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19th December 2012, 10:27 AM
Zakhm Khaaye Uss Hadd Tak
Sah Naa Paaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Dariya MeN PaaNi Hai Iss Qadar
Naawo Utar Jaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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19th December 2012, 02:07 PM
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Zakhm Khaaye Uss Hadd Tak
Sah Naa Paaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Dariya MeN PaaNi Hai Iss Qadar
Naawo Utar Jaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
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19th December 2012, 05:52 PM
acchhi ghazal huyi hai naresh jii...............
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
nice........................daad o mubaaraqbaad
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19th December 2012, 08:48 PM
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Naresh Mehra ji ,
Aap ka jawab nahin , seede se lafzon mein sach ka samna karava diya.
Aap ko dher saari shubkamnayen.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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20th December 2012, 12:30 AM
originally posted by naresh ji
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
touching very touching these lines....nice one.
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20th December 2012, 09:08 AM
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
bahot hi umdaa gazal hai naresh bhai.......
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20th December 2012, 05:40 PM
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Zakhm Khaaye Uss Hadd Tak
Sah Naa Paaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Dariya MeN PaaNi Hai Iss Qadar
Naawo Utar Jaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
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bahot khoob kalaam .............................
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21st December 2012, 11:50 AM
Naresh jee:
namaste!
bahot hi behterin ghazal likhi hai aapne... mujhe pasand aayiin...dil se daad
KhuSh rahen... apnaa khayaal rakhen
duaaon ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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21st December 2012, 06:58 PM
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Zakhm Khaaye Uss Hadd Tak
Sah Naa Paaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Dariya MeN PaaNi Hai Iss Qadar
Naawo Utar Jaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
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AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
bahut khoob ... naresh bhai ...... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ........
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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22nd December 2012, 08:22 AM
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ati uttam .....................................
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Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Rajeev Sharma JI !! Inaayat !!!
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22nd December 2012, 01:49 PM
bahut khoob raha naresh jee..aapka ye andaaz..dil se daad aapko..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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25th December 2012, 10:17 AM
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acchhi ghazal huyi hai naresh jii...............
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
nice........................daad o mubaaraqbaad
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SukhanNawaazii Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Ufaq JI !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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25th December 2012, 12:21 PM
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Zakhm Khaaye Uss Hadd Tak
Sah Naa Paaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Dariya MeN PaaNi Hai Iss Qadar
Naawo Utar Jaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
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behad khoobsurat kavish hai Mehra saab..... bahot ummdah parwaaz... bahot aalaa khayaalat... aur ek sacchi tasweer utar aati hai zahen me... likhte raheN... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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25th December 2012, 05:27 PM
Naresh Jee behad khoob kalaam kahi hai daad...
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga
Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti
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26th December 2012, 11:17 AM
Bhaiyaa, bahut accha likha hai aapne, sabhi ahsaas acche lge par yeh ahsaas kuch khaas lge....
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
regards
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th December 2012, 06:32 PM
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Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Naresh Mehra ji ,
Aap ka jawab nahin , seede se lafzon mein sach ka samna karava diya.
Aap ko dher saari shubkamnayen.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Ghazal Nawaazii Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Sanjay Ji !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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27th December 2012, 08:22 AM
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originally posted by naresh ji
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
touching very touching these lines....nice one.
rajinderseep
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NawaazishaaT Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Rajinder JI !! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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27th December 2012, 09:52 PM
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Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
bahot hi umdaa gazal hai naresh bhai.......
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Ghazal Nawaazii Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Aahnaa JI !! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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28th December 2012, 07:52 AM
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bahot khoob kalaam .............................
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Behad ShukriyaaH ... Mansha JI ! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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28th December 2012, 11:29 PM
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Naresh jee:
namaste!
bahot hi behterin ghazal likhi hai aapne... mujhe pasand aayiin...dil se daad
KhuSh rahen... apnaa khayaal rakhen
duaaon ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Koshish Ko MohabbatoN Se Nawaazne Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Dhaval JI ! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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29th December 2012, 08:54 PM
Main to chiraag hu, tere aashiyane ka,
Kabhi na kabhi, to bujh jaunga,
Aaj shikayat hai tujhe, mere ujaale se,
Kal andhere mein bahut yaad aaunga...
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29th December 2012, 11:00 PM
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AaNsoo Bhar Ke AaNkh MeN
Palak Jhukaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
bahut khoob ... naresh bhai ...... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ........
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Ghazal Nawaazii Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Rajender Bhai !! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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30th December 2012, 09:58 AM
Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
ek baar fir se bahot khoob mehra saaab...... kya ehsaas hain
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1st January 2013, 01:00 AM
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bahut khoob raha naresh jee..aapka ye andaaz..dil se daad aapko..
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Sukhan Nawaazii Kaa Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Arvind JI !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd January 2013, 10:36 AM
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
Jhoot Hai Jitnaa Chehare Par
Aaiinaa Dikhaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
kya baat ... bahot khoob
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20th January 2013, 06:35 PM
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behad khoobsurat kavish hai Mehra saab..... bahot ummdah parwaaz... bahot aalaa khayaalat... aur ek sacchi tasweer utar aati hai zahen me... likhte raheN... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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MohabbatoN Se Nawaazne Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Shaad Bhaii !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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21st January 2013, 12:22 AM
Kaise haiN naresh saaheb
Achha kalaam hai
daad qubool farmaaeiN
apna khyaal rakheiN
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21st January 2013, 09:58 PM
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Naresh Jee behad khoob kalaam kahi hai daad...
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Sukhan Nawaazii Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Parwaazz JI !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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31st January 2013, 08:58 AM
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Bhaiyaa, bahut accha likha hai aapne, sabhi ahsaas acche lge par yeh ahsaas kuch khaas lge....
Woh SaaTh Chal Kar Bhi Mujh Se
Faaslaa Banaaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
regards
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Sukhan Nawaazii Kaa Behad ShukriyaaH ... Sunita JI ! Inaayat !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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6th February 2013, 10:30 AM
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Main to chiraag hu, tere aashiyane ka,
Kabhi na kabhi, to bujh jaunga,
Aaj shikayat hai tujhe, mere ujaale se,
Kal andhere mein bahut yaad aaunga...
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Aamad Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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11th February 2013, 08:08 AM
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Jo Tum Ne Kaha Hai Mujh Se
Sab SunTe Aaye Uss Hadd Tak ...
ek baar fir se bahot khoob mehra saaab...... kya ehsaas hain
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Sukhan Nawaazii Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Shaad Bhaii !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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