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Bahut khoob sher huye hai mehfil mein shukriyaa adaa karna chahunga Madhu aapka aur azaz ji, sabaa ji aur Mujahid bhai ka jihone mehfil mein umdaa sher rakhe....

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Waah!!! Bahut khoob saba ji...........



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apney ihsaas main falak see gehraaeey paida kar lein
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Mat Kar Gurur Aye Falak Apne Chamakte Hue Sitaro Pe..

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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: lams
Meaning= sense of feeling/touch/sparsh

Mujhe umeed na thi aye hum-dum nijaat-e-marz ki
Tere lams-e-gudaaz ne mujh ko kiya shifa-e-aazaar

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Nijaat-e-marz= to come out of disease
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Mujhe umeed na thi aye hum-dum nijaat-e-marz ki
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waah khoob unwaan diya mujahid jii..

anu bahut khoob sher....daad pesh hai..

jaldi hee mahfil me kisi khayaal ke sath pesh hone ki koshish karoongi...




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anu bahut khoob sher....daad pesh hai..

jaldi hee mahfil me kisi khayaal ke sath pesh hone ki koshish karoongi...

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Lams par ek chhoti si koshish ....

isi se janiye unse visaal kaisa tha...
Abhi bhi lams e mohabbat basa hai hathon me...

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Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat

Guzishta diye gaye lafz ka waqt yaha ikhtataam hota hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word= anjum/انجُم
Meaning= star/sitaara

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Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

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Arz karta hu

Merey qismat ke maah-o-anjum bhi gurezaan ho gaye
Dekha falak mai toh sitaarey bhi ab pinhaan ho gaye

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Bahut khoob....lafz...

Aur umda sher mujahid sahab..............



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waah!!bahut khoob peshkash..............



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Ye khubsurat silsila kahi ruk sa gaya hai

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Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka lafz

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Nahi hai muttafiq afkaar-e-dil merey zehan se ab
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Nahi hai muttafiq afkaar-e-dil merey zehan se ab
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Bahut khoob......

Ek koshish pesh karti hun..

zehan se apne mita denge unse ulfat hai
karein kya dil ka yahaa.n unki hee huqoomat hai

bhulaye baitha hai dil kab se is zamane ko
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is thread ko doobte andheron se ujhaagar karne ka pehle to aapka shukriyaa aada karna chahunga mere bhai......kya chun ke aap naya lafz lekar aaye hai mehfil mein....khoob sher ataa farmayaa hai janaab khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye



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Bahut khoob......

Ek koshish pesh karti hun..

zehan se apne mita denge unse ulfat hai
karein kya dil ka yahaa.n unki hee huqoomat hai

bhulaye baitha hai dil kab se is zamane ko
khudi ko bhoola nahi hai yahi ganimat hai..

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