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21st December 2004, 11:42 PM
Aake baitho mere sirhaane tum
Aur socho na kuchh bahaane tum. Chhu ke dekhoon to maanun main, Sach ho ya khwaab ho na jaane tum. Aaj bhi main to hoon fida tum par, Ho mere ab bhi kya diwaane tum. Meri nazaron main daal kar nazaren, Khud hi padhalo na sab fasaane tum. Koi taqaraar ab nai socho, Phir na shikave karo puraane tum. Jee main aataa hai rooth jaaun main, Hans ke mujhako lago manaane tum. Mere seene pe sar rakho apanaa, Yun raho naa bane begaane tum. hum se badal gaya wo nigaahe to kya hua zinda hai kitne log mohabbat kiye baghair |
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22nd December 2004, 11:06 AM
Aaj bhi main to hoon fida tum par,
Ho mere ab bhi kya diwaane tum. Meri nazaron main daal kar nazaren, Khud hi padhalo na sab fasaane tum. Hi! Really nice Words... I loved the above lines the most.... Accha laga aapko padhkar.. aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiyega...  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd December 2004, 10:58 PM
pulkit ji aapka bahut shukriya
10x hum se badal gaya wo nigaahe to kya hua zinda hai kitne log mohabbat kiye baghair |
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4th January 2005, 11:32 PM
Aaj bhi main to hoon fida tum par,
Ho mere ab bhi kya diwaane tum. Meri nazaron main daal kar nazaren, Khud hi padhalo na sab fasaane tum. truefeelings ji..... bahut khoob..... lag jaoo gale ki mile sukoon...... aur na is ji ko jalaooo tum...... ban gaya hai khaak tere pyar mein ^AMAN^..... ek murat bana is-se ghar mein sajaooo tum...... aapke liye yahi kutch likh paya hoon..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th January 2005, 11:47 PM
hi tru feelings... bohot acha likha hai aapne
likhte rahiye!! kru |
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5th January 2005, 08:45 PM
lag jaoo gale ki mile sukoon......
aur na is ji ko jalaooo tum...... ban gaya hai khaak tere pyar mein ^AMAN^..... ek murat bana is-se ghar mein sajaooo tum...... aapka bahot shukriya aman ji aur kru ji turfellings1 hum se badal gaya wo nigaahe to kya hua zinda hai kitne log mohabbat kiye baghair |
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