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Bahut khoob sher huye hai mehfil mein shukriyaa adaa karna chahunga Madhu aapka aur azaz ji, sabaa ji aur Mujahid bhai ka jihone mehfil mein umdaa sher rakhe....
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buhet shukria mast sahab
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buhet shukria mast sahab
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10th April 2016, 07:23 PM
Aye Falak Apni Khubsoorti Ko Zara Sambhal Ke Rakhna..
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buhet shukria mast sahab
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kya baat hai azaz sahab..........
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buhet ach,aa shair likha hry aap ney
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Aye Falak Apni Khubsoorti Ko Zara Sambhal Ke Rakhna..
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11th April 2016, 02:51 PM
apney ihsaas main falak see gehraaeey paida kar lein
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apney ihsaas main falak see gehraaeey paida kar lein
kaash insan bhi insaniyat sey aashnaaeey paida kar lein
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Waaah....umda khayaal saba ji........
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15th April 2016, 12:21 AM
Mat Kar Gurur Aye Falak Apne Chamakte Hue Sitaro Pe..
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16th April 2016, 03:05 PM
Dosto pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word: lams
Meaning= sense of feeling/touch/sparsh
Mujhe umeed na thi aye hum-dum nijaat-e-marz ki
Tere lams-e-gudaaz ne mujh ko kiya shifa-e-aazaar
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Nijaat-e-marz= to come out of disease
Lams-e-gudaaz= delicate touch
Shifa-e-aazaar= to recover from a disease
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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word: lams
Meaning= sense of feeling/touch/sparsh
Mujhe umeed na thi aye hum-dum nijaat-e-marz ki
Tere lams-e-gudaaz ne mujh ko kiya shifa-e-aazaar
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Nijaat-e-marz= to come out of disease
Lams-e-gudaaz= delicate touch
Shifa-e-aazaar= to recover from a disease
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21st April 2016, 10:54 AM
lams-e-anaa ki daastaan jo ched di yaar ne
deeda-e-tar behte rahe zakhm jo taaza huye
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lams-e-anaa ki daastaan jo ched di yaar ne
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Masha allah
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21st April 2016, 12:26 PM
waah khoob unwaan diya mujahid jii..
anu bahut khoob sher....daad pesh hai..
jaldi hee mahfil me kisi khayaal ke sath pesh hone ki koshish karoongi...
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waah khoob unwaan diya mujahid jii..
anu bahut khoob sher....daad pesh hai..
jaldi hee mahfil me kisi khayaal ke sath pesh hone ki koshish karoongi...
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22nd April 2016, 04:05 PM
Lams par ek chhoti si koshish ....
isi se janiye unse visaal kaisa tha...
Abhi bhi lams e mohabbat basa hai hathon me...
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Lams par ek chhoti si koshish ....
isi se janiye unse visaal kaisa tha...
Abhi bhi lams e mohabbat basa hai hathon me...
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Lams par ek chhoti si koshish ....
isi se janiye unse visaal kaisa tha...
Abhi bhi lams e mohabbat basa hai hathon me...
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Bohat hi achha sher madhu ji
Baaqi membraan se bhi darkhuwast hai
Shirkat karey
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Shukriya mujahid sahab........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Bahut khoob sher hua hai Madhu daad qubool farmiyeGaa
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Aapki daad sar ankhon pe........................................
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24th April 2016, 09:09 PM
Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat
Guzishta diye gaye lafz ka waqt yaha ikhtataam hota hai
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word= anjum/انجُم
Meaning= star/sitaara
Arz karta hu
Merey qismat ke maah-o-anjum bhi gurezaan ho gaye
Dekha falak mai toh sitaarey bhi ab pinhaan ho gaye
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Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat
Guzishta diye gaye lafz ka waqt yaha ikhtataam hota hai
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word= anjum/انجُم
Meaning= star/sitaara
Arz karta hu
Merey qismat ke maah-o-anjum bhi gurezaan ho gaye
Dekha falak mai toh sitaarey bhi ab pinhaan ho gaye
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Bahut khoob....lafz...
Aur umda sher mujahid sahab..............
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Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat
Guzishta diye gaye lafz ka waqt yaha ikhtataam hota hai
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word= anjum/انجُم
Meaning= star/sitaara
Arz karta hu
Merey qismat ke maah-o-anjum bhi gurezaan ho gaye
Dekha falak mai toh sitaarey bhi ab pinhaan ho gaye
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Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai mere bhai .... daad qubool farmaiyega aur anjum to aap sab hai is mehfil ke umeed karta hoon jald kuch likh paaun jo mehfil mein rakhne ke kaabil ho
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Kab tak rahey mehkumi-e-anjum mai meri khaak
Ya mai nahi ya gardish-e-aflaak nahi hai
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Kab tak rahey mehkumi-e-anjum mai meri khaak
Ya mai nahi ya gardish-e-aflaak nahi hai
Allama iqbal
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Ye khubsurat silsila kahi ruk sa gaya hai
Chaliye isey dobara shuru ki jaaye
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka lafz
Word: Zehan
Meaning= mind
Nahi hai muttafiq afkaar-e-dil merey zehan se ab
Nahi deta ijaazat jo tamanna dil karey hai ab(MUJAHID)
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Ye khubsurat silsila kahi ruk sa gaya hai
Chaliye isey dobara shuru ki jaaye
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka lafz
Word: Zehan
Meaning= mind
Nahi hai muttafiq afkaar-e-dil merey zehan se ab
Nahi deta ijaazat jo tamanna dil karey hai ab(MUJAHID)
Muttafiq= agree
Afkaar-e-dil= imagination of heart
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Bahut khoob......
Ek koshish pesh karti hun..
zehan se apne mita denge unse ulfat hai
karein kya dil ka yahaa.n unki hee huqoomat hai
bhulaye baitha hai dil kab se is zamane ko
khudi ko bhoola nahi hai yahi ganimat hai..
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Ye khubsurat silsila kahi ruk sa gaya hai
Chaliye isey dobara shuru ki jaaye
Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka lafz
Word: Zehan
Meaning= mind
Nahi hai muttafiq afkaar-e-dil merey zehan se ab
Nahi deta ijaazat jo tamanna dil karey hai ab(MUJAHID)
Muttafiq= agree
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is thread ko doobte andheron se ujhaagar karne ka pehle to aapka shukriyaa aada karna chahunga mere bhai......kya chun ke aap naya lafz lekar aaye hai mehfil mein....khoob sher ataa farmayaa hai janaab khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye
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Bahut khoob......
Ek koshish pesh karti hun..
zehan se apne mita denge unse ulfat hai
karein kya dil ka yahaa.n unki hee huqoomat hai
bhulaye baitha hai dil kab se is zamane ko
khudi ko bhoola nahi hai yahi ganimat hai..
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Mere zehan mein basi teri khusbu
Kuch bikhri si kuch mehaki si
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21st July 2016, 11:15 PM
Bohat hi aala sher kaha mast sahab
Kitni saadgi hai aapke iss sher mai
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21st July 2016, 11:16 PM
Mere zehn mein jab bhi tumhara naam aata hai
Na koi dard hota hai na hi aaraam aata hai
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21st July 2016, 11:17 PM
Bohat hi achha sher kaha aapne sarika ji
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22nd July 2016, 04:41 AM
Zahan se mei.N teri yadei.N mita daloo.N magar Fakhri
Karoo.Nga kya mei.N us khaali jagah ka yeh bata jana
Fakhri
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