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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha ... ! - 9th March 2011, 02:02 PM
Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka


Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye

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9th March 2011, 05:33 PM
radhika ji
radhe radhe

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

ye ashaar bahut gahare aur umdaa rahe .... yu saari ghazal khoobsurat lagi ... dil se daad hazir hai ..

yu hi likhti rahiye .........

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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka

Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"

Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka
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RADHIKA JI, bahut khoob likha hai aapne,meri daad kubool karen.
duaon ke sath
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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

uff bebasee..........nazar aa rahi hai is sher me.. matlaa bahot khoob..


Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

ShiqaayteN aur rawaayateN duniya ki.... afsos!! magar sacchaai


Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

"Anjaana" is not creating effect here.. may be "Anjaano" will be better suited


Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Mashaalllah.... superb thought....

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka

beauty.... superb sher and kalaam is savaa ser..... Dil se daad peshe khidmat... likhti rahen, khush rahen..

shaad...

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10th March 2011, 10:28 AM
Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka


Very Nice Thought .... Radhika Ji !

Acchi ghazal hui ....... tahe dil se daa hazir hai ... likhti rahen aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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10th March 2011, 04:44 PM
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radhika ji
radhe radhe

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

ye ashaar bahut gahare aur umdaa rahe .... yu saari ghazal khoobsurat lagi ... dil se daad hazir hai ..

yu hi likhti rahiye .........
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya..............................


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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Bahaut hi dilkash Andaaz se aaghaz ki hai Dost

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Sahi Kaha aap ne Fareb se bhari hai duniya

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Bahaut khooooooooob Ehsaas hai

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Khoooooooob

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Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Bahaut hi umdaah Radika ji Jaan-e-Ghazal hai ye sher

 Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka

Nice One

Aap ko parh kar dil khush ho gia behtareen kalaam paish kia hai aap ne

Dua go
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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigah Tere Diidar Ka

Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate HeiN Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Gunehgaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"

Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka
Good one, Radhika Ji...!

Khayaal aur bayaani bahut acche lage hameiN...! Daad qabul kareiN...!

Duaaon ke saath


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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka

Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"

Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka
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RADHIKA JI, bahut khoob likha hai aapne,meri daad kubool karen.
duaon ke sath
kriahna

ji bhaut bhaut shukriya....................


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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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Radhika Jee

Namaste:


aap ki yeh Ghazal achchhi lagiii.. ehsaas behad khuub hai.n aur bayaa.n bhii... har Gahzal ek paayedaan hai jo ki aap ko manzil ki aur le jaa rahii hai.... koshish zaari rakhenge to rawaani khud ba khud aur behtar hotii jaayegiii.. aap ki Ghazal ke matle aur maqte ke saath thoDi sii chhedchhaad kii hai, ummeed hai aap bura nahii.n maanengii...

Ek bahaana Dhundhati Niigaa tere diidaar ka
kyaa pata phir kab ho milna mere humdum yaar ka

DhuunDhati hai pattharo.n mein phool kyun tuu :Raadhikaa:
hai nahii.n qaabil yahaa.n ai dost tere pyaar kaa..

Daad haazir hai.. qubool keejiye....

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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka
bahot bahot acchi peshkash .................................

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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka

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Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

uff bebasee..........nazar aa rahi hai is sher me.. matlaa bahot khoob..


Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

ShiqaayteN aur rawaayateN duniya ki.... afsos!! magar sacchaai


Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

"Anjaana" is not creating effect here.. may be "Anjaano" will be better suited


Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Mashaalllah.... superb thought....

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka

beauty.... superb sher and kalaam is savaa ser..... Dil se daad peshe khidmat... likhti rahen, khush rahen..

shaad...
Ji Thanks A Lot ...............................


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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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1st February 2012, 11:40 AM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2 View Post
Ek Bahana Dhundti Hai Niigha Tere Diidar Ka
Kya Pata Kab Milna Ho Mere Yaar Ka

Sau Jurm Karke Nikal Jaate Hai Log
Koi Nisha'N Nahi Rehta Ghuneghaar Ka

Tera Jhoot Tujhse Hii Bayaa'N Hota Hai
Har Baar Bharam Tut'Taa Aitbaar Ka

Jaankar Bhi Woh Anajaana Sa Mila Hamse
Kya Yahi Sila Hai Tere Pyaar Ka

Dilo'N Ko Rok Nahi Sakti Milne Se
Phir Kya Faayedaa Aisii Deewaar Ka

Kyu Dhundti Hai PatTharoN Me Phool "Radhika"
Jub Haq Hii Tut'Taa Haqdaar Ka
radhika ji, bahut badhiya qalaam bana hai....
ek gahraayee hai aapke har sher meN, padh kar bahut achha laga..
daad qubuul kijiyega....

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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