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Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya........... - 22nd July 2004, 03:24 AM

hi friends i wrote this song on someone's feelings... just like to share... i don't know if it's appropriate wording or not.. would like to know ur suggestions..... would u help me in this......


{Girl}

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Yeh Dil Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya.



{Girl}

Kab Yeh Dil Usse Chahne Laga,

Kab Woh Dil Main Bas Jane Laga,

Kuch Pata Na Chala,

Bas Dil Yeh Kho Gaya,

Us Hasti-Roti Duniya Main,

Dil Mera Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Yeh Dil Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya.



{Boy}

Dekha Jo Pehli Dafa,

Cha Gaya Ek Nasha,

Kya Hua Kuch Na Khabar,

Bas Dip Pe Hua Asar,

Yaadon Main Din-Raat Dil Yeh Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya.

Sapno Main Jab Dekha To,

Dil Ne Yeh Kaha,

Tumhi To Ho Meri Jaan,

Tumhi To Ho Mera Pyar,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Cha Gaya Ek Nasha, Deewana Main Ho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Yeh Dil Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya.

{Girl}

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Yeh Dil Kho Gaya,

Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Mujhe Ishq Ho Gaya.

{Both}

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Mil Gayi Yeh Nazar,

Ho Gaya Yeh Asar,

Yeh Dil Kho Gaya,

Hume Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Haan Ishq Ho Gaya,

Ishq Ho Gaya, Hume Ishq Ho Gaya,

Hume Ishq Ho Gaya...................



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Accha likha hay Aapne - 22nd July 2004, 01:13 PM

Namaskar Punnu Ji

Aapne Acha likha hay.Bahut hi acchey koshish hay.Kaash main Aapka yeh geet sun pati.Umeed rahegi kabhi aap se aapka geet sunaingey.

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23rd July 2004, 05:18 AM

Namaste Sukanya JI

Thanks a lot gana to likh loya par gana hamare bas ki baat nahin hai… haha…. Par ek kaam ho sakta hai agar app bura na mane to app hi yeh song suna dijiye… bataye sunaege…. acha ji ab chalti hoon… class ka time ho raha hai…..
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23rd July 2004, 06:42 PM

hi punnu

well bahut hi badhiya likha hai

this time i called u punnu
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hi punnu - 25th July 2004, 12:57 PM

Hi Punnu

I think now it's fine.No Ji....Aur haan tumne poocha tha kya main is gane ko dhun de saktey hoon kya..............Kyon nahi..............Bas thoda sa aur nikharna padega Aapkey geet ko Dhun aur Shabdon kay mael ko paney kay liye.It's very simple to give dhun to any song even u can try.Just Listen to ur heart and give it a swar Fir dekhiyega Shabdon aur Taal ka Sangam.

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29th July 2004, 12:35 PM

hi! how r u/ and really sorry for late reply.. shayri.com was not working for me and today i got 15 mails from shayri.com i was surprise haha.... don't know kya hua tha....... to hpir app nikhar dijiye..... really kar sakte hain will try par abhi to mujhe bahut kam akrna hai... i mean friendship day is near so have to prepare surprise for my 2 sweet darlings... have to go... bye
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