To the one who wanted an answer, I have a question

shadow

To the one who wanted an answer, I have a question

As I cycle down the hill, my thoughts stop
Need to control the speed induce fear and I stumble
I wonder it is the same with my thoughts
When I hold on to none, they form an avalanche
fear grips I stagger and stammer
I wonder isn't there an need to control

When I exhibit the control, I start to act
Act of life makes me forget the facts
I used to paint the picture to the world
Now I live in the picture feel its real
Isnt this an Irony which i should fear

As the illusions grip, I search for help
There along the horizons a glimmer is seen
I race to grab, thoughts arise but trust is gone
I feel the horizon is filled with light,
search of life is complete and thinking stop.

As the days pass, nights melt
I rejoice in the new world,
Everything is new, as if i were born again
Objects are same but meanings new,
For the vision is new and inhibitions gone,

As the euphoria persists the shine of light blinds,
Wherever I turn the light is seen,
I feel now the light is mine and spread the hands
I feel the warmth and start to fly,
Feelings flow and the thoughts arise

As I enjoy, farther I fly
The want to have it forever is my aim
I try to grasp and nothing is held
I think it escaped and try again,
this repeats for quite a time.

A question arise,
Is it there or is it lost?
I try to see but the light alone shines
I wonder why is that i am blind.
To have it I need to see it right?

I start to look for an shade in the light,
I search for the shadow of mine,
As the panic grips, pain sets in
Angels sing, shade is seen
And the shadow world sets in.

Senses regain, I think I dreamed
Dont you see it is the thoughts again
Though my heart might be right,
I dont see anything right.

I wonder now,
was it a thought,
was it an illusion,
whatsoever I set out again,
in the search of "shade in the shadow world".

Now I have a question,
tell with nothing thought,
Did you really listen to your heart?

jasleen · 28th January 2005, 11:23 AM

hi shadow,
.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............................................all the bst for future too.

shadow · 28th January 2005, 11:30 AM

Jasleen thanks
But i do not understand the script "........." please explain

jasleen · 28th January 2005, 11:32 AM

hi dont knw myself. i read but dont knw wats there in it, just came to say tht keep writing n all the best for future too.

Rohin · 29th January 2005, 04:33 AM

Hi Shadow,

Too good buddy....

Your expressions I must say are really very different from many...
Its good buddy... But sometimes forr readers like me give a fe lines about how this thought of urs started ....LOL I guess thats what your poetry is about... But its a really nice one

Thanks
Rohin

Shimul · **Nice one* -** 29th January 2005, 04:43 AM

Please Don't mind me saying this that: Do Listen to Your Heart

Ek Sher yaad aaya tha lekin rehne deti houn...You won't like it...may be**Dilse Daad kuboul kijiyega...**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......

shadow · 29th January 2005, 10:52 AM

Dost, thanks for the complements, waise jo normal nahi to log unhe abnormal bolte hain, aapne tho usse bi achha tarike se delicate one asked the question and who I think is special....
When i started cycling to got to office, down the slope of the hill the thoughts framed.....
I wanted to answer "why we hear to our heart" as you know, any answer leads to a question, Logic kills itself.

Quote:

Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Shadow,

Too good buddy....

Your expressions I must say are really very different from many...
Its good buddy... But sometimes forr readers like me give a fe lines about how this thought of urs started ....LOL I guess thats what your poetry is about... But its a really nice one

Thanks
Rohin

shadow · **Re: Nice one* -** 29th January 2005, 11:24 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Shimul
Please Don't mind me saying this that: Do Listen to Your Heart Ek Sher yaad aaya tha lekin rehne deti houn...You won't like it...may be**Dilse Daad kuboul kijiyega...**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......

Shimul ji,
You got confused na, it was a question for you. Thanks you would listen to heart so please post what you wanted to convey. I love to hear to your views and know from your posts you are master in sharing appropriate songs/Ghazals. Please feel free to say anything nothing will be taken in wrong sense.