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3rd March 2013, 10:37 PM
The Most Beautiful Moment, I've Ever Been Through!
I open up my eyes, under a clear blue sky,
I lay in grassy bed, by the lakeside!
Sweet sounds of birds, chirping on a tree,
Never ever before, found myself so free!
Free from the constant, worries and strife,
Here every living being, has got a free life!
Crisp fresh air, filling up my chest,
If life is a wave, am riding its crest!
I take a few steps, and reach a waterfall,
The beauty of the sight, couldn't help but enthrall!
Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!
For all this was a dream, wish it comes true,
Most beautiful moment, I've ever been through!,
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7th March 2013, 12:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi
The Most Beautiful Moment, I've Ever Been Through!
I open up my eyes, under a clear blue sky,
I lay in grassy bed, by the lakeside!
Sweet sounds of birds, chirping on a tree,
Never ever before, found myself so free!
Free from the constant, worries and strife,
Here every living being, has got a free life!
Crisp fresh air, filling up my chest,
If life is a wave, am riding its crest!
I take a few steps, and reach a waterfall,
The beauty of the sight, couldn't help but enthrall!
Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!
For all this was a dream, wish it comes true,
Most beautiful moment, I've ever been through!,
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Beautiful indeed......
Some Dreams do come true.....
InshaAllah.... 
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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7th March 2013, 09:08 PM
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Beautiful indeed......
Some Dreams do come true.....
InshaAllah.... 
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Aameen!
Thank You Sis!
Yes they do and am ever so thankful to The Almighty for everything!
Wish everyone's just dreams do come true as well!

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13th April 2013, 10:43 PM
main bhi kuch isi tarah socha karta tha ..... kash sab kuch alag thalag hokar waqt aisa hi rehta....... meri imaginary world to bilkul cartoon ki tarah hoti ........
Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!
kya khushbu he inn lines me waah waah ..........
great ahmed sahab
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14th April 2013, 12:22 PM
A beautiful dream indeed, Ahmad bhai.
Abdul Kalam (former president ) has said..
Dream,dream, dream. Convert your dreams into thoughts.
And convert your thoughts into action.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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19th April 2013, 12:08 AM
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main bhi kuch isi tarah socha karta tha ..... kash sab kuch alag thalag hokar waqt aisa hi rehta....... meri imaginary world to bilkul cartoon ki tarah hoti ........
Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!
kya khushbu he inn lines me waah waah ..........
great ahmed sahab
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Aadaab Rohit Jee! Khushaamdeed!
 good to know about your beautiful thoughts! You know when Iwas a kid, I used to just stare at the nature and landscape paintings of my Dad( one of his hobbies) and wish to go inside them and experience the beauty in them.
Thank You for your visit as well as kind words of encouragement! And sorry for the delay in thanking ya!
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19th April 2013, 12:11 AM
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A beautiful dream indeed, Ahmad bhai.
Abdul Kalam (former president ) has said..
Dream,dream, dream. Convert your dreams into thoughts.
And convert your thoughts into action.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Aadaab Sehgal Saahab!
Ever so glad to see you here Sir!
Thank You for your appreciation and sharing those inspiring words with us! Very motivating indeed are they! Thanks once again and waiting for your next posting in this section, surely your safe isn't empty yet!
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8th May 2013, 10:50 AM
an effusive and exuberant celebration of nature and the simple pleasures it affords.....how it fills the heart with pleasure free for the taking
an age old matchless experience, vividly fills the canvas
beautiful composition Ahmad bhai....really liked and enjoyed
Not self but God and others
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26th August 2014, 08:02 PM
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an effusive and exuberant celebration of nature and the simple pleasures it affords.....how it fills the heart with pleasure free for the taking
an age old matchless experience, vividly fills the canvas
beautiful composition Ahmad bhai....really liked and enjoyed
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Aadaab Doctor Saahab!!
Sorry for the delay in expressing my gratitude... am truly humbled by your kind words.... to hear such generous words from a master like you is truly a humbling experience!! Thanks a million Sir..... much obliged!! 
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27th August 2014, 01:08 PM
Ahmad bhai ,
Where on the earth do u disappear ..
Maybe your whispers I cant hear,
But your memories do bring tears
just think I also exist on this forum my dear.
S.S
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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4th September 2014, 12:05 AM
Awesome Ahmad Bhai,
It's a dream which most people wish of..
U have penned it down awesomely..
Reading it was a pleasure as it brought forward pictures to thoughts of my mind..
It is a happy feeling reading your poetry..
Keep writing..
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
The Demon Prince...
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4th September 2014, 04:05 PM
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Mesmerising.....i can actually relate to your dream ahmadji what an extremely beautiful expression and composition.....do keep writing such poems u r very good at it 
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Aadaab Sis,
I am humbled by your kind words of appreciation. Thank You so much for your visit as well as your encouragement Sis!!  Just penned what was yearning for after at times feeling suffocated by life in dense city with all the usual strife and ills etc...
Thanks once again Sis! 
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4th September 2014, 04:12 PM
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Ahmad bhai ,
Where on the earth do u disappear ..
Maybe your whispers I cant hear,
But your memories do bring tears
just think I also exist on this forum my dear.
S.S
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Aadaab Sanjay Sahab,
First of all please accept my sincere apologies for the delay in replying. I thank you for your kind and deeply affectionate praise. Sir, you don just exist on this earth you "Thrive" in our hearts here! Sorry for disappearing Sir, dar asal was overseas visiting my family and wasn't free for a moment would be an understatement....
Thank You once again for your kind affection Sir.
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4th September 2014, 04:17 PM
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Awesome Ahmad Bhai,
It's a dream which most people wish of..
U have penned it down awesomely..
Reading it was a pleasure as it brought forward pictures to thoughts of my mind..
It is a happy feeling reading your poetry..
Keep writing..
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Aadaab Prince Bhaee,
I thank You for your kind and generous appreciation. Its more than a reward for me to learn that my humble words could help feel someone happy. Thank You so much bhaee once again! 
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