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Aapse ham rooth jayein... -
29th June 2016, 05:11 PM
Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein fasle aao miTayei.n dhadkano me qaid hai jo nagma vo ab gungunayei.n aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai chahtei.n ab sar uthayei.n. har girah khole zabaa.n to kyun bhala tala lagayei.n galtiyaan mana huyi hai.n kya saza hai ye batayei.n? kya koi takta hai rahei.n kya kaha? ab lauT aayei.n.. ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n.. rang khushboo tazgi ho ghar 'madhu' aise sajayei.n.. Madhu... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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29th June 2016, 11:15 PM
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wah madhu jee bahut khoob likhti rahen Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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30th June 2016, 09:01 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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30th June 2016, 02:45 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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30th June 2016, 02:45 PM
vaah madhu ji buhet achi ghazal likhee hey aap ney daad qubul kariye ji
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30th June 2016, 02:49 PM
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Aapke sath ke liye shukriya shabd bhi kafi nhi lag raha mujhe...... Bas ye sath banaye rakhein.... Salamat rahein... Madhu.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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1st July 2016, 06:44 PM
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Qabil-e-sataish hai Iss behtareen ghazal pe khaaksaar ki daad qubool karey |
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13th July 2016, 05:57 PM
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aati rahein....... salamat rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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14th July 2016, 09:16 AM
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bahut acchaa.. bahut bahut acchaa likhaa ha aapne madhu ji.... har baar hi ki tarah ekdam ... beautiful.... likhtee rahen Shaad......... |
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30th July 2016, 02:42 PM
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Bahut khushi huyi ki aap ko meri koshish pasand aayi Salamat rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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11th August 2016, 04:10 PM
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Hausla afzai karte rahiyega. ... Salamat rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th September 2016, 01:45 PM
Madhuji bohut hi kamiyaab koshish hai aap ki.
isse zahir hota hai ke shayeri men aap ki pakad kafi mazboot hai. choti beher " fayelatun fayelatun" men umdah kalaam...lajawab. Regards Mujeeb |
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13th September 2016, 03:44 PM
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Madhu Bala  Aapse ham rooth jayein fasle aao miTayei.n kya rooth jane se faasle kam hote hai  yu hi na behlao madam ji, kahin faasle kam karne ke chakkar meiN rooth kar aur faasle bda liye jaayeN  majaak kar rhi hu...accha likha hai meri khaas pasand es poetry se : ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n.. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd September 2016, 03:35 PM
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Aate rahiyega aage bhi raunak banaye rakhein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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12th October 2016, 03:21 PM
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kabhi kabhi jo kaam hans k nahi hota vo nakhre dikha k vo jata hai....  ...Apko koshish pasand aayi Khushi huyi... Aati rahiyega Apna khayaal rakhein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th October 2016, 05:00 PM
Bahut. Hi khas ehsas he
umda kalam pesh kiya he Shakir Ali |
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21st October 2016, 04:00 PM
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Khushi huyi aapko pasand aaya Aate rahein.. Khush rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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