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~Sath jo chale Ishq-e-Safar pai 'pari'
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~Ishq-e-safar mai jab hu sath jo dard ka saya kaisa

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~Ishq-e-safar mai jab hu sath jo dard ka saya kaisa
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khuda ki itni badi kaynaat mein maine
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khuda ki itni badi kaynaat mein maine
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Jo mil jaanti.n khushiya.n sabko maangne se,
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suna hai mil jata hai sab kuch agar maango dil se
kisi din maang kar dekhenge tumko khuda se
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Dene wale ne her qadam per apni rehmat bersaai,
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Dene wale ne her qadam per apni rehmat bersaai,
per maangne walo ka hi DAAMAN chhota tha.............allama IQBAAL sahab
yuh toh milta hai kai kuch apni kismat se
kyu tolte ho tum khuda ki rehmaten kimat se
hasil kar loge tum bahot kuch shahorat se
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hasil kar loge tum bahot kuch shahorat se
par dost pyar na kharid sakonge daulat se
ek dam true...

dosti khuda ki wo nemat hai jo anmol hai
lakh ho daulat tere pass per har kisi ko hasil nahi


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ek dam true...

dosti khuda ki wo nemat hai jo anmol hai
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doston ki dastaan jab waqt sunata hai
doston sang bitaya waqt yaad aata hai
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yuh toh milta hai kai kuch apni kismat se

kyu tolte ho tum khuda ki rehmaten kimat se
hasil kar loge tum bahot kuch shahorat se

par dost pyar na kharid sakonge daulat se


khuda hai mera DOST aur usi ki di hui zindagi hai,
Mera jeena,mera mera,her SAANS uski bandagi hai,

woh aur honge jo pyaar ko farokhtt kerte hai,
mein hu ishq uska woh meri tishnagi hai................................kkkhantahir


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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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khuda hai mera DOST aur usi ki di hui zindagi hai,
Mera jeena,mera mera,her SAANS uski bandagi hai,

woh aur honge jo pyaar ko farokhtt kerte hai,
mein hu ishq uska woh meri tishnagi hai................................kkkhantahir

dost toh kai mil jate hai tanha zindagi mein
mang kar dekhenge ik rafeeb bandagi mein


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dost toh kai mil jate hai tanha zindagi mein


mang kar dekhenge ik rafeeb bandagi mein

Tu badalta hai to yu be sabab meri ankhain
mere hathon ki lakeeron se ulajh jati hain ....


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Tu meri dost mera armaan hai, shayad apni ehmiyat se anjaan hai,
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Tu meri dost mera armaan hai, shayad apni ehmiyat se anjaan hai,
mujhse kabhi rooth kar mat jana, kyunki meri duniya tere bina veeran hai..... !


Zindagi se bas yahi gilla hai mujhe ae dost
tu bohaat dair se mila hai mujhe ae dost....

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RAFEEB word nahi hota RAQEEB hota hai.

koi dost hai na raqeeb hai,
tera shaher kitna ajeeb hai,

yaha kiska chehra padha karu,
yaha sabke sir pe saleeb hai...........nm


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koi dost hai na raqeeb hai,
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yaha kiska chehra padha karu,
yaha sabke sir pe saleeb hai...........nm


"mere hanste chehre par na jana dost,
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"mere hanste chehre par na jana dost,
pad kar dekhoge to dard ki ek kitaab hoon maiN"

-nm
DEKHNE wale meri muskurahat pe na ja ,
yeh toh ek parda hai gham e dil chhipane k liye..nm


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DEKHNE wale meri muskurahat pe na ja ,
yeh toh ek parda hai gham e dil chhipane k liye..nm


parde parde me.n aataab achchhe nahii.n
aise a.ndaaz-e-hijaab achchhe nahii.n

-Daag Dehlvi


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Thanks for the correction Tahir Sir


mein itna bada ohda leker nahi jee sakta mein abhie chhota hu mujhe chhota hi rehne di jiye.
bade hone per jimme daari aa jaati hai.

waise naarazgi ki wajah samajh mein nahi aayi.


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mein itna bada ohda leker nahi jee sakta mein abhie chhota hu mujhe chhota hi rehne di jiye.
bade hone per jimme daari aa jaati hai.

waise naarazgi ki wajah samajh mein nahi aayi.
naarazgi nahi ji............ur interpretation is not right
aap cool hai thnx 4 correction without it meaning wouldnt be clear in the sher
hum duffer hai typing error karte hai
pliz dont take it wrongly
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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi,
humne toh apno mein bhi RAQEEB paaye hai..........kkkhantahir


Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB
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ki door jab waadion mein baadal ke beech hum mila karte they,
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roz ki tarha aaj bhi taare
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chale aao pass mere, kahin hum phir na juda ho jaayein!!


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roz ki tarha aaj bhi taare
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chale aao pass mere, kahin hum phir na juda ho jaayein!!
dur hai hum par juda toh nahi
chup hai hum par khafa toh nahi
na mil pana humari majboori sahi
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Ye Sab Kuch Maan Lete Hai,
Magar Ek Aarzu Dilki,
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Chalo Hum Maan Lete Hai,
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Na Apno Ke Fasaano Se,
Ye Sab Kuch Maan Lete Hai,
Magar Ek Aarzu Dilki,
Tumhe Dilse Batate Hai,
Jo waqt mile to chale ana,
ghadi do ghadi ke liye,

Yahi soch kar chalo,
aaj apne dil ko araam detin hain........!
dil ko zara aaram dena
aaj nahi tum mera naam lena
yaad jo ayegi meri toh
bechain dil ko thaam lena
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mehsus kar ke dekh main tere paas hun
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