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Love Mum, I vividly remember..... - 26th June 2013, 12:30 AM


I can still feel your firm.. grip on my chin,

The teeth of the comb, piercing the skin!


The oil in my hair spared no strand,
I still feel that firm, grip of your hand!


Mum I vividly remember, those early school days,
And still do wonder, how you coped with that phase!


Tears rolling down my cheek, you dropped me at the gate
And when you came back ,it was my life's longest wait!


Those three hours did.. feel like a day,
Just kept thinking.. of home and play!


I reminisce you teaching, how to grip a chalk,
Was too young to remember, how you taught me to walk!

No matter when I woke up, found you awake,
Always made me wonder, does she ever take a break?


Can I ever thank you enough, I don think so,
Will miss you Mum, no matter where I go!

............................
Was reminiscing about the start of my school life...especially the very ealry ones and my Mum's impression on me...
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4th July 2013, 04:58 PM

wow..heartfelt..thanks for sharing Ahmed bhai..


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12th July 2014, 05:42 PM

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wow..heartfelt..thanks for sharing Ahmed bhai..
Salam Bismil Bhaee,
Khushaamdeed bhaee!! A heartfelt Thank You for your kind words bhaee... and sorry for the belated thanking!! Much obliged!


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I can still feel your firm.. grip on my chin,

The teeth of the comb, piercing the skin!


The oil in my hair spared no strand,
I still feel that firm, grip of your hand!


Mum I vividly remember, those early school days,
And still do wonder, how you coped with that phase!


Tears rolling down my cheek, you dropped me at the gate
And when you came back ,it was my life's longest wait!


Those three hours did.. feel like a day,
Just kept thinking.. of home and play!


I reminisce you teaching, how to grip a chalk,
Was too young to remember, how you taught me to walk!

No matter when I woke up, found you awake,
Always made me wonder, does she ever take a break?


Can I ever thank you enough, I don think so,
Will miss you Mum, no matter where I go!

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Was reminiscing about the start of my school life...especially the very ealry ones and my Mum's impression on me...
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Ahmad Hyderabadi
23-06-2013

speechless.....................


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13th July 2014, 02:21 PM

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I can still feel your firm.. grip on my chin,

The teeth of the comb, piercing the skin!


The oil in my hair spared no strand,
I still feel that firm, grip of your hand!


Mum I vividly remember, those early school days,
And still do wonder, how you coped with that phase!


Tears rolling down my cheek, you dropped me at the gate
And when you came back ,it was my life's longest wait!


Those three hours did.. feel like a day,
Just kept thinking.. of home and play!


I reminisce you teaching, how to grip a chalk,
Was too young to remember, how you taught me to walk!
No matter when I woke up, found you awake,
Always made me wonder, does she ever take a break?


Can I ever thank you enough, I don think so,
Will miss you Mum, no matter where I go!
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Was reminiscing about the start of my school life...especially the very ealry ones and my Mum's impression on me...
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Ahmad Hyderabadi
23-06-2013

Absolutely stunning............





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14th July 2014, 12:00 AM

Ahmed Bhai....

Very nice and thoughtful .....

keep sharing things like that...


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Ahmed Bhai....

Very nice and thoughtful .....

keep sharing things like that...
Aadaab Hasan Bhaee!!

Welcome and a biiig Thank You for Your visit and on top of that Your kind worded appreciation !! Buhat Masarrat huee aapko yahaan daykh!!


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Simply outstanding......bahot hi touching poem hai Ahmadji...full of true feelings and love for mum.
Aadaab Naaz Behna,
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14th July 2014, 10:17 PM

So beautiful !!! Such affectionate and tender thoughts, and such a loving narration!! Superb, Ahmad sahab !!!


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So beautiful !!! Such affectionate and tender thoughts, and such a loving narration!! Superb, Ahmad sahab !!!
Aadaab Zarraa bhaee.... KhsuhAamDeed!! KhushAamdeed ! Bhai hearty Thanks for you visit as well as your kind words of appreciation!! Waysay yay baat bilkul sahee haye.. Mom ka chaanta bhi..in hindsight does reflect(sometimes with echo in the ear) her love and affection...

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