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Ek safar "Qateel Shifai" ji ke saath -
1st July 2015, 02:23 PM
"Qateel Shifai"
Name: Muhammad Aurangzeb or Qateel Shifai was a Pakistani Urdu poet.
Born: December 24, 1919, Haripur District, Pakistan
Died: July 11, 2001, Lahore, Pakistan
Children: Musarat Butt, Naveed Qateel, Samina Khurshid, Tanveer Qateel, Pervaiz Qateel
Qateel Shifai was born on 24th December, 1919. His actual name is Aurangzeb Khan. Qateel Shifai is his nom de plume, the pen-name under which he is known in the world of Urdu poetry. "Qateel" is his "takhallus" and "Shifai" is in honour of his ustaad Hakim Mohammed 'Shifa' whom he considered his mentor.
His father's death at an early age, forced Qateel to quit his education and start his own sporting goods shop. Success eluded him and he moved to Rawalpindi, where he worked at a transport company for a monthly salary of Rs.60. Finally in 1946, Nazir Ahmed called him to Lahore and made him the assistant editor of the monthly 'Adab-e-Latif'.
Qayeel Shifai's first ghazal was printed in the Lahore weekly 'Star', whose editor was Qamar Jalalabadi. In January 1947, a Lahore based film producer asked Qateel to pen the songs for his forthcoming film. His first film as a lyricist was "Teri Yaad". Since then he has won numerous awards as a lyricist. He has had quite a few of his poem collections published, one of which being "Mutriba" which was awarded the highest literature award in Pakistan.
Qateel's primary contribution to Urdu poetry has been to raise the standards of ghazals in films. Though this work was started by Tanvir Alvi and Sahir Ludhianvi,it has been brought to its natural conclusion by Qateel Shifai. His work brought a certain standard to ghazals in films and gave it a certain respectability. His work also brought Urdu poetry closer to the masses by using simple words, quite often words taken from Hindi.
Qateel Shifai has also been known for his collaborations with Jagjit and Chitra Singh on numerous ghazal albums.
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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a.nga.Daaii par a.nga.Daaii letii hai raat judaaii kii -
1st July 2015, 02:32 PM
dosto lijiye Qateel Shifai ji ki aik se bad kar aik khoobsurat gazal aap sabki nazar karti hu...umeed hai aap sabko yeh gazaleN pasand aayeNgi.
a.nga.Daaii par a.nga.Daaii letii hai raat judaaii kii
a.nga.Daaii par a.nga.Daaii letii hai raat judaaii kii
tum kyaa samajho tum kyaa jaano baat merii tanahaaii kii
kaun siyaahii ghol rahaa thaa vaqt ke bahate dariyaa me.n
mai.n ne aa.Nkh jhukii dekhii hai aaj kisii harajaaii kii
vasl kii raat na jaane kyuu.N israar thaa unako jaane par
vaqt se pahale Duub gae taaro.n ne ba.Dii daanaaii kii
u.Date u.Date aas kaa paa.Nchhii duur ufaq me.n Duub gayaa
rote rote baiTh gaii aavaaz kisii saudaaii kii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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1st July 2015, 02:57 PM
Qateel Shifai Sahab ki ek ghazal pesh hai mujhe bahut achhi lagi asha hai aapko bhi pasand aayegi.
Siskian Leti Howi Ghamgeen Hawaon, Chup Raho
So Rahain Hain Dard, In Ko Mat Jagao, Chup Raho
Raat Ka Pathar Na Pighlay Ga Shuaaon Ke Bagair
Subaah Honay Tak Na Bolo Ham Nawao, Chup Raho
Band Hain Sab Mai Kaday, Saaqi Banay Hain Mohtasib
Ay Garajti Goonjti Kaali Ghataaon,Chup Raho
Tum Ko Hai Maaloom Aakhir Kon Sa Mausam Hai Ye
Fasl-e-Gul Aanay Talak Ay Khushnawao, Chup Raho
Soch Ki Deewaar Se Lag Kar Hain Gham Baithay Howay
Dil Mein Bhi Naghma Na Koi Gungunao, Chup Raho
Chhat Gaye Haalaat Ke Baadal Tou Dekha Jaaye Ga
Waqt Se Phele Andhairay Mein Na Jao, Chup Raho
Kiun Shareek-e-Gham Banaatay Ho Kisi Ko Ay “Qateel” ?
Apni Sooli Apne Kaandhay Per Uthaao, Chup Raho
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1st July 2015, 03:03 PM
wahhhhhhhhh Rajinder ji...aapne to aisi gazal share ki hai ki dil ko qaraar aa gya...shukriya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Tum poochho aur main na bataaun aise toh haalaat nahin -
1st July 2015, 03:26 PM
Tum poochho aur main na bataaun aise toh haalaat nahin
Tum poochho aur main na bataaun aise toh haalaat nahin
ek zara sa dil toota hai aur toh koi baat nahin.
Kis ko khabar thi saanwale baadal bin barse udd jaate hain,
saawan aaya lekin apni qismat mein barsaat nahin.
Toot gaya jab dil toh phir ye saans ka naghma kya ma.ani,
goonj rahi hai kyon shehnaai jab koi baaraat nahin.
Ghum ke andhiyaare mein tujh ko apna saathi kyon samjhun,
tu phir tu hai mera toh saaya bhi mere saath nahin.
Maana jeevan mein aurat ek baar mohabbat karti hai,
lekin mujh ko ye toh bata de kya tu aurat zaat nahin?
Khatm hua mera fasaana ab ye aansoo ponchh bhi lo,
jis mein koi taara chamke aaj ki raat woh raat nahin.
Mere ghumgeen hone par ahbaab hain yun hairaan ‘qateel
jaise main patthar hun mere seene mein jazbaat nahin. !!
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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1st July 2015, 03:28 PM
dono hi ghazle behad sundar hain maza aa gaya padhkar nice sharing sunita jee
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Pyas Wo Dil Ki Bujhane Kabhi Aya Bhi Nahin -
1st July 2015, 03:31 PM
Pyas Wo Dil Ki Bujhane Kabhi Aya Bhi Nahin
Kaisa Badal Hai Jiska Koi Saya Bhi Nahin
Berukhi Is Se Bari Aur Bhala Kya Hogi
Ek Muddat Se Hamein Us Ne Sataya Bhi Nahin
Roz Ata Hai Dar-E-Dil Pe Wo Dastak Dene
Aj Tak Hamne Jise Pas Bulaya Bhi Nahin
Sun Liya Kaise Khuda Jane Zamane Bhar Ne
Wo Fasana Jo Kabhi Hamne Sunaya Bhi Nahin
Tum To Shayar Ho 'Qateel' Aur Wo Ik Am Sa Shakhs
Us Ne Chaha Bhi Tujhe Aur Jataya Bhi Nahin
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1st July 2015, 03:42 PM
Wah Wah Sunita Di aur Rajinder ji kya khoobsurat silsilaa shuru kiya hai aapne....mazaa aa gaya, Qateel ji ki ek se ek badhkar ghazal ho rahi hai mehfil mein, yeh mehfil yunhi kargar rahe..
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Waaah...bahut khooob di...bahut achcha silsila shuru hai....aur kya khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hain aapne aur rajendar ji ne..mahfil me..yakeenan ye safar aur bhi rangeen hone wala hai.........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Mil kar juda hue toh na soya karenge hum, -
1st July 2015, 04:01 PM
Mil kar juda hue toh na soya karenge hum
Mil kar juda hue toh na soya karenge hum,
ek doosre ki yaad mein roya karenge hum.
Aansoo chalak chalak ke sataayenge raat bhar,
moti palak palak mein piroyaa karenge hum.
Jab dooriyon ki aag dilon ko jalaayegi
jismon ko chaandni mein bhigoya karenge hum.
Been kar har ek bazm ka mauzu-e-guftugoo,
sheron mein tere ghum ko samoya karenge hum.
Mazbooriyon ke zehar se kar lenge khudkushi,
ye buzdili ka jurm bhi goya karenge hum.
Dil jal raha hai zard shajar dekh dekh kar,
ab chaahton ke beej na boya karenge hum.
Gar de gaya daghaa humen toofaan bhi ‘qateel
saahil pe kashtiyon ko duboya karenge hum. !!
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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1st July 2015, 05:04 PM
Lijiye ek ghazal yaad aa rahi hai Qateel ji ki jo mehfil ke naam kar raha hoon
Apne hathon ki lakeeron mein basa le mujhko
Main hu tera to naseeb apna bana le mujhko
Mujhse tu puchh ne aaya hai wafa ke mani
Ye teri saada-dili maar na dale mujh ko
Khud ko mai baant na dalun kahin daman-daman
Kar diya tune agar mere hawaale mujhko
Waada fir waada hai mai zehar bhi pee jau qateel
Shart ye hai koi baahon me sambhaale mujhko
Apne hathon ki lakeeron mein basa le mujhko.
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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1st July 2015, 11:53 PM
Tumhaari Anjuman Se Uth Ke Deewaane Kahaan Jaate
Jo Waabasta Hue Tum Se Wo Afsaane Kahaan Jaate
Nikal Kar Dair-O-Kaaba Se Agar Milta N Maikhaana
To Thukraaye Hue Insaan Khuda Jaane Kahaan Jaate
Tumhaar Berukhi Ne Laaj Rakh Lee Baadah Khaane Ki
Tum Aankon Se Pila Dete To Paimaane Kahaan Jaate
Chalo Achha Hua Kaam AA Gai Deewaangi Apni
Varna Ham Zamaane Bhar Ko Samjhaane Kahaan Jaate
"Qateel" Apna Muqaddar Gam Se Begaana Agar Hota
To Apne Aur Paraaye Ham Se Pahchaane Kahaan Jaate
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2nd July 2015, 10:48 AM
waahhhh kyaa nayaab silsilaa shuru huaa hai is baar ....
Qateel ke mureed to ham bachpan se rahe hain... ummeed karte hain behad nazdeek se unhe jaanne ke mauqe hame milenge...... is pahal se
behad khoob ghazal pesh ki hain aapne sunita dee aur Rajinder saahab... tashreef laate rahiyega....
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Tumhaari Anjuman Se Uth Ke Deewaane Kahaan Jaate
Jo Waabasta Hue Tum Se Wo Afsaane Kahaan Jaate
Nikal Kar Dair-O-Kaaba Se Agar Milta N Maikhaana
To Thukraaye Hue Insaan Khuda Jaane Kahaan Jaate
Tumhaar Berukhi Ne Laaj Rakh Lee Baadah Khaane Ki
Tum Aankon Se Pila Dete To Paimaane Kahaan Jaate
Chalo Achha Hua Kaam AA Gai Deewaangi Apni
Varna Ham Zamaane Bhar Ko Samjhaane Kahaan Jaate
"Qateel" Apna Muqaddar Gam Se Begaana Agar Hota
To Apne Aur Paraaye Ham Se Pahchaane Kahaan Jaate
Waaaahhh! Waaah! Khoobsoorat sharing.....bahut shukriya rahendra ji..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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2nd July 2015, 11:02 AM
[QUOTE=mast;480769]Lijiye ek ghazal yaad aa rahi hai Qateel ji ki jo mehfil ke naam kar raha hoon
[CENTER][INDENT]Apne hathon ki lakeeron mein basa le mujhko
Main hu tera to naseeb apna bana le mujhko
Mujhse tu puchh ne aaya hai wafa ke mani
Ye teri saada-dili maar na dale mujh ko
Khud ko mai baant na dalun kahin daman-daman
Kar diya tune agar mere hawaale mujhko
Waada fir waada hai mai zehar bhi pee jau qateel
Shart ye hai koi baahon me sambhaale mujhko
[FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=Purple]
Apne hathon ki lakeeron mein basa
Bahut umda sharing mast ji.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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apane hoTho.n par sajaanaa chaahataa huu.N -
2nd July 2015, 11:27 AM
apane hoTho.n par sajaanaa chaahataa huu.N
apane hoTho.n par sajaanaa chaahataa huu.N
aa tujhe mai.n gunagunaanaa chaahataa huu.N
koii aa.Nsuu tere daaman par giraakar
buu.Nd ko motii banaanaa chaahataa huu.N
thak gayaa mai.n karate-karate yaad tujhako
ab tujhe mai.n yaad aanaa chaahataa huu.N
chhaa rahaa hai saarii bastii me.n a.Ndheraa
raushanii ho ghar jalaanaa chaahataa huu.N
aaKharii hichakii tere zaano.n pe aaye
maut bhi mai.n shaayaraanaa chaahataa huu.N
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bechain bahaaro.n me.n kyaa-kyaa hai jaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai -
2nd July 2015, 11:29 AM
bechain bahaaro.n me.n kyaa-kyaa hai jaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
bechain bahaaro.n me.n kyaa-kyaa hai jaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
jo phuul mahakataa hai usase tuufaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
kal raat dikhaa ke Khvaab-e-tarab so sej ko suunaa chho.D gayaa
har silavaT se phir aaj usii mehamaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
talkiin-e-ibaadat kii hai mujhe yuu.N terii muqaddas aa.Nkho.n ne
ma.ndir ke dariicho.n se jaise lobaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
kuchh aur bhii saa.Nse.n lene par majabuur-saa mai.n ho jaataa huu.N
jab itane ba.De ja.ngal me.n kisii insaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
kuchh tuu hii mujhe ab samajhaa de ai kufr duhaa_ii hai terii
kyuu.N sheKh ke daaman se mujhako imaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
Darataa huu.N kahii.n is aalam me.n jiine se na munakir ho jaauu.N
ahabaab kii baato.n se mujhako ehasaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
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charaaG dil ke jalaao ki iid ka din hai -
2nd July 2015, 11:38 AM
EID ka mahina hai to socha kyu na EID par likhi gazal share ki jaaye
charaaG dil ke jalaao ki iid ka din hai
charaaG dil ke jalaao ki iid ka din hai
taraane jhuum ke gaao ki iid kaa din hai
Gamo.n ko dil se bhulaao ki iid kaa din hai
Khushii se bazm sajaao ki iid kaa din hai
huzuur us kii karo ab salaamtii kii duaa
sar-e-namaaz jhukaao ki iid kaa din hai
sabhii muraad ho puuriihar ek savaalii kii
duaa ko haath uThaao ki iid kaa din hai
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd July 2015, 11:52 AM
Chaliye collection meiN hum bhi izafa kar dete hain... pesh hai ik aur ghazal...
ai dost! tiri aankh jo nam hai to mujhe kya,
main khuub haNsunga tujhe gham hai to mujhe kya...
kya maine kaha tha ki zamane se bhala kar,
ab tu bhisazavar-e-sitam hai to mujhe kya...
haaN le le qasam gar mujhe qatra bhi mila ho,
tu shakl-e-arbab-e-karam hai to mujhe kya...
jis dar se nadamat ke siva kuch nahiN milta,
us dar pe tira sar bhi jo kham hai to mujhe kya...
maine to pukara hai mohabbat ke ufaq se,
raste me tire sang-e-haram hai to mujhe kya...
bhula to na hoga tujhe suqrat ka anjam,
haathoN meN tire saghar-e-sam hai to mujhe kya...
patthar na padeN gar sar-e-bazar to kahna,
tu mo'tarif-e-husn-e-sanam hai to mujhe kya...
main sarmad 0 mansur bana huuN tiri khatir,
ye bhi tiri ummid se kam hai to mujhe kya...
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Chaliye collection meiN hum bhi izafa kar dete hain... pesh hai ik aur ghazal...
ai dost! tiri aankh jo nam hai to mujhe kya,
main khuub haNsunga tujhe gham hai to mujhe kya...
kya maine kaha tha ki zamane se bhala kar,
ab tu bhisazavar-e-sitam hai to mujhe kya...
haaN le le qasam gar mujhe qatra bhi mila ho,
tu shakl-e-arbab-e-karam hai to mujhe kya...
jis dar se nadamat ke siva kuch nahiN milta,
us dar pe tira sar bhi jo kham hai to mujhe kya...
maine to pukara hai mohabbat ke ufaq se,
raste me tire sang-e-haram hai to mujhe kya...
bhula to na hoga tujhe suqrat ka anjam,
haathoN meN tire saghar-e-sam hai to mujhe kya...
patthar na padeN gar sar-e-bazar to kahna,
tu mo'tarif-e-husn-e-sanam hai to mujhe kya...
main sarmad 0 mansur bana huuN tiri khatir,
ye bhi tiri ummid se kam hai to mujhe kya...
kya khoob gazal share ki hai aapne Lucky...accha lga aapko yahan dekh kar...aate rahiyega.
dii
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Nigaahon mein khumaar aata hua mehsoos hota hai -
2nd July 2015, 12:48 PM
Qateel jee ki collection me ek aur izaafa.............
Nigaahon mein khumaar aata hua mehsoos hota hai,
tasawwur jaam chhalakaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Khiraam-e-naaz aur un ka khiraam-e-naaz kya kehna,
zamana thokaren khaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Tasawwur ek zehni justujoo ka naam hai shayad,
dil un ko dhoond kar laata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Kisi ki nuqrai paazeb ki jhankaar ke sadqe,
mujhe saara jahaan gaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Qateel’ab dil ki dhadkan ban gayi hai chaap qadmon ki,
koi meri taraf aata hua mehsoos hota hai. !!
Aapka Apna
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2nd July 2015, 01:04 PM
aao koi tafrih ka saman kiya jaae,
phir se kisi vaaiz ko pareshaan kiya jaae...
be-laghzish-e-pa mast huuN un ankhoN se pi kar,
yuuN mohtasib-e-shahr ko hairaan kiya jaae...
har shai se muqaddas hai khayalat ka rishta,
kyuN maslahatoN par use qurban kiya jaae...
muflis ke badan ko bhi hai chadar ki zarurat,
ab khul ke mazaroN pe ye elaan kiya jaae...
vo shakhs jo divanoN ki izzat nahiN karta,
us shakhs ka bhi chaak gareban kiya jaaye...
pahle bhi 'qatil' aNkhoN ne khaae kai dhoke,
ab aur na binai ka nuqsan kiya jaae...
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Nigaahon mein chamak dil mein khushi mehsoos karta hun -
2nd July 2015, 01:22 PM
Nigaahon mein chamak dil mein khushi mehsoos karta hun,
ki tere bas mein apni zindagi mehsoos karta hun.
Thaka deti hain jab kaunain ki pahnaaiyaan mujh ko,
tere dar par pahunch kar taazgi mehsoos karta hun.
Ba-majboori muqaddar ke uffaaq se jhaankne waale,
teri aankhon mein sharmindagi mehsoos karta hun.
Jawaani ko sazaa-e-lazzat-e-ehsaas de dena,
main iss had par khuda ko aadmi mehsoos karta hun.
Shab-e-aakhir falak par timtima kar doobte taare ,
main apne saath tera dard bhi mehsoos karta hun.
Qateel’ ehbaab ko deta hun tere sulooq ki zehmat,
main apne dard mein jab bhi kami mehsoos karta hun. !!
Aapka Apna
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2nd July 2015, 02:44 PM
Rajinder ji aur Lucky aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne Qateel sahiib ki gazaloN se es bazm ko chamka rhe hai.
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3rd July 2015, 03:51 PM
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ISHK EK IBADAT
Nigaahon mein chamak dil mein khushi mehsoos karta hun,
ki tere bas mein apni zindagi mehsoos karta hun.
Thaka deti hain jab kaunain ki pahnaaiyaan mujh ko,
tere dar par pahunch kar taazgi mehsoos karta hun.
Ba-majboori muqaddar ke uffaaq se jhaankne waale,
teri aankhon mein sharmindagi mehsoos karta hun.
Jawaani ko sazaa-e-lazzat-e-ehsaas de dena,
main iss had par khuda ko aadmi mehsoos karta hun.
Shab-e-aakhir falak par timtima kar doobte taare ,
main apne saath tera dard bhi mehsoos karta hun.
Qateel’ ehbaab ko deta hun tere sulooq ki zehmat,
main apne dard mein jab bhi kami mehsoos karta hun. !!
tere dar par pahunch kar taazgi mahsoos karta hoon.... Waaahhhhh!! Bahut hee umda sharing shukriya rajendra ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Quote:
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Qateel jee ki collection me ek aur izaafa.............
Nigaahon mein khumaar aata hua mehsoos hota hai,
tasawwur jaam chhalakaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Khiraam-e-naaz aur un ka khiraam-e-naaz kya kehna,
zamana thokaren khaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Tasawwur ek zehni justujoo ka naam hai shayad,
dil un ko dhoond kar laata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Kisi ki nuqrai paazeb ki jhankaar ke sadqe,
mujhe saara jahaan gaata hua mehsoos hota hai.
Qateel’ab dil ki dhadkan ban gayi hai chaap qadmon ki,
koi meri taraf aata hua mehsoos hota hai. !!
Waah...bahut dilkash bahut khoob...is khoobasoorat sharing ka shukriya rajendra ji.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Lamha Bhar Apna Hawaon Ko Banaane Waale -
3rd July 2015, 04:16 PM
Lamha Bhar Apna Hawaon Ko Banaane Waale
Ab Na Aayein Ge Palat Kar Kabhi Jaane Waale
Kya Mile Gaa Tujhe Bikhre Hue Khwaabon Ke Siwa ?
Ay Rait Pe Chaand Ki Tasveer Banaane Waale
Sab Ne Pehna Tha Bade Shauq Se Kaghaz Ka Libaas
Jis Qadar Log The Baarish Men Nahaane Waale
Mar Gaye Hum Tou Ye Qutbay Pe Likha Jaaye Ga
So Gaye Aap Zamaane Ko Jagaane Waale
Dar-o-Deewaar Pe Hasrat Si Barasti Hai “Qateel”
Jaane Kis Desh Gaye Pyaar Nibhaane Waale ?
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3rd July 2015, 04:40 PM
Tere Mehndi Lage Hathon Pe Mera Nam Likha Hai
Zra Se Lafz Mn Kitna Paigam Likha Hai
Ye Teri Shan K Shayaa'n Nahin Lakn Mjbori
Teri Masti Bhari Ankhon Ko Mn Ne Jam Likha Hai
Mn Shayar Hon,Magr Agay Na Barh Paya Riwayat Se
Labon Ko Pankhrri,Zulfon Ko Mn Ne Sham Likha Hai
Muje Mout Aye Gi Jab Bhi,Tere Pehlu Mn Aye Gi
Tere Gham Ne Bohat Acha Mera Anjam Likha Hai
Meri Qismat Mn Hai Ek Din Griftar-E-Wafa Hona
Mere Chehre Pe Tere Pyar Ka Ilzam Likha Hai Qateel
Ek Khubsurt Boht Hai,Jiska Mn Pojari Hon
Mere Mazhab Ke Khaney Mn Magr Islam Likha Hai
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Milkar judaa huye to -
3rd July 2015, 08:21 PM
Bahut Umdaa mehfil chal rahi hai doston aur ek se badhkar ek ghazal rakh rahein hai aap is mehfil mein...
Main aaj apni ke bahut hi favorite ghazal rakhne jaa raha hoon mehfil mein umeed hai ki yeh sab ki jaani pehchaani hai aur kaafi baar suni hogi aapne...
milkar juda huye tho na soya karenge hum
ek doosre ke yaad mein roya karenge hum
aansoo chalak chalak ke sathaayenge raat bhar
moti palak palak mein piroyaa karenge hum
jab dooriyon ki yaad dilon ko jalaayegi
jismon ko chaandni mein bhigoya karenge hum
gar de gaya daga hamen toofan bhi 'qateel'
sahil pe kashtiyon ko dooboya karenge hum
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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dil ko Gam-e-hayaat gavaaraa hai in dino.n -
4th July 2015, 09:54 AM
dil ko Gam-e-hayaat gavaaraa hai in dino.n
dil ko Gam-e-hayaat gavaaraa hai in dino.n
pahale jo dard thaa vahii chaaraa hai in dino.n
[gavaaraa = agreeable; chaaraa = cure]
ye dil zaraa saa dil terii yaado.n me.n kho gayaa
zarre ko aa.Ndhiyo.n kaa sahaaraa hai in dino.n
har sail-e-ashk saahil-e-taskii.n hai aaj kal
dariyaa kii mauj-mauj kinaaraa hai in dino.n
[sail-e-ashk = flood of tears]
[saahil-e-taskii.n = peaceful shore]
shamo.n me.n ab nahii.n hai vo pahale sii roshanii
shaayad vo chaa.Nd anjuman_aaraa hai in dino.n
[anjuman_aaraa = adorning/enhancing the beauty of a gathering]
tum aa sako to shab ko ba.Dhaa duu.N kuchh aur bhii
apane kahe me.n subah kaa taaraa hai in dino.n
qurbaa.N ho.n jis ke husn pe sau jannate.n 'Qateel'
nazaro.n ke saamane vo nazaaraa hai in dino.n
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Marhala raat ka jab aayega -
4th July 2015, 12:26 PM
QATEEL JEE KE GULDASTE SE EK AUR PHOOL
Marhala raat ka jab aayega,
jism saaye ko taras jaayega.
Chal padi rasm jo kaj-fahmi ki,
baat kya phir koi kar paayega.
Sach se katraaye agar log yahan,
lafz mafhoom se katraayega.
Aitbaar uss ka humesha karna,
woh toh jhoothi bhi kasam khaayega.
Tu na hogi toh phir aye shaam-e-firaaq,
kaun aa kar humen behalaayega.
Hum usey yaad bahut aayenge,
jab usey bhi koi thukraayega.
Kaayenaat uss ki meri zaat mein hai,
mujh ko kho kar woh kise paayega.
Na rahe jab woh bhale din bhi ‘qateel
ye zamaana bhi guzar jaayega. !!
Aapka Apna
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duniyaa ne ham pe jab ko_ii ilzaam rakh diyaa -
4th July 2015, 03:17 PM
duniyaa ne ham pe jab ko_ii ilzaam rakh diyaa
duniyaa ne ham pe jab ko_ii ilzaam rakh diyaa
ham ne muqaabil us ke teraa naam rakh diyaa
[ilzaam = accusation; muqaabil = in front of]
ik Khaas had pe aa ga_ii jab terii beruKhii
naam us kaa ham ne gardish-e-ayyaam rakh diyaa
[Khaas = special; gardish-e-ayyaam = circle of life/time]
mai.n la.D_kha.Daa rahaa huu.N tujhe dekh-dekh kar
tuune to mere saamane ik jaam rakh diyaa
kitanaa sitam_zariif hai vo saahib-e-jamaal
us ne diyaa jalaa ke lab-e-baam rakh diyaa
[sitam_zariif = one who commits acts of tyranny with a smile]
[saahib-e-jamaal = one who is beautiful (beloved)]
[lab-e-baam = rooftop/edge of the terrace]
insaan aur dekhe baGair us ko maan le
ik Khauf kaa bashar ne Khudaa naam rakh diyaa
[Khauf = dread/fear; bashar = man]
ab jis ke jii me.n aaye vahii paaye raushanii
ham ne to dil jalaa ke sar-e-aam rakh diyaa
[sar-e-aam = in the open/in public]
kyaa masalahat_shanaas thaa vo aadamii 'Qateel'
majabuuriyo.n kaa jis ne vafaa naam rakh diyaa
[masalahat_shanaas = clever]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th July 2015, 03:18 PM
garmii-e-hasarat-e-naakaam se jal jaate hai.n
garmii-e-hasarat-e-naakaam se jal jaate hai.n
ham charaaGo.n kii tarah shaam se jal jaate hai.n
bach nikalate hai.n agar aatih-e-sayyaad se ham
sholaa-e-aatish-e-gulafaam se jal jaate hai.n
Khudanumaa_ii to nahii.n shevaa-e-arabaab-e-vafaa
jin ko jalanaa ho vo aaraaam se jal jaate hai.n
shamaa jis aag me.n jalatii hai numaa_ish ke liye
ham usii aag me.n gumanaam se jal jaate hai.n
jab bhii aataa hai meraa naam tere naam ke saath
jaane kyuu.N log mere naam se jal jaate hai.n
rabtaa baaham pe hame.n kyaa na nahe.nge dushman
aashanaa jab tere paiGaam se jal jaataa hai
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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guzare dino.n kii yaad barasatii ghaTaa lage -
4th July 2015, 03:19 PM
guzare dino.n kii yaad barasatii ghaTaa lage
guzare dino.n kii yaad barasatii ghaTaa lage
guzaruu.N jo us galii se to Tha.nDii havaa lage
mehamaan banke aaye kisii roz agar vo shaKhs
us roz bin sajaaye meraa ghar sajaa lage
mai.n is liye manaataa nahii.n vasl kii Khushii
mere raqiib kii na mujhe bad_duaa lage
vo qahat dostii kaa pa.Daa hai ki in dino.n
jo muskuraa ke baat kare aashnaa lage
tark-e-vafaa ke baad ye us kii adaa 'Qateel'
mujhako sataaye ko_ii to us ko buraa lage
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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ik-ik patthar jo.D ke mai.n ne jo diivaar banaa_ii hai -
4th July 2015, 03:20 PM
ik-ik patthar jo.D ke mai.n ne jo diivaar banaa_ii hai
ik-ik patthar jo.D ke mai.n ne jo diivaar banaa_ii hai
jhaa.Nkhuu us ke piichhe to rusvaa_ii hii rusvaa_ii hai
yo.n lagataa hai sote jaagate auro.n kaa mohataaj huu.N mai.n
aa.Nkhe.n merii apanii hai.n par un me.n niind paraa_ii hai
dekh rahe hai.n sab hairat se niile-niile paanii ko
puuchhe kaun samandar se tujh me.n kitanii gahara_ii hai
sab kahate hai.n ik jannat utarii hai merii dharatii par
mai.n dil me.n sochuu.N shaayad kam_zor merii biinaa_ii hai
baahar sahan me.n pe.Do.n par kuchh jalate bujhate juganuu the
hairat hai phir ghar ke andar kis ne aag lagaa_ii hai
aaj huaa maaluum mujhe is shahar ke chand sayaano.n se
apanii raah badalate rahanaa sabase ba.Dii daanaa_ii hai
to.D gaye paimaan-e-vafaa is daur me.n kaise kaise log
ye mat soch 'Qateel' ki bas ik yaar teraa harajaa_ii hai
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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jo bhii gu.nchaa tere hoTho.n par khilaa karataa hai -
4th July 2015, 03:22 PM
jo bhii gu.nchaa tere hoTho.n par khilaa karataa hai
jo bhii gu.nchaa tere hoTho.n par khilaa karataa hai
vo merii ta.ngii-e-daamaa.N kaa gilaa karataa hai
[gu.nchaa=flower bud; ta.ng=shortness/lack of breadth]
der se aaj meraa sar hai tere zaano.n par
ye vo rutbaa hai jo shaaho.n ko milaa karataa hai
mai.n to baiThaa huu.N dabaaye huye tuufaano.n ko
tuu mere dil ke dha.Dakane kaa gilaa karataa hai
raat yo.n chaa.Nd ko dekhaa hai nadii me.n raksaa.N
jaise jhuumar tere maathe pe hilaa karataa hai
[raksaa.N=dancing]
kaun kaafir tujhe ilzaam-e-taGaaful degaa
jo bhii karataa hai muhabbat kaa gilaa karataa hai
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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kiyaa hai pyaar jise hamane zindagii kii tarah -
4th July 2015, 03:23 PM
kiyaa hai pyaar jise hamane zindagii kii tarah
kiyaa hai pyaar jise hamane zindagii kii tarah
vo aashanaa bhii milaa hamase ajanabii kii tarah
ba.Daa ke pyaas merii us ne haath chho.D diyaa
vo kar rahaa thaa muravvat bhii dillagii kii tarah
kise Khabar thii ba.Degii kuchh aur taariikii
chhupegaa vo kisii badalii me.n chaa.Ndanii kii tarah
kabhii na sochaa thaa hamane "Qateel" us ke liye
karegaa ham pe sitam vo bhii har kisii kii tarah
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th July 2015, 04:02 PM
mai.n ne puuchaa pahalaa patthar mujh par kaun uThaayegaa
mai.n ne puuchaa pahalaa patthar mujh par kaun uThaayegaa
aa_ii ik aavaaz ki tuu jis kaa mohasin kahalaayegaa
[mohasin = benefactor/patron]
puuchh sake to puuchhe ko_ii ruuTh ke jaane vaalo.n se
roshaniyo.n ko mere ghar kaa rastaa kaun bataayegaa
logo mere saath chalo tum jo kuchh hai vo aage hai
piichhe mu.D kar dekhane vaalaa patthar kaa ho jaayegaa
din me.n ha.Nsakar milane vaale chehare saaf bataate hai.n
ek bhayaanak sapanaa mujh ko saarii raat Daraayegaa
mere baad vafaa kaa dhokaa aur kisii se mat karanaa
gaalii degii duniyaa tujh ko sar meraa jhuk jaayegaa
suukh ga_ii jab in aa.Nkho.n me.n pyaar kii niilii jhiil 'Qateel'
tere dard kaa zard samandar kaahe shor machaayegaa
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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4th July 2015, 04:15 PM
Quote:
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kiyaa hai pyaar jise hamane zindagii kii tarah
kiyaa hai pyaar jise hamane zindagii kii tarah
vo aashanaa bhii milaa hamase ajanabii kii tarah
ba.Daa ke pyaas merii us ne haath chho.D diyaa
vo kar rahaa thaa muravvat bhii dillagii kii tarah
kise Khabar thii ba.Degii kuchh aur taariikii
chhupegaa vo kisii badalii me.n chaa.Ndanii kii tarah
kabhii na sochaa thaa hamane "Qateel" us ke liye
karegaa ham pe sitam vo bhii har kisii kii tarah
Bahut khoob sharing................waaahh!
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th July 2015, 04:17 PM
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guzare dino.n kii yaad barasatii ghaTaa lage
guzare dino.n kii yaad barasatii ghaTaa lage
guzaruu.N jo us galii se to Tha.nDii havaa lage
mehamaan banke aaye kisii roz agar vo shaKhs
us roz bin sajaaye meraa ghar sajaa lage
mai.n is liye manaataa nahii.n vasl kii Khushii
mere raqiib kii na mujhe bad_duaa lage
vo qahat dostii kaa pa.Daa hai ki in dino.n
jo muskuraa ke baat kare aashnaa lage
tark-e-vafaa ke baad ye us kii adaa 'Qateel'
mujhako sataaye ko_ii to us ko buraa lage
One more masterpiece. ........superb sharing di...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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