talk bout capability alone

Pradhyuman
By all means you can take ur time and come up with whatever (Crap) and get it thru ur.... thick head i say whatever i wana say and mods will decide if they dont want it to be posted here or not...

and i dont do any thing asking or taking permission from any one.

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By all means you can take ur time and come up with whatever (Crap) and get it thru ur.... thick head i say whatever i wana say and mods will decide if they dont want it to be posted here or not...

and i dont do any thing asking or taking permission from any one.

(Damn this guy is jealous cuz i did not list him.....hahahaha)

Am not like the other members .... Praise karna na karna wo mera loook out hai...
jealous??? yawn...u r more girly den i thot u wer..whtever..believe me u dat crap is nt gnna come nd go..will stay nd hav a lastn impact on all dat u think bout thyself m goin out..so will reply to whtever u wanna say once i return..i suggest u go in Zen mode for dat time period


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pyaare dosto.n,

meri aap se guzaarish hai ki, yahaa.n apni pasandidaah Ghazal ko chun,ne ke liye 'poll' hai, aap apni pasandidaah Ghazal ko wahaan vote keejiye aur aap chaahe.n to Ghazal par apnii raa'ey bhee de sakte hai.n. lekin, yahaan aap khud rank bana kar bijeta ka naam ghosit na kare.n. aisa karna duusre aihbaabo.n ke liye Theek nahii.n hai...

bakhtiyaar bhaii kii 'democarcy' waali baat bhee Theek hai, lekin,yahaa.n already ek 'live poll' chal raha hai to, yahaa.n 'exit poll' aur opinion poll' ki zaruurat kahaa.n hai? proxy voting waali baat par itna kahna chaahungaa ki aisa bohat kam ho raha hai(shaayad na ke barabar), aur agar sdc ke saare dost apni fav. Ghazal ko vote kare.n to, proxy voting ka asar naa ke barabar hi rahegaa...

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3rd June 2009, 07:14 PM

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pyaare dosto.n,

meri aap se guzaarish hai ki, yahaa.n apni pasandidaah Ghazal ko chun,ne ke liye 'poll' hai, aap apni pasandidaah Ghazal ko wahaan vote keejiye aur aap chaahe.n to Ghazal par apnii raa'ey bhee de sakte hai.n. lekin, yahaan aap khud rank bana kar bijeta ka naam ghosit na kare.n. aisa karna duusre aihbaabo.n ke liye Theek nahii.n hai...

bakhtiyaar bhaii kii 'democarcy' waali baat bhee Theek hai, lekin,yahaa.n already ek 'live poll' chal raha hai to, yahaa.n 'exit poll' aur opinion poll' ki zaruurat kahaa.n hai? proxy voting waali baat par itna kahna chaahungaa ki aisa bohat kam ho raha hai(shaayad na ke barabar), aur agar sdc ke saare dost apni fav. Ghazal ko vote kare.n to, proxy voting ka asar naa ke barabar hi rahegaa...

shukriyah aap sab kaa!

Mayank

Mayank bhai,

lekin gar proxy votin ho raha hai..kam bhi hai to bhi...mera maanna hai nahin hona chahiye...yahan Baqs ki baat se sehmat hun ki gar ho raha hai to phir koi matlab nhin hai competition rakhne ka..

kya hai na ibtiyaadi mod par hai shayri to excitement rehta hai yeh competition aur sabko leke..warna

Sannu saadi apni fakeeri jogga rehn de
sohrataan ne keeta hai badnaam mere dosta
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rgrds,
Pradhyuman


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tu kabhi kabhi over d board chala jaata hai..chal rehne dete hai..phir kabhi lad lenge... yeh sab cheezein (humility, manners, empathy, ...)
hai na woh andar se aati hai..koi kisi ko kuch sikha nahin sakta.

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Mayank bhai,

lekin gar proxy votin ho raha hai..kam bhi hai to bhi...mera maanna hai nahin hona chahiye...yahan Baqs ki baat se sehmat hun ki gar ho raha hai to phir koi matlab nhin hai competition rakhne ka..

kya hai na ibtiyaadi mod par hai shayri to excitement rehta hai yeh competition aur sabko leke..warna

Sannu saadi apni fakeeri jogga rehn de
sohrataan ne keeta hai badnaam mere dosta
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Guru Gurdas mann

rgrds,
Pradhyuman


Baqs->
tu kabhi kabhi over d board chala jaata hai..chal rehne dete hai..phir kabhi lad lenge... yeh sab cheezein (humility, manners, empathy, ...)
hai na woh andar se aati hai..koi kisi ko kuch sikha nahin sakta.

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Pradyuman jii Kya aapko lag raha hai ke aisa ho raha hoga..
Zara sochiye.. agar aisa hua hota to ab tak kitne sare vote pad jate...

agar aap aisa soch rahe hai to kamal hai, phir yeh compititon ka koi matlab hi nahi.. hai naa... Arey bhai aisa hi karna hota to koi bhi pahele aapne Dummy ID banwa lenga...

but yahan aisa bilkul nahi hai......... aapne shayad pahele huye compition per gour nahi kiya jahan do winner hai agar aisa hota to ek winner to aisa ker ke jiit jata...

Mujhe kuch aapki baat nagawar guzri mauf kijiye... Isliye mujhe kehna hi pada...........

Chaliye aisa mat sochiye.. aur achi koshish karte rahiye...
And us Baqs ke chakkar mein jayenge to shayari karna bhool jayenge.........
Meri salah maniye aur chup rahiye.... As your friend I am telling you then... take it easy..


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Pradyuman jii Kya aapko lag raha hai ke aisa ho raha hoga..
Zara sochiye.. agar aisa hua hota to ab tak kitne sare vote pad jate...

agar aap aisa soch rahe hai to kamal hai, phir yeh compititon ka koi matlab hi nahi.. hai naa... Arey bhai aisa hi karna hota to koi bhi pahele aapne Dummy ID banwa lenga...

but yahan aisa bilkul nahi hai......... aapne shayad pahele huye compition per gour nahi kiya jahan do winner hai agar aisa hota to ek winner to aisa ker ke jiit jata...

Mujhe kuch aapki baat nagawar guzri mauf kijiye... Isliye mujhe kehna hi pada...........

Chaliye aisa mat sochiye.. aur achi koshish karte rahiye...
And us Baqs ke chakkar mein jayenge to shayari karna bhool jayenge.........
Meri salah maniye aur chup rahiye.... As your friend I am telling you then... take it easy..



.........................that's a good one......................lolz...


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"Bismil"

ye to padha tumne ........

Sannu saadi apni fakeeri jogga rehn de
sohrataan ne keeta hai badnaam mere dosta

lekin ye nahi padha kya ......

apne shroteyaan de pyaar satkaar di
roti khanda "marjana maan" mere dosta

Guru Gurdas Maan...

apne padhne walo ki firk karo ...... woh kya chahte hai.... unhe kaha kami hai lagti hai tumme ..... "Baq BaQ.." karne walo ki nahi ........

shayri ka ghar bahut door hai bhayee ..... aise ane jane walo ki sunte rahe to ho gaya kaam.. meri tarah hi bhatak jaoge fir ......

bas likhte raho....

ये लोग है 'बक-बक' करते रहते है
तेरे चाहने वाले तुझे पढ़ते रहते है

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dosti chahe kisi se bhi kar lo... magar dushmani soch samjh ke karna ... kyunki dushamn jo sabka sikhata hai... kabhi nahi bhoolte hum ....

aise se lado jo tumko kuch sikhaye ...... jo woqt barbaad karaye usse to nahi .....

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