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Aate hain jab bhi saamne Vo, -
3rd June 2003, 11:08 PM
Aate hain jab bhi saamne Vo, kuch kaha nahi jata, chup bhi raha nahi jata.. bekrari ka kaisa aalam cha jata hai.. ik surur sa is dil pe cha jata hai.. Aate hain jab bhi saamne Vo, Dil mein dhadkan nahi hoti, Saanse khamosh dabi hoti.. Deewanepan ki had se guzar jaate hain.. phir bhi lab apne hila nahi paate hain.. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th August 2004, 02:54 AM
Vah vah!!!
pyar ka ehsaas.. phir se saamne aa gaya... Good yaar priya.. tu itna bura bhi nahi likhti..  "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th August 2004, 10:14 AM
Jab saamne tum aa jaate ho na jaane kya ho jaata..
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai.. Na jaane kya ho jaata hai.............  Sach priya.. tum itna bhi bura nahi likhti!  Kidding.... Aksar jab hum apne kuchh ouraane kalaam paRte hain to wo kuchh ajnabi se lagte hain.. jaise ye humne nahi, kisi aur ne likha ho.. phir apna kal yaad aata hai.. wo guzre pal yaad aate hain.. wo beete ehsaas.. wo bhoole jazbaat.. aur jaise kisi ne apne wajood ke us pehlu se mila diya ho jisse hum nawaqif ho gaye the.. Isi liye hum apne puraane kalaam nahi paRte!!  Lekin tumhaara ye kalaam paR kar bohat achha laga.. baRa pyaara sa.. saada sa.. masoom sa hai ye.. unse rubaru hone par dil me machi halchal baRi khoobi se pesh ki hai.. bohat khoob!  |
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7th August 2004, 12:20 PM
hii priya....
Gr8 achcha likha hain aapne.... Hum yun hi likhte rahe teri yaad main... ki kabhi to dil ki dil ko dastak to hogi... do shabd pyaar ke chahte the badle main.... par shayad kismat ko ye manjoor na hogi.. Khud hi padte hain tanhai main... apni hi nazmee... khush hota hain dil...aati hain labo pe hasi.. do pal ke liye hi sahi...lekin tujhse bichadne ki taqleef kam to hogi..... :-> likhte rahiye ;-> |
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7th August 2004, 01:16 PM
hi
bahut sahi likha hai aapne kisi ke aa jane se aisa kya ho jaata hai ki sab kuch chalte hue bhi ruk jaata hai sonal |
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12th August 2004, 08:39 PM
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Sach kaha aapne apne ki puraane kalaamon ko dekh ke kuch ajnabi se lagte hain... Aapko yeh pasand aaya jaan kar bahut khushi hui... Sada muskuraate rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th August 2004, 08:40 PM
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Kya likha hai aapne.... vaah!!! bahut khoob! Sach hai do pal ke liye hi sahi.. lekin judaai ka gam kam to zaroor hota hai us pal... Bahut khoob... aap yahan aaye.. mujhe behad khushi hui.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th August 2004, 08:41 PM
Shukriya Sonal ji,
Aapne samay nikaal ke reply kiya, bahut khushi hui.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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13th August 2004, 12:11 AM
Hi
Vallah kya baat hai,do dilo ka haal apne kya khobb baya kiya hai,jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai. Aate hain jab bhi saamne Vo, kuch kaha nahi jata, chup bhi raha nahi jata.. bekrari ka kaisa aalam cha jata hai.. ik surur sa is dil pe cha jata hai.. Aate hain jab bhi saamne Vo, Dil mein dhadkan nahi hoti, Saanse khamosh dabi hoti.. Deewanepan ki had se guzar jaate hain.. phir bhi lab apne hila nahi paate hain.. sach me yehi haal hota hai jab woh saamne aa jate hai RAAT HUIE JAB SHAAM KE BAAD, TERI YAAD AIE HAR BAAT KE BAAD, HUMNE KHAMOSH REH KAR B DEKHA, TERI AWAAJ AAIYE HAR SAANS KE BAAD!! Tanhaii hi Zindagi hai |
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13th August 2004, 01:14 AM
Javid ji,
Aapne jo sher yahan likha, it's one of my fav's!!! Ji haan do dilon ka haal kuch aisa hi hota hai.. Aapko mera likha pasand aaya, jaan kar bahut khushi hui.. Shukriya dost! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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