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Love to shikyat naa karna - 23rd May 2009, 12:41 PM
banaya hai mere aasouon par aashiyana apna
jo aaye beech mein sailaab to shikyat naa karna

bani hain deewarein mere dil ke tukdon se
jo dhadkane lage tukde bhi to shikyat naa karna

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

hai kaid mere saansein in fizaon mein
jo aaye meri khushboo to shikyat naa karna


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24th May 2009, 03:54 PM

Arvind ji !

ye toh mujhe nahi pata ki aap "kisse shikyat naa karne ko keh rahe hai" ......magar aapki nazm ke sabhi sher bahut ache hai......padhkar dard mehsus hota hai...

ye mujhe jiyada ache lage......

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

aise hi likhte rahiye.........

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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....

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25th May 2009, 10:11 AM
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

Kya Khoob Likha Hai Yaar, Seedha Dil Ke Andar Utar Gayi....................

Wah Wah.............
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banaya hai mere aasouon par aashiyana apna
jo aaye beech mein sailaab to shikyat naa karna

bani hain deewarein mere dil ke tukdon se
jo dhadkane lage tukde bhi to shikyat naa karna

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

hai kaid mere saansein in fizaon mein
jo aaye meri khushboo to shikyat naa karna


Nalin

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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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25th May 2009, 10:32 AM
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banaya hai mere aasouon par aashiyana apna
jo aaye beech mein sailaab to shikyat naa karna

bani hain deewarein mere dil ke tukdon se
jo dhadkane lage tukde bhi to shikyat naa karna

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

hai kaid mere saansein in fizaon mein
jo aaye meri khushboo to shikyat naa karna

bohot hi acha likha aap ne ji,,,
bas yun samjhiye ke jitni
tareef kare kam hai,,
its wow
keep it up

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banaya hai mere aasouon par aashiyana apna
jo aaye beech mein sailaab to shikyat naa karna

bani hain deewarein mere dil ke tukdon se
jo dhadkane lage tukde bhi to shikyat naa karna

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

hai kaid mere saansein in fizaon mein
jo aaye meri khushboo to shikyat naa karna
superb my friend........ sabhi lines r like subhaan allah........... padhte padhte ehsaas hota hai ke bohat dard hai aapke seene mei....... aakhein geeli kar di aapne...... dard.. sidha dil se utha kar rakh diya hai aapne yaha........ lovely my dear..... my all good wishes for u
   
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Arvind ji !

ye toh mujhe nahi pata ki aap "kisse shikyat naa karne ko keh rahe hai" ......magar aapki nazm ke sabhi sher bahut ache hai......padhkar dard mehsus hota hai...

ye mujhe jiyada ache lage......

rangee hain deewarein mere khoon ke katron se
jo tapkane lage beech mein to shikyat naa karna

banee hai chatt mere toote hue armaanon kee
jo gir jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

laga is par mere sabr ka darwaaza hai
jo toot jaaye beech mein to shikyat naa karna

aise hi likhte rahiye.........

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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....

---naresh mehra--
thanx a lot naresh jee, ye kisi khaas ke liye nahin likha hai, ye to un sabke liye hai jo ise feel kar sakte hain.
Thx. Again.


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Kya Khoob Likha Hai Yaar, Seedha Dil Ke Andar Utar Gayi....................

Wah Wah.............
thx a lot nalin jee, aapne ise samjha aur aapko pasand aaya, dil se shukriya ada karta hóon.


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bohot hi acha likha aap ne ji,,,
bas yun samjhiye ke jitni
tareef kare kam hai,,
its wow
keep it up
thanx rani jee, aapne apna keemti waqt nikaal kar ise pada samjha aur reply kiya uske liye shukriya.
Bas yun hee mera confidence badate rahiye.


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superb my friend........ sabhi lines r like subhaan allah........... padhte padhte ehsaas hota hai ke bohat dard hai aapke seene mei....... aakhein geeli kar di aapne...... dard.. sidha dil se utha kar rakh diya hai aapne yaha........ lovely my dear..... my all good wishes for u
dil ke chhalon ko shayri kahe to gam nahin,
taqleef to tab hoti jab koi waah waah karta hai.
Anyway thanx a lot for ur appreciation n compliments.


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