doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein

[Feroz]

dosto,

ek arsaa e daraaz ke baad ek ghazal pesh kar rahaa hoon, qubool farmaayein. yeh jald hee aani waali meri kitaab "feroz" mein se hai.



doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein
na ikhtilaaf daal jism aur jaan mein

kuch raaz haiN alfaaz haiN soz o gudaaz haiN
koi bhi aur shai nahin meri dukaan mein

aaye ghataa to abr ke paiwand lagaaye
suraj suraakh kar gaya hai aasmaan mein

sochey hai 'gate' par khadee aawaaraa bhooki gaaye
kitni haree hai ghaas is bangley ke 'lawn' mein

kya faasley kya aabley kya dhoop kya pyaas
sahra ka safar kaT gayaa tere dhyaan mein.


shukriya

Feroz

[Dhaval]

Feroz jee:

namaste!

aap jaise umdaah Shaayar ees Shayri Pariwaar mein maujuud hai... baDi hi KhuShii kii baat hai yeh... dilkaSh Ghazal...matlaa mujhe Khaas pasaNd aayaa...bahot bahot ShuKriyaah jo aapne apnii aane waali kitaab kee Ghazal hum sab ke saath baaNTi... nayii kitaab ke liye tah-e-dil se mubaaraQbaad... yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye... dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

[Feroz]

Originally Posted by Dhaval

Feroz jee:

namaste!

aap jaise umdaah Shaayar ees Shayri Pariwaar mein maujuud hai... baDi hi KhuShii kii baat hai yeh... dilkaSh Ghazal...matlaa mujhe Khaas pasaNd aayaa...bahot bahot ShuKriyaah jo aapne apnii aane waali kitaab kee Ghazal hum sab ke saath baaNTi... nayii kitaab ke liye tah-e-dil se mubaaraQbaad... yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye... dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

Dhaval Sahab, namaste

izzat afzaayi ke liye aap ka mashkoor hoon, main to yahaan aana tark kar chuka thaa lekin maikash, jo mere bhaiyon jaise hain, ke israar par mainey phir se yahan aana shuru kiya. aap ko ghazal pasand aayi, to meri mehnat ko phal lag gaye.

tah e dil se shukriye ke saath

Feroz