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jog ka pyaala... - 26th July 2010, 12:32 PM

tune- chand si mehbooba ho meri...

main hoon diya tum mere ho jyoti,
tum bin prabhu ji jeena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?

main kaam ka kaajal lagaay liya,
main krodh kashaay mein roz jiya.
par teri kripaa ki kalaayi ne,
mujh keechad ko bhi kamal hai kiya.
tod diya jab duniya se naata,
ichchha suyi se seena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?

ab takhta aur tuchcha yeh taaj tajo,
shringaari shareer se saaj tajo.
prabhu praan ke paas pal pal ho,
vikaar vishay vish aaj tajo...
tajke jagat hai bhakti ko paya,
bin bhakti ab keena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?


gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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26th July 2010, 12:59 PM

main hoon diya tum mere ho jyoti,
tum bin prabhu ji jeena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?

vaah ji vaah kya pyaala pilaya hai aapne, aise hi madmast karte rahie, gyan ki ganga bahate rahie, yun hi bazam me aate rahie.
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26th July 2010, 04:26 PM

bahot shukriya parveen komal ji, meri kavita padhne ke liye....


gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
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2nd August 2010, 12:31 PM

very good keep it up. m agree with parveen komal

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Wah wah wah Janab Sushiljain Saheb! Aik achchhi poetry se nawaaza aapne. Daad qubul kijiye.

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tune- chand si mehbooba ho meri...

main hoon diya tum mere ho jyoti,
tum bin prabhu ji jeena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?

main kaam ka kaajal lagaay liya,
main krodh kashaay mein roz jiya.
par teri kripaa ki kalaayi ne,
mujh keechad ko bhi kamal hai kiya.
tod diya jab duniya se naata,
ichchha suyi se seena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?

ab takhta aur tuchcha yeh taaj tajo,
shringaari shareer se saaj tajo.
prabhu praan ke paas pal pal ho,
vikaar vishay vish aaj tajo...
tajke jagat hai bhakti ko paya,
bin bhakti ab keena kya?
jo pee liya hai jog ka pyaala,
bhog ka pyaala peena kya?
   
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3rd August 2010, 07:20 PM

bahot bahot dhanyawaad Waquif Ansari bhai


gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
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